KR and SS FF Betrayal... But Still I Love You Part 8 on pg 20 - Page 9

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Posted: 8 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: love-kreya

Loved it
Waiting for nxt update
I hope kriyaansh aur swaron ek ho jaaye



thank you, updating in a while.. i hope the same..๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 8 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: VReSHna

read it all in a go!!!

Its super awesome!!!
so loved it!!!
cant wait to read more :)
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thank u di... ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 8 years ago
#83


Part 6

Rey opened his bag and found his and kriya's selfie clicked pic in it. He held it and recalled.

Flash Back

Rey and kriya were returning from the valentine party. Though they were not officially couples, went together. Rey came to drop her and they came out of the car.

Kriya: ah.. rey, close ur eyes.

Rey: what? But why?

Kriya: please rey, come on.

Rey: Ok fine.

He closed.

Kriya: rey, i... ah..

Rey: Come on kriya, aisi b kya baat hai jot um itni nervous ho rhiho. Bolo.

Kriya took a deep breath.

Kriya: Rey, jabse maine pyar ko jana hai, aapko samjha hai, maine sirf aapse pyaar kiya hai. Main janti hun k hamari friendship fight se suru hui thi, par, wo kaise love me badal gayi, mujhe patahi nahi chala.

She pecked on his cheek. And he opened his eyes.

Kriya: . I love u rey, I love u a lot. Main nahi janti aap mere bare me kya feel karte ho, par maine feel kia hai k aap b mujhe... u too like me. Issliye main aaj confident k saat keh rhi hun. I loveu, more than my life!

They kept looking in each other's eyes. Rey came forward and cupped his face planting a soft kiss on her forehead.

Rey: mene itna cute proposal aaj tak nahi dekha.

She blushed.

Rey: I love you. They hugged.

Kriya: Iss baat pe ek selfie toh banti hai...

Present

Rey kept looking at the pic when Swayam comes.

Swayam: rey, kya soch raha hai.

Rey: kuch nahi yaar, bus purani yaadien tazaa ho gayi...

Swayam saw kriyaansh pic. He recalled the same place.

Flash Back

Swayam reached the place and saw Sharon waiting for him.

Swayam: Sharon..

Sharon: Swayam, mujhe tumhe kuch batana hai.

Swayam: Mujhe b...

Sharon: Pehle main..

Swayam: Nahi, pehle main, kyun k abhi nahi toh kabhi nahi.

Sharon: Sab thik hai na?

Swayam: Kuch mangu toh dogi?

Sharon: aaj tak kabhi mana kiya hai?

Swayam: Sharon... Bhool Jao mujhe. Hamara saath yahin tak tha/"

Sharon: swayam tum kya bol rahe ho?

Swayam: main janta hun tumhare liye aasan nahi hai par main kisi aur se shaadi kar rha hun Sharon. Mujhe aazad kar do.

Sharon: Shaadi? Tum aisa nahi kar sakte..

Swayam: chali jao meri zindagi se, hamesha k liye.

Sharon: Maine aaj tak tumhari har baat maani, aur tumne mere saath yeh kiya? Swayam agar tumhe mera dil todna hi tha, girl friend balni ni, nahi nibha sakte the mera saat, toh kyun dikhaye aise sapne jo pure nahi ho sakte? Kyun kiya shaadi ka waada? Kyun?

Swayam: Sharon I know its not easy, but u can try atleast.

Sharon: Swayam main...

Swayam: Main Bangalore jaa raha hun, yeh hamari aakhri mulakaat hai Sharon, Take care.

He leaves crying.

Sharon: main tumhe kabhi maaf nahi karungi Swayam, Kabhi nahi!

Present

Rey: Swayam, Kya hua?

Swayam: Kuch nahi...

Rey: Acha sun, Main kriya aur uski mom ko le kar bahar jaa raha hun. Koi professional get together me. Acha time hai, Sharon se baat kar ok?

Swayam: but rey..

Rey: Swayam, aisa chance phir nahi milega, go.

Swayam went to sharon's room. She was reading a book with a mug of coffee. She saw him coming. They had eyelock but somehow she managed herself and went to close the door. He stopped her by holding it.

Swayam: Mujhe tumse baat karni hai...

Sharon: Mujhe nahi karni...

Swayam(coming in): par kyun? Tum b toh mere bina nahi reh sakti thin a? toh ab kyun...

Sharon: Jab jante hi ho toh kyun kiya 2 saal tak khudse door?

Party

Kriya moved rey dragging his collar from backside.

Rey: what?

Kriya: gaadi ki chaabi!

Rey: Is everything ok?

Kriya: car keys!

Rey: Kriya baat kya hai?

Kriya: mujhe ghar jana hai!

Rey: par itni jaldi..

Kriya: Main apni behen ko tumhare bhai k saath akele chodne ka risk nahi le sakti.

Rey: What do u mean by risk nahi le sakti? Mera bhai koi devil nahi hai jo tumhari behen ko khaa jayega!

Kriya: tum logon ko devil b kehna devils ki insult hogi!

Rey held her shoulder and pinned her against the car.

Kriya: jaane do mujhe.

Rey: Aaj nahi!

Kriya: reyaansh leave me!

Rey: ek baar meri baat toh sun lo!

Kriya: Kya chahiye apko?

Rey: tum! Mujhe meri kriya wapas chahiye!

Kriya: aapki kriya? Wahi kriya jo married material nahi thi?

He loosens his hold.

Kriya: kyun kar rahe aap aisa? Jab chale hi gaye the mujhe chod k, toh kyun aaye wapas? Kyun nahi chale jaate meri life se?

Rey: jee payogi mere bina?

Kriya: nahi reh sakti thi, lekin aap hi ne sikha diya.

Rey: kriya, kriya look I sorry, par kya hum ek nayi surwat nahi kar sakte? 9cups her face0 Tum, tum jo kahogi main karunga. Bolo main kya karun, tumhe wapas pane kliye mai kuch b kar sakta hun!

Kriya: kuch b kar sakte ho? Toh thik hai, lauta do wo din, jo maine aansuyon k saath guzare hain. Wo do saal jo meri behen ne bina smile k bitai hai. Uss time k aansu poch do, meri behen ki wo muskurahat lauta do. Kar sakte ho itna mere liye? Kya aap mere liye yeh kar sakte ho Reyaansh?

He remains silent.

Kriya: nahi hai na koi zawaab? Nahi kar sakte na yeh? Reyaansh aapko kriya wapas tabhi milegi, jab aap use wo time lauta doge, jo usne apki yaad me guzare hain. And that's, My promise!

Swaron

Sharon: kyun rakha 2 saal khudse door? Kya mere pyar me koi kami swayam? Nahut zyada expect kar rahi thi main tumse? Ya phir, main koi puppet thi?

Swayam: nahi Sharon, badluck mera tha, k tumhe paa kar b nahi paa sakaa. Bas ek baar mujhe maaf kar do, I m sorry, ek last chance de do Sharon plz..

Sharon: (chuckles): chance maine tumhe uncountable diye hain swayam, par har baar tumhe mera trust ka misuse kiya, mere love ki insult ki. Aaj mere pass tumhe dene k liye maafi b nahi hai!

Swayam: Sharon tum try toh kar sakti ho..

Sharon: try, phir se dhoka khane k liye?

Swayam: kya meri aankhon me dekh kar tumhe lagta b hai k main...

Sharon: tumhari aankhon par se mera bharosha uth chukka hai swayam, ab na toh ankhon par vishwaas hota hai, aur na baton par.

Swayam: I m sorry Sharon!

Sharon: Swayam tum thak nahi jaate, baar baar galti kar k sorry bolte hue? Tum main thodi b self respect nahi hai? Itni insult hone k baad b tum...

Swayam: tum itni rude kabse ho gayi? Tum meri Sharon nahi ho...

Sharon: yahi toh main tumhe samjhane ki koshis kar rahi hun damn it! Nahi hun main we Sharon! Tumne use do saal pehle hi maar diya swayam. Jab tum mujhe chod k gaye, toh tumhe bhulne k liye, maine love ko hate karna suru kar diya, aur apni feelings dabane k liye, rude hona zaroori tha. Jo Sharon love k alawa koi language janti nahi thi, use hate karna sikhaya tumne! Uski politeness khatam ki tumne! Yes Mr. Swayam Shekhawat, you are the only reason, you are the bloody murderer!

Swayam wept for a while. Then gained control.

Swayam: thik hai, agar aisa hi hai, then I promise, main tumhare andar wo politeness wapas le kar ayunga. Tumhe pyar karna main sikhayunga, aur tumhe apni life me wapas aane k liye tab tak nahi kahunga, jab tak tumhe mujhe pyar nahi nahi hojata, phir se. And that's, My Promise!

Rey: Pyar hai yeh Zindagi, Duniya hai sabki.

Swayam: Bhul baithe sabhi ko, aisi hai teri ashiqui.

Sharon: Fareb me jeete ho, Khwaab se bahar aao.

Kriya: Pyaar hai ek Dhoka, Nahi zindagi kisiki!


Love,

Shirisha๐Ÿ˜Š


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Posted: 8 years ago
#84
hey update after a long time...like the update
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Posted: 8 years ago
#85
Hey shirisha
Wonderful update. Read all chaps in a go
All of them are well written
The way u have written it is commendable job
Ur writing is really nice
Those lines at the end is really nice
Well the characters and reactions are really well
The merger of flashback was great
Awaiting next update
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Posted: 8 years ago
#86
Shiri...loved the update...swaron scene..so romantic...update fast
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Posted: 8 years ago
#87
awesome update...
loved it

eagerly waiting to know what happens next in swaron's story

do update soon this time
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Posted: 8 years ago
#88
Nice one..
Flashback part was nice..
Ek taraf confession
Dusri taraf judaai

Reyam are trying hard to get Krisha back..

Thanks for the pm
Plz do update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#89
Bahot dino baad update mila thnx for the pm
I loved your update
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Posted: 8 years ago
#90
Shiri๐Ÿค—
Nice update
Reyam trying hard to win their respective girl back
Sharon n kriya are right in their place

Thnxx for the pm :):)
Love u
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