A SWARON OS: SHARON SHE IS MY ANGEL!!!!!!!HAPPY BIRTHDAY CUTEY - Page 4

Keechu Di!
For your first attempt it was amazing. :)
Emotions were described beautifully and the flow was nicely maintained till the end.
SwaRon each other's angels.Ah lovely.
Keep Writing :)

Cheers
Nish

Originally posted by: Nishi.Kss

Keechu Di!
For your first attempt it was amazing. :)
Emotions were described beautifully and the flow was nicely maintained till the end.
SwaRon each other's angels.Ah lovely.
Keep Writing :)

Cheers
Nish

Wow keechu
doesnt look like u r writing 4 the 1st time 👍🏼
A very emotional story
the way u portrayed
swaron's love and care 4 each other was just amazing
awesome os
do write more
thanx 4 the pm
love u 😊

Originally posted by: devilishpam

hey didu

awsome os
luv it

Originally posted by: kreyafan

Wow keechu
doesnt look like u r writing 4 the 1st time 👍🏼
A very emotional story
the way u portrayed
swaron's love and care 4 each other was just amazing
awesome os
do write more
thanx 4 the pm
love u 😊

heya keechu

Originally posted by: athi_vrushan

heya keechu

superb os

really ???? is it ur first try

nice one

a really different concept

swayam loves sharon

she is everything 4 him

his loneliness in lyf was completed

swayam arranged 4 sharonsmoms treatment

all in all a really nic one

thnx 4 dpm

The os is awesome

Originally posted by: avya98

The os is awesome

In love with it. If this is your first os then I'm really looking forward to what is coming our way

Plz keep writing .

wow!!!
it's awesome 😊
seriously diii u r multi talented 😉
loved it 😳