Swaron FF 'Hamesha.... till the End' Part 7 on pg 11 - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
#11
Awesome update
U stoped In cliff range...
Do continue soon...
Can't wait to read futher
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
loved the update..

3 yrs of marrige...
bt still they are swayam n sharon not swaron...

I loved it..the way sharon shut the mouth of those ladies..

the readon must be something big..

update soon...
n do pm me plz
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
well its interesting... wanna know what hpnd in past.???
we wrote well.. keep writing...
& update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14

Hey, if it is okay with you, may I pm this story to my buddy list?

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Posted: 9 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: Khizar_SWARON

Hey, if it is okay with you, may I pm this story to my buddy list?



ya, its ok, i dont mind!!! u can!๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16

Part 2: I will wait, Till the End...


Next morning Swaron were in Dining Table when the bell ringed. Servant opened the door and they were just surprised to see their friends. They came to know that they wre supposed to give surprise on the anniversary but their flight was delayed. They came in and got freshened up. After sometime they went on gossiping. Simmi got all the girls in one room and thre, nilesh got all the boys in another.

Kriya: Sharon, come on, start.

Sharon: but what?

Simmi: are, tumhari love story buddhhu. Isliye toh meeting bulai hai.

Sharon: par...

Rinni: par var kuch nahi... Chalo start karo.

Sharon:thik hai. Start se start kar ti hun. Jab maine unhe pehli baar dekha tha. Main school me corridor par walk kar rahi thi, aur achanak, kisine ne mujhe ghuma kar niche gira diya. aur mere upar aa gaya. I was, lost in his eyes. And suddenly, apne skul ka bada sa bell gir gaya. Then I realized, usne mujhe bacha liya warna main toh bell k niche hi aa jaati. Main uski aankhon me kho gayi, dil me butterfly waali feeling ho rahi thi. I crushed on him. My first attraction, my first crush!

Boys

Swayam: Bell gira, toh pure school mw panic fail gaya. Sab yahan wahan bhag rahe the. Lekin main, I not just only fell upon her, but also fell for her. Fell in her love. Par isse pehle ki koi hume kuchal de, we got up. Lekin bhag daud me, hum bichad gaye. Edhar udhar ankh ghumayi... then u know what? Then happened the most beautiful moment of my life, jab wo mujhe dikhi, she was too looking at me! Affairs toh bahut hue, par pyar, pyar shayad pehli baar hua tha. My first feeling, my first love!

Then he looked at guys, they were looking at him keeping their hand on their cheeks.

Swayam: Guys, tum log mujhe aise kyun dekh rahe ho?

Nil: itna pyar karta hai tu usse?

Swayam: mm.. sayad.

Vicky: aur bata, Shaadi k baad sab thik...

Swayam: kuch b thik nahi hua hai Vicky, main aaj b uske intazaar main hoon. Paas rehkar b aaj b hum door hain.

Rey: u mean Sharon abtak tujhse naraaz hai?

Swayam: Haan.

Rey: kyun zee raha hai aisi zindagi? Kyun nahi kar deta use iss rishte se aazaad?

Swayam: Nahi kar sakta. Mere uss ek decision ne sabkuch barbaad kar diya, Sharon ne padhai chod di, Shaadi ki, aur apna desh chodkar yahan aa gayi, London, sirf mere liye, just coz, I m her husband. Aur upar se, uske mom dad b nahi rahe, jayegi kahan? Issliye main chahkar b use nahi kar sakta aazaad!

Rey : Kab tak intazaar karega Swayam?

Swayam: Hamesha, till the End...


m little busy in studies so got how much i could..


love

Shirisha๐Ÿ˜Š

Edited by ShirishaTeddy - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
lovely update..
swaron love story started at School..
wah
hamesha till the end..
hope this wait end soon..

Edited by Rockingbhardwaj - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
Interesting concept...!!
Hope their wait come to an end...
So write more...๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
aswom update loved it .. but bhut short ha... do update soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
It was a pure bliss update
but still it is short but then the comment is going to be short too :D
So I liked Swayam's part better
it was well described and having more feelings
nice update and do it soon, this time I mean it ๐Ÿ˜ˆ
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