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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

sorry ! double post!

Edited by acceptng_lyf - 9 years ago

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dvrushu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

it is one of the best writeup i had ever read...
it seems really intresting...
swayam confusion,pain,fear...n sharon's pain,frustration was well written
plzzz do continue...plzzz
n pm me tooo

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nida

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

its so heart touching

sharon was sharon and swayam was swayam in this

emotions and thoughts were so perfect

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Destiny_015

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Another beautiful piece.
So minutely written about every aspect of the plot.
And so highly intense. And emotional.
I loved the minute details in the POVs of both Swayam and Sharon.
Great work there. Looking forward to read the next part.

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sanchiswaron

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Posted: 9 years ago

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read something so touching and purly of SwaRon character after long

it was so emotional and yet so it has to be

loved the way you presented Sharon's emotions her thinking that their dependence on each other is becoming their weakness when it should be their strength

simply loved it

would love to read further

update soon 😊

you have deep knowledge of swayam and sharon's character it made it more special

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Khizar Ali

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Posted: 9 years ago

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It is sooo much Swayam and Sharon, perfectly shown

Perfectly described as they should be

and so much hurt and pain is there and described so great

I feel so sad right now

Update soon

Btw you write brilliant

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Sanskriti

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Amazing start

Continue soon and pm me

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Amruta

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Please update I am dying to read the next chapter.😭

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QueenofGreen

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: pooja123456
Do continue and update soon

Thanks!

There's an update coming soon :)

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QueenofGreen

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: Ires011
👏My God!!! This is sooo sooo sooo Awesome... i just Loved it to the core... All the emotions are so well portrayed... so well written... just awesome... even my heart wrenched reading it... 😭
Do update soon... 😊

Thanks!

I'm glad it moved you :)

Hope you'll enjoy the next chapter.

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