SWARON FF:- 'Dont you dare! Swayam Sirf Mera Hai, Sirf MERA!' - Page 5

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@Incorrect

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

heyya

nyc concept a lil confusing too

waiting to read more

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Mansi

@Mansi98

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

wat an update😲

tarif nai kar rahi hu😆

i seriously didnt get anything in this update😕

kya tha ye sab😕

i really wana kill u😡

mujhe to kuch bhi samajh nai aya😡

huf😡

hope next chapter mai kuch to pata chale😊

agar next chapter bhi itna confusing raha na to tu gai😡

update soon😡

lots of anger😡

Mansi😡

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--Ecstasy--

@--Ecstasy--

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Wen u startd this fiction,, it appealled me,, it was amazing...I loved the previous part..!! 😊
But this update is bit confusing...!! 😕
Hope further update vil b as awwesum as always..!! 😊
And mayb in further update all confusion vil get cleared.. 😛
Looking forward for next update..!! 😊
Love ya.. Thanks for the PM..!! 😃

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Shailja

@Kshailja

Navigator

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Posted: 10 years ago

#44

Yaar it's very confusing...😕

Sharon=Reyana??? How???

Plss Update soon so that confusion door ho...

Update asap...

Thanx fr pm...👍🏼

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anubhutijain

@anubhutijain

Beginner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#45

Heyaaa...confusing hai yaar ...sbaron...reyna?? ...do update fast n pls pmmm me

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#46

Its a bit confusing though. At the moment all I can say is.. I am reading and trying to comprehend.

A request, can you please use some other font color. Red is quite bright, and my eyes already strained. I wouldn't want to adorn that geek look with any of the specs. :D

Anyways. I did read it. Though I keep my comments to myself until I can actually understand this.

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Anindita Ghosh

@flyinghigh_ani

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#47

OH MY LORD DIYU!!!!!

WHAT THE HELL WAS THIS~!!!!

LEFT ME TOTALLY SPEECHLESS...

okay before i start with how awesum the story is😆😆😆

i am so so so very sorry dear!!!!

for this super late comment!!!!!

sorry kaan pakar ke...

now coming to the story!!!!!!

I SO AM IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY!!!!

PLS MERI BEHEN...

jaldi se bol na ye kya ho raha hai...sharon , rehna????

m so confused!!!!!!!!!

*scratching and banging my head on a wall*

the writing was so damn good...

so damn good diyu...

m proud of u n yeah obviously

i will start classes from you!!!😃

i love u for this awesum story.!!!!!

loads n loads of love

ani didu!!!

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Nishi

@.nerfherder

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Posted: 9 years ago

#48

Me Confused :S
and me going to kill you. :)
What do you eat Diya, i am afraid. o_O
I have mixed emotions regarding this update.
Sharon-Reyna?
Well eager to read next and clear the confusion. :)
Less suspense is not a crime baby! :P

Cheers
Nishi.

P.S.^^Shenz, I wear specs -_-!

Edited by Nishi.Kss - 9 years ago

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Chitra.

@..MiStLeToE..

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#49

I m confused :s
Unwind the mystery girl :P
Its too much to take in one update!
Sharon-Reyna?????
What is exactly going on????
Update soon and please itne suspense k sth hum becharo pr zulm mat karo :P

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Fatima

@HSFA

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Posted: 9 years ago

#50

This FF seems really interesting. You managed to bring in a layer of mystery that is very well received on the other end.

Good job done and continue soon

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