SwaRon SS | November [Updated P16] 23/11 - Page 8

Amazing Superb Beautiful Excellent written ...
"SABAR KA FAL MITHA HOTA HAI " aur ye tha ...u hv written srly amazing

Amazing...short of words to expresss...thsnkyou for this ss...

awesome update
loved,it!!
well written
update soon
and if possible pm me

Well firstly take a bow _/\_
That was classy stuff. And top notch writing. This was SwaRon at its best. The angst was so so so beautiful. Also kudos to you for writing both the PoVs of Swayam and Sharon perfectly. I wasn't expecting a Sharon PoV when Swayam's PoV had gone so long 😛 But was pleasantly surprised when Sharon's part came. And loved it. <3 This write up made me remind those days where SwaRon would feel so much for each other yet they wouldn't talk it out. Which used to do little and end up hurting them more. And thats how they were. Here on the matter of Swayam going to England. Swayam thought she wouldn't want him there where she took his not coming as a rejection. Sigh. They are messed up and thats their beauty which you have beautifully captured in your writing. And the end couldn't have been more perfect. I always have wanted to Sharon take a positive stance in their relationship. And couldn't have been more happier when she took hold of the fact that he would never stop loving her as much as she couldn't stop loving hin whatever the situation might be. Also a line, where she says he lets get away with everything just out of pure love he has for her. Its her say the final say. I don't know what lies ahead in the SS. But would be glad to read sometime where Swayam claims their relationship and take a positive decision on their relationship. That would be one progress in Swayam I always wanted to see. Also the climax on how they made up couldn't have been more natural. No heavy lines. Just few words and they knew they are back together. The footsie was something I absolutely adored. Can imagine Swayam in that xD and its hilarious xD "He was her home. " - So so true. Beautifully written Propinquity ( what is your name ? :P it's weird calling via username) Waiting for the next one.

This is a comment from a SwaRon fan Riya who read your work, but since she doesn't have an IF account I'm posting her comment on her behalf. :)

There is just so much to say that I dnt knw from where to begin with..I have followed almost all of ur works,b it on Swayum-Sharon/Vrushika-Shantanu or Rukhsaar-Shaan(VM),u know them so well,always manage to strike the right chord.like the line "she can cope with the passion,bt this-this is pure love" for me it sums up Swayum-Sharon..would love to have more from u.yes.I m greedy enough :-P
nw coming to dis SS,November..pehle toh such an unique concept,hats off to u lady.u won the half battle then n there only.u crafted them with so much love and care.very few can manage to write with so much detailing.I was floored by the kiss moment :-P the longing for each other,the homecoming,its one heck of a journey with these three chapters.looking forward to the upcoming novembers.do continue it soon.
P.S. "HE IS HER HOME" cant thank u enough for dis beautiful experience..

This is uptill now the best Swaron SS I've read.

i dont have words for this...

It's beautiful..
hats off ..
It touches heart ... yearning, confusion, undying love, hurt, everything has been brilliantly expressed...
Continue soon.

y this gone why???