I am speechless... it touched my heart.. there's no cheesy line ... everything is perfect about this update.. essence of their characters is maintained.. and I just loved it.. can't wait for November 2017..
Thank you for this wonderful story.. update asap..
And you are a fantabulous writer..
just want to know what is the secret behind your writting
you create magic... each part bring tears in my eyes
loved this part...intense, emotional yet pure.
your writting seems effortless...
i seriously don't know what to say...words are getting less now...
no doubt this SS will always be one of my fav one...
each time i read it...i can feel the same emotions all over again...
hatsoff.
Originally posted by: AnanyaVruShan
its amazing... very well penned... loved it man... plz do write more... u write amazingly... god bless...
Originally posted by: Rhapsody.
You are an amazing writer and this update was beautiful. :O
The hanging pain in the initial part of the chapter stung me so bad and then the final part appeared like a soothing balm. This update has rendered me speechless.It's amazing how you have managed to maintain the essence of the story so well, portray the characters so well.You are indeed an amazing writer. Eager to read more.Cheers.
I m speechless
Dont know what to say..this update was mindblowingYou penned down their emotions so gracefully that i could feel what they went through the whole yearDo write more and as quickly as you can plz😊
Amazing Superb Beautiful Excellent written ...
"SABAR KA FAL MITHA HOTA HAI " aur ye tha ...u hv written srly amazing
Originally posted by: SalmanShahidSm
awesome update
loved,it!!
well written
update soon
and if possible pm me
Originally posted by: --Keechu--
Helllooo😉First of all Im totally lose of words,...I dont know how to appreciate such a brillianceU made me speechless...😳I have read many os, ss ,ff of many couples...But i never read such a brilliant piece of work...U r an amazing writer...👏U created a magic...ur way of story telling , the language u used...All are awesome...The way you portrayed both swayam and sharon are amazing...Im in love with ur this ssYou made me fall in love with swaron once againThanks alot for providing such a beautiful story for us...And ur writing has a flow which has the ability to hold the readers...I was totally in excitement when i read each and every word of this work 😉U made me cry ..i cried in each line of the first and second part..😭U never used so lovely lovely lines still it was so beautiful...The anger, the emotions, the pain, hurt , the feelings, all u penned so beautifully and the pure love they both have was eternal...It was pure bliss to read ...😃Finally i found out words to appreciate ur writing 😆I think I can write more abt this but dont want to mk u bore...😆So stopping here...😛And update soon plzz pm me next timeThen i will again mk u bore 😉 😆One more thing dear ur concept abt November, So different...And i loved it😳Do continue soon...im excitedly waiting😛LoveKeechu 😳
Originally posted by: --Destiny--
Well firstly take a bow _/\_
That was classy stuff. And top notch writing. This was SwaRon at its best. The angst was so so so beautiful. Also kudos to you for writing both the PoVs of Swayam and Sharon perfectly. I wasn't expecting a Sharon PoV when Swayam's PoV had gone so long 😛 But was pleasantly surprised when Sharon's part came. And loved it. <3 This write up made me remind those days where SwaRon would feel so much for each other yet they wouldn't talk it out. Which used to do little and end up hurting them more. And thats how they were. Here on the matter of Swayam going to England. Swayam thought she wouldn't want him there where she took his not coming as a rejection. Sigh. They are messed up and thats their beauty which you have beautifully captured in your writing. And the end couldn't have been more perfect. I always have wanted to Sharon take a positive stance in their relationship. And couldn't have been more happier when she took hold of the fact that he would never stop loving her as much as she couldn't stop loving hin whatever the situation might be. Also a line, where she says he lets get away with everything just out of pure love he has for her. Its her say the final say. I don't know what lies ahead in the SS. But would be glad to read sometime where Swayam claims their relationship and take a positive decision on their relationship. That would be one progress in Swayam I always wanted to see. Also the climax on how they made up couldn't have been more natural. No heavy lines. Just few words and they knew they are back together. The footsie was something I absolutely adored. Can imagine Swayam in that xD and its hilarious xD "He was her home. " - So so true. Beautifully written Propinquity ( what is your name ? :P it's weird calling via username) Waiting for the next one.
Originally posted by: --Destiny--
This is a comment from a SwaRon fan Riya who read your work, but since she doesn't have an IF account I'm posting her comment on her behalf. :)
There is just so much to say that I dnt knw from where to begin with..I have followed almost all of ur works,b it on Swayum-Sharon/Vrushika-Shantanu or Rukhsaar-Shaan(VM),u know them so well,always manage to strike the right chord.like the line "she can cope with the passion,bt this-this is pure love" for me it sums up Swayum-Sharon..would love to have more from u.yes.I m greedy enough :-P
nw coming to dis SS,November..pehle toh such an unique concept,hats off to u lady.u won the half battle then n there only.u crafted them with so much love and care.very few can manage to write with so much detailing.I was floored by the kiss moment :-P the longing for each other,the homecoming,its one heck of a journey with these three chapters.looking forward to the upcoming novembers.do continue it soon.
P.S. "HE IS HER HOME" cant thank u enough for dis beautiful experience..
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