Swaron FF 'Hamesha.... till the End' Part 7 on pg 11 - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31
aswom update...

raz kholo jaldi..

do update soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
Lovely update!!
hope sharon will understand swayam soon...
pls update soon..thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
This is going great..

Loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
very well written

loving the story

hope you will reveal the secret soon

dont take eternity to update the next chapter
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
Just read the whole parts...
Loved the story...
Plzz pm when u update next time...
And its really interesting ..
Plzz do continue soon...
Waiting to read the secret

~Keechu
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
wow such a awesome story im loving it update soon n plz do pm m hayee swaron love eachother so much hope so sharon knw d truth soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37

Part 5

Next Morning

Swayam entered his room and saw Sharon trying to get off the bed.

Swayam: tumhe uthne ki zarurat nahi hai.. mene tumhara breakfast yahin manga diya hai.

Sharon: I m feeling better now.

Swayam: but u still need rest.

Sharon: Mujhe apne friends k saath breakfast karna hai.

Swayam: f9..

He was going to hold her in arms...

Sharon: Swayam, mujhe tumhari shakal nahi dekhni hai...

Swayam: In that case Sharon..., tum meri pith dekho!

Before she could understand anything, he kept her hands round his neck and holds her up by his back.

He gets her down like this. Friends see this. They laugh teasingly. Sharon feels uncomforting and Swayam smiles.

Kriya: how r u feeling now?

Sharon: better.

Suddenly swayam's phone rings.

Swaym: hello! Oh yes. What today? But.. no no, not at all that's a great news. I'll be there. Ok. Thnx. Bye!

He puts his phn down and looks at friends. Rey raises up his eyebrows.

Swayam: Sorry guys...

Simmi: sorry for what?

Swayam: it's a imp. Meeting, I have to leave for London today only!

Nil: what? But yaar...

Kriya: guys, work comes first! Swayam, come back soon.

Swayam: as soon as I can. Thank u so much.

Sharon: tumhara bag packed hai.

Swayam smiles and goes to room. Kriyaansh follow.

Swayam opens the cupboard and gets out the bad. Puts some files in t.

Rey: Swayam.. tune 1 baar b bag check nahi kya?>

Swayam: why should i? Sharon ne pack kia hai... sab sahi hoga.

Kriya: tum dono ki yeh relationship hamari toh samajhme nahi aata.. ek taraf ek dusre se itna ladte ho. Aur dusri taraf ek dusre par blind believe?

Swayam: tum samjhogi b nahi... kyun ki aaj tak iss rishte ko main b nahi samajhpaya hun.

Rey: swayam... jab tum dono ek dusre se itna pyar karte ho.. toh khatam kyun nahi kar dete yeh sab?

Swayam: haan re.. sayad sab kuch khatam karne ka waqt aa gaya hai.

Kriya: what do u mean?

Swaym: nothing. I m getting late. Lets go.

Downstairs

Rinni: Sharon, tumhe pehle se pata tha k swayam landon jaa rha hai?

Sharon: nahi toh...!

Simmi: phir tumne bag kyun pack kiya?

Sharon: wo actually unka program aise hi sudden ban jata hai.. so its my duty...

The trio comes.

Vicky: lo.. aa gaye.

Swayam: ok guys.. main chalta hun.. kal sham taka a jaunga..

Everyone greets him luck.

Sharon: (in mind)[ looking in his eyes] all the best swayam, I hope tumhari yeh deal tumhari life ko aur success kare.

Swayam: (in mind)[looking in her eyes]: aaj main apne life ki sabse badi deal karne jaa raha hun sharon.. yeh deal sab kuch change kar dega... yeh deal hum dono ki life badal kar rakh dega...!

To be continued


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Love,

Shirisha😊

Edited by ShirishaTeddy - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
Update...after soo long...thankyou for this... Take ur tym but never discontinue this work...
Lovely update...but it ws short...i hope the deal isnt abt swaron relatinship...waiting for the nxt part..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
Read all the parts
its awesome do continue soon...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
Itne time baad update kiya nd wo b small one
But I loved it as usual..
What is he gonna do??
Hope everything is gonna fine soon

Update soon
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