SWARON FF:- 'Dont you dare! Swayam Sirf Mera Hai, Sirf MERA!' - Page 2

bhavika

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Amazing start ..cnt wait to read more update soon...

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AMAR_LOVE

@AMAR_LOVE

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

it looks interesting...plz continue soon and pm me

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Vishi-

@Vishi-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Diyu 🤗
Another story? 👍🏼
1st chappy 😲
Swayam surrounded by mountain of pain 😔
whats wrong with Sharon? 😲
Suspense Queen next part jaldi update kar 😛
As always well written 👍🏼

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Anindita Ghosh

@flyinghigh_ani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

diyu!!!!!!

my sis...sorry for for being late

d3 dakh rahi thi!!!

waise new story...

me jumping jhapak jumpak jumpak...

yaaayyy

party tym!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

waise this is really interesting n abhi mujhe pm kar

in details kya hone wala hai...

varna me getting angry!!!!!😡😡

the pic u used in character sktch of swayam...

my favourite

hayyyeee1!!!!! m officially dead...

how can someone be so adoring n sweet!!!!

iss janam mein to swayam sharon ka ho gaya

par next janam mein mere lie booked hai!!!!

i loved the concept...

cold sharon😕...

adoring swayam😳

n irritating ruhi!!!!!!!!!!😡...

it was too good!!!!👏👏

loved it...

jhappi for this...

n yeah continue sooon

m waiting!!!

loads of love

ani didu

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rosy kohli

@rosyrkohli

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Res

Unresin ...

Diyu anothr rite up from ur side

N how beautifully u wrote

The whole chap was fantastically presented

Swayam is heartbroken becoz sharon left him

N wat a contrast sharon is back to her

Diva mode which is definitely the high pt here

I loved kr n swayam bond

Hope tat sharon n swayam will find a

Way back to each other

Do update soon diyu 😛😛

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

awesomee start😊

continue soonish😳

and ruhi rey's sis😔

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srinidhi94

@srinidhi94

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Posted: 10 years ago

#17

you have started another ff...and i still have so many to catch up...

the concept is interesting... and the update is very nice...loved reading it...

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Trisha paul

@trisha19

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Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Awsome concept!!

pls continue soon and do pm me

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--Ecstasy--

@--Ecstasy--

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Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Woah...!!! Yet another beautifull piece of writing by you... Amazing start... Update soon... !! 😃

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PRACHI

@prachi_vrushan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#20

ruhi??? she is always a vamp she was swayam's gf I didn't like it swayam can't b anyone's rather than sharon in his dream too n u made that chuhi his gf whatever now what's wrong with Sharon?? u n u r drama's update soon

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