A SWARON OS: SHARON SHE IS MY ANGEL!!!!!!!HAPPY BIRTHDAY CUTEY

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Heyy guys this is my first ever os, and this is a birthday present for my dear crazycutey (diyaswaronholic), she is my dear and dearest friend.

So a very very very happy birthday my dear crazycutey

You are very special to me.

I love u so much more...

I hope it is worth reading...if it is not then I am extremely sorry,

I am sorry for wasting your all precious time...

And haaa I take this concept from a movie.

So please try to read and comment...

It will truly encourage me

So please please try to read and post comment

Love u people.

And a big thanks to anii( flyinghigh_ani ) for helping me to complete this.

And also thanks to shini( shiningshannu),mansi(Mansi98),and my cutey(diyaswaronholic)also...they all helped me in this ...

Love u guys!!!!!!

Once again

Happy birthday my crazzycuteyyy

"Sharon" she is my angel...

"Swayyammm" a girl is yelling at top of her voice from downstairs.

"I m coming cuteyyy"

She is arranging the dining table for breakfast along with her favorite job, cursing swayam under her breath, this time for being late.

Girl: what is this swayam think about him? Being a girl, I also don't take this much time for getting ready ... my buddhu swayam...

She is wearing a black color knee length dress.

After sometime

Swayam came to have breakfast as looking handsome.

Swayam: cuteyyy I just love it when you yell my name in the morning...

He teased her. He love to tease her

Girl: What... (With an Angry face)

She yelled again

Swayam: Oh, my sirennn stop it now

Sharon: swayammm

Yes, she is Sharon,

Swayam's Sharon, cutey, and only his siren

Cutey is Sharon's pet name only used by swayam and it is his patent.

Swayam and Sharon are bff and they were staying together in Swayam's place.

Today is their last day in college. Their graduation party, they are part of a big gang of 12 peoples: Rey, Kriya, Vicky, Neha, Nil, Simmi, Amar, Rinni, Bharath, and Ashi...

They all are dazzlers of the college. Good seniors for the juniors...best dancers of the college, best students and the prankersters.

They do not think twice before ragging a student, keeping in a limit of fun only although and they enjoy their college life. When it comes to study, they are the toppers...

After their small talk, they went to college...

On the way,

Swayam is driving. Sharon is as always blabbering, even she do not know what she is saying...

He is smiling continuously thinking about something but she thought him smiling because of her blabbering...but only he know what he is thinking...

Swayam's thoughts:

You know Sharon what today is.

Today is more special to me than my own birthday, today is the best and along with worst day of my life.

When I lost everything, that was precious to me, and god give me a thing that become most precious to me, and it was you sharon, god's gift, the angel that god send for me.

I got you as my bff, as my family and as my everything. I do not know what you mean to me exactly. I cannot even think a second without you, my life will be worst without you.

10 years ago on this same day mom and dad disown me it was only you, who was there with me on my worst days. It is the only thing that I did not share with you until now. You were with me in all my worst times. You give me the love that I did not get from my parents, they always think about their money and reputation...

I am scared Sharon if you get to know that what will be your reaction?

I scared of loosing you Sharon;

I cannot lose one more thing that is very valuable to me.

I cannot bear your indifference. I used to say that my parents are no more,

but they are alive, I do not know even they remember me...I am sure they do not.

Swayams thoughts brocks when sharon yelled again..

Sharon: swayammm...

Where are we going? Stop the carrr...the college passed

He stopped the car suddenly...

Sharon: where are you lost? Is there any problem?

Swayam :( self-thought): it is only you Sharon who understands me this much

Swayam: no cutey I was thinking about the party. Let us go back

They reached college. Their party went smoothly they had a lot of fun...

Swayam and Sharon returned home... After some time swayam comes to Sharon's room. It was locked from inside, so he knocked. A sleepy Sharon opens the door.

Her sleep went away by the look of his face.

It looked as much as worried and happy too.

Sharon: What happened swayam? Is everything ok?

Swayam: Sharon we going out, so get ready soon. I want to share you something important.

In addition, he went to get ready.

Sharon has thought:

He disturbed from the morning, I noticed it swayam, and even you did not do more fun in the party. I have to find it... let us get ready

In the car, again swayam do not speak much he only concentrates on his driving...

When they reach out of the city, Sharon loses her control and asked.

Sharon: where are we going swayam?

Swayam: It is a surprise cutey

That was his replay and he said it with a calm face, it was expressionless. She decided to keep quite. She trusted him more than she trusted herself.

They reached a lonely place there was a big building...with a big garden lots of colorful flowers, which added the beauty of the place.

They both were down from the car and swayam headed inside the building.

She followed him quietly.

That was a hospital.

Sharon's mind was full of unanswered questions

What happened to swayam?

Why he brought me here?

Why he is this serious?

Why he is not smiling? Etc

This time swayam brocks Sharon's thoughts and said

Swayam: Cutey we are here to meet an important person of your life...I did not do anything intentionally... if you can, forgive me...

Sharon become quit, she don't know what to do, what is going to happen,

for whom she is here.

Swayam put his hand on her shoulder and signaled her to go inside a room.

She without doubt followed his order and went inside the room.

The room was less lighted a woman of late forties lying on the bed. She is sleeping. Her face is glowing with an unknown happiness...

Sharon moved towards the bed and tried to touch her. Before her hand touch the woman she turned back and look at swayam, he was standing there calm minded with a fear, fear to lose her but he have to do this. He cannot lie to her anymore. She had the right to know about her mother...to meet her mother.

He signaled again to Sharon to call the woman. Then she called.

Sharon's mom's face become like a star it show an unexplainable shine.

Sharon helped her to sit properly. Mom said to Sharon to sit near her with her eye movement. She sat near her. He left the two persons there to solve their problems and come outside of the room and went back to his thoughts:

After a long three hour, he went back to the room and saw the two important persons of his life sleeping with a smile. He also smiled. Moreover, he called Sharon without disturbing mom.

They both left the hospital.

On the way, back Sharon was in thoughts.

After sometime Sharon said to stop the car.

They came out of the car. Sky full of stars, moon is providing a good company for the stars.

They sat on the bonnet of the car. After an awkward silence she brocks it.

Sharon: I just met my mom na?

"Hmmm"

That was his replay.

Sharon: Now I understand what was there in your eyes from morning

Swayam: Cutey I want to share you everything.

Sharon: And I want to know swayam.

Swayam: It was a story of two children, one boy and a girl.

This was enough for Sharon to understand that she is going to face the reality of her life. She turned toward him and look in to his eyes there is something, which is guilty for sure.

He takes her hand in his, pressed it slightly, he need a support, and that only his cutey can provide.

Swayam: Firstly, I want to confess that I lied to you about my parents.

They may be alive.

He looks in to Sharon's eyes to know that what she is thinking,

However, he failed she does not show any expression. So he continues.

Swayam: Today is a special day for me Sharon, 10 years ago on this day, my parents disown me and god gave me one angel, it was you my cutey.

That day mom dad came to meet me after three years but not together they were with their own partners. In addition, said that they do not want me in their life, they do not need their one and only son. It Brock me totally.

They give me a huge bank balance and one day, to think that do I need their money' and left the place. Firstly, I thought to deny them to take their money but one person makes me to use them.

And it was you...

Sharon spoke after some time.

Sharon: Me how?

Swayam: yes cutey it was you...

After my parents left, I just went outside for walk with my caretaker. He continuously tries to make me accept the offer, as he knows that money was the need.

However, I do not agree. With determination to reject their offer, I went back to home.

On the way, we saw an accident. Kaka and I take them to hospital after sometime doctor said that the woman is in coma now and the little girl loses her memory.

I do not know what was that, I felt an attraction toward them; I cannot leave them like that. Doctor said that they need money to cure them so I decided to take care of them and take my parents offer.

Some days passed my parents brocks all the threads with me.

Then I bring that girl to my house and sent the woman to a good hospital to her treatment.

Swayam again pressed Sharon's hand and said

Swayam: Sharon I know that, I said you; you are my family friend and our parents died together. I did not do anything intentionally.

I do a crime that I kept u away from your mom. It was my selfishness cutey I was scared to lose another precious thing in my life. I was living in this guilty till now I hope you forgive me.

He look at her eyes to read her mind but now this is most impossible thing for him.

Sharon: I want to go home

This is all she said, and he obeyed her,

They went home.

Sharon has thought

In the car

I know swayam what u feeling now. You are guilty for lying to me, but I am your Sharon if I cannot forgive you then who can.

When u lying I do not have, any clue that what you are saying is not the right, but I always kept that in mind.

Even I do not know what you to me. You are very precious to me, you are not my bff, it something more than that but I do not have words to explain it to u.

Even I know swayam that you also think like me.

You always there for me in my all happiness and sadness, you stand like a pillar and support me until now, and I want this support when I take my last breath.

I never allow you to lose me even I cannot bear that. It wills death of me.

From today morning, I noticed something is disturbing you but I never expect something like this come out.

After a long time they reached home. He tried to talk to her but she did not allow and said we will talk tomorrow. They retired to their rooms.

Swayam (self-thoughts): now I am getting more scared Sharon. You are not talking to me anything.

After changing, Sharon lay on her bed with a mind to take a nap but sleep is more away from her today so she again went to her own world.

Her thoughts:

When we reach hospital, I do not know that we are there for my mom.

Then I went near her she showed a different kind of affection which is very new to me. She did not spoke to me anything but the happiness she showed with a single look of me that was enough for me to understand what she is to me.

Flashback: As Sharon's thoughts (her POV)

In the room after swayam left

I called mom, and she opened her eyes, there was an explainable happiness for meeting a person, who she is waiting for long years.

She signaled me to sit near her, and I did the same.

There was a long silence but that was not an awkward one.

She was holding my hand and I am doing the same.

After the long silence

Sharon: I am feeling a motherly touch now.

Sharon do not know why she said that, but the reply came as she wanted,

Her mom nodded slightly with a beautiful smile,

From that moment, there was only mother and daughter.

Swayam is also in the same condition his mind is not allowing him to sleep.

After a long time they both went to sleep unknown to each other what the other one is feeling. In addition, what is going to happen between them, what will be the relation from tomorrow they share? Moreover, what is going to come in their life is will be sadness or happiness.

Next morning

"It will be a special day for them "this is what Sharon thought about today.

"May be it will be a worst day for them" this is what swayam thought about today.

As usual, Sharon starts her day by preparing food for them. It shows, as this is a usual day for her. They had their breakfast. Both of them tried to behave normal to their level best.

In Swayam's rooms

Sharon came and said" I am ready to talk to you"

They went to the garden and sit there in the lawn.

Sharon: Is there anything that u want to share, which u could not do yesterday.

Swayam: No, I am waiting for Ur words.

Sharon: Hmm swayam firstly do not ever thing that I am gona leave you. That will never happen until my last breath.

With this line, she receives a deadly glare from him. However, she does not care and continue.

He is happy that she will be there for him.

Sharon: I never expect that I will get an opportunity to meet my mom.

In addition, because of you I got that lovely feeling.

Swayam: Now I want to ask u one thing, how u get to know that she is Ur mom?

I did not tell u anything and I am sure even she did not.

She chuckled on this and said

Sharon: If a child is far away from her mother for many long years, and one day they get a chance to meet, there is no need of words. They can talk through their heart and eyes. This is what exactly happened there. We talked about many things. We become inseparable. In addition, a big thanks swayam to give what I always craved.

This increase Swayam's guilt.

Swayam: I am sorry Sharon I was selfish. I was scared of loosing you. I kept you away from your happiness. I do not understand what the feeling of loved by parents because I did not get a chance to experience it.

Sharon just hugged him tightly and said in a soothing voice.

Sharon: From now you will get that feeling of loved by a mother, my mom will love us equally.

Swayam: Really? Will she do?

Sharon Brock the hug. His eyes are full of tears even she is crying. They wiped each other's tears.

She cupped his face and said

Sharon: Yes swayam even I think she will love you more than me. No, she does love you more than me

He gets confused with this line.

Understanding his confusion she continue

Sharon: you are the person, because she gets her daughter back safely. You are the person who stands with her daughter on her bad times. You the person who provide the help, shelter, care, affection, love that she could not able to give her child.

You are an angel for two peoples whom were once waste to the world.

You help her in her treatment, you help her daughter then how could she not able to love you. I saw her love for you in her eyes yesterday when I talk to her about you.

You are an angel for us swayam, you are my "angel"

Tears not stopping. It is flowing continuously. both of them not able to bear the tears in others eyes, so that He pull her in a tight hug and said in a cracking voice.

Swayam: No Sharon... it is not me... it is you; you are an angel..., god's favorite angel ...that he send for me. I am sorry, please... forgiven...me for what I did throughout... these years...

Sharon hugged him more tightly and said

Sharon: I already forgave u swayam, how could I not able to forgive my angel.

Swayam: Two days before I got a call from the hospital and they said that mom is fine now but she cannot talk, but in a month, she will be perfectly all right.

They are still standing in each other's arms. They do not talk more. They are feeling a new sensation that they never felt before. As time passes their hug, become passionate and tight.

Don't know why Swayam did that he slightly kisses her neck. She shivered at the slight touch of his lips. She hugs him more tightly. They don't know what they feeling but both of them did not want to leave each other. He wants to worship her with his touch more/ and she want to be worshiped by his touch more.

He again kissed her neck.

At this time, she came out of the feeling and Brock the hug but they did not leave each other's arms. They look in to others eyes to know what is the other one's feeling, is it the same what I am feeling.

They saw an unknown calmness an unknown happiness and unknown joy in their eyes.

With this Sharon take next step, she kissed him in his jawline.

Now he lose his control with a new determination he kissed her lips passionately.

As she was waiting for this, she just kissed him back without a second thought.

After some time them Brock the kiss and a smile appeared on his face, a blush come to her cheeks.

They stared at each other and said together something, which took their breaths away... they become like, really they said that.

Swaron: I LOVE YOU...

They felt the world stop there, their happiness was boundless. Now they understand what the other one is for them.

He pulled her in another passionate kiss, this time with more passion then the last one, because now they know that "they belong to each other..."

"Swayam as Sharon's "

"And Sharon as Swayam's"

END

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Posted: 10 years ago
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An os for me?!
Thank u sooo much didu
its sooo good
wow m feeling so special today
Loves d os!!
Already commented before :p
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yayy so finally u posted it👏

1st of all congo fr ur 1st work😃

fr 1st time it was more then awesome👏

n coming to the OS😊

WOW👏

awesome OS👏

Loved it❤️

Beyond awesome😃

nothing can be good then this OS👏

where were u hidding ur this talent😲

I seriously didnt knew that u write so well😲

lucky diya😊

I have readen it 2nd time😃

bt still it was new to read it😃

i love it reading both the time😃

n the name of the OS itself gave a bliss😃

mind u write one OS for me also on my b'day😡

keep writing more n more😊

u knw now u have taken place in my favourite writers list😃

i wont wonder that 1 day ur writing would be most famous😃

Lots of love

Mansi😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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first of all happy birthday diyu!!!!
she is truely a doll


coming to the update


you didn't have to thank me!!!
you are really very creative
and i absolutely loved the os..
although i have read this before still
i read it again n i absolutely loved it...

since its a diya special i wont blabber
n spoil the thread
lets keep this special for her.!!!!!!

keechu di you are really fav...keep writing more

lots n lots of love
your sissy
aniii
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Posted: 10 years ago
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congo for your first os...

really nice long os it is dear...

swaron are truelly angels..

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HEYYA 😃
first of all m soo glad u finally posted the os
congo meri jaan m soo happy for you
and haan you need not me thanking me
idiot😛

now about the os
for the first tym i would say you did a fab job
the concept was really nyc

i liked the way swayam and sharon cared about each other
they were the true soulmates
the lil things they did all dat gave a special place to their relation
the fear of swayam loosing sharon was written well
sharon and her mother loved the bond
they were the true angles for each other
all in all a very nycly portrayed os
do write more
you ve all the scope to improve
love you

shini

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: diyaswaronholic

An os for me?!
Thank u sooo much didu
its sooo good
wow m feeling so special today
Loves d os!!
Already commented before :p


thanku so much my cutey...🤗
love u
Edited by keechu91 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mansi98

yayy so finally u posted it👏

1st of all congo fr ur 1st work😃

fr 1st time it was more then awesome👏

n coming to the OS😊

WOW👏

awesome OS👏

Loved it❤️

Beyond awesome😃

nothing can be good then this OS👏

where were u hidding ur this talent😲

I seriously didnt knew that u write so well😲

lucky diya😊

I have readen it 2nd time😃

bt still it was new to read it😃

i love it reading both the time😃

n the name of the OS itself gave a bliss😃

mind u write one OS for me also on my b'day😡

keep writing more n more😊

u knw now u have taken place in my favourite writers list😃

i wont wonder that 1 day ur writing would be most famous😃

Lots of love

Mansi😊


thanku mansi..
and i will try to write one for ur b'day too
love u
Edited by keechu91 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: flyinghigh_ani

first of all happy birthday diyu!!!!

she is truely a doll


coming to the update


you didn't have to thank me!!!
you are really very creative
and i absolutely loved the os..
although i have read this before still
i read it again n i absolutely loved it...

since its a diya special i wont blabber
n spoil the thread
lets keep this special for her.!!!!!!

keechu di you are really fav...keep writing more

lots n lots of love
your sissy
aniii


thanku my dear anni sis...
love u
Edited by keechu91 - 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rockingbhardwaj

congo for your first os...

really nice long os it is dear...

swaron are truelly angels..


thanku so much...
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