Originally posted by: ...CryBaby...
I have read something so beautiful and heart-touching after a LONG LONG time. Please do continue. Would love to read further. =)
Originally posted by: hamsini1234
Amazing very heart touching please do continue
Amazing
The emotions were like a hurricane
Loved it to the core
Update soon
Originally posted by: Candour.
This is an amazing story!
Beautiful characterization!Loved the way you picked up nuances of Sharon and Swayam. To the'T'.Though SwaRon proposal has been aired, it would be a delight to read you version!!Please update soon!! :)
Originally posted by: cutelove
Amazingg portrayal of emotions... Likeee really great wrk donee!!!!! Such a smooth floww wth exotic touchh...plzzz update it soon...wld like to read further.
it is one of the best writeup i had ever read...
it seems really intresting...
swayam confusion,pain,fear...n sharon's pain,frustration was well written
plzzz do continue...plzzz
n pm me tooo
Originally posted by: nida.swaron
its so heart touching
sharon was sharon and swayam was swayam in thisemotions and thoughts were so perfect
Originally posted by: --Destiny--
Another beautiful piece.
So minutely written about every aspect of the plot.
And so highly intense. And emotional.
I loved the minute details in the POVs of both Swayam and Sharon.
Great work there. Looking forward to read the next part.
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