Gitya ~ Short Story ~ Tu jo mila

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Hello Friends,

I have written short story on Gitya after Gun shot…

its my take on story I hope you guys will like it…

Do read and let me know your feedback…

Ignore my typos and spelling mistakes….

Tu Jo Mila

A few moments later after Gun shot

Ginni was inside OT

Aap please ye details fill kar dijiyega nurse told Armaan

Ji he nodded

Armaan filled form with help of dimpy as he wasnt aware of her Dob blood group and all such details..

Adi he kept hand on his shoulder

Hmmm he looked up to him with teary eyes

Sign he put forward form

he looked at form and took it to sign on it

He blindly signed form and while handling his eyes fell on name Ginni Aditya Singh and he lost in thoughts

Tabbar aapse pehle ayega musibat ke samane … Ginni….

He remembered when he had seen his mother dead and got frightened

Adi armaan said

Armaan wo Ginni

sabrah rakh he kept hand on his shoulder

per use kuch..

nahi hoga armaan said

adi was sitting there helpless lost in own thoughts, Gulabo dimpy shampy armaan surpreet ambar were there

Later Operation was success but she has to do rest now so doctor told them N number of precautions to take once she will get discharge after 4 days

Aditya just nodded silently remembering each word of doctor

Adi tu ghar jake aaa armaan asked her

He looked at him

He just nodded but adi was reluctant Armaan I am good he said and armaan didn't forced him

After few hours she got conscious and gulabo forst met her

she wasnt havig much energy just looke dat her and smiled

gulabo kept hand on her head and sat there getting emo

nurse asked her to leave

Adi couldn’t get courage to meet her he just stood there at door and was seeing her through hole and felt hurt of her condition and reason is him , for him she took the bullet on herself, He was only relieved that she is out of danger.

Ginni on the other hand was surprised Adi ji nahi aye but kept mum.

Next day Singh family came to meet her and shailaja was showing all fake courtesy but surpreet weas genuinely caring for her and assured Gulabo not to worry will take care of her

Adi still didnt came to meet her and she was now getting restless and asked armaan about him

he is good ghar gaya hain aj 2 din bad he told her and she nodded ok

Adi came home and got fresh and went to gurudwara

Adi thoughts

Sukriya wahe guruji,

he took blessings and came to hospital and entered to see her and she was happy to see him

Adi was getting emo but hide it and sat next to her

aap

me thik hoon aur ab tum bolo mat u r not allowed he said

she just nodded

He just got up to go but turned

Ginni

she just looked at him

Thank you he said

she just nodded and he left

3 days passed and Ginni got discharged from hospital

Adi had made all proper arrangements in home for her, specially there room.

Adi armaan gulaboji took her to singhs mansion …

Adi helped her through out discharge to travel whole process , he was with her holding her looking after her very carefully ,

while entering into singhs mansion Adi was holding her ..

Aashiyaana mera saath tere hai na

He remember when he had first visited the dhaba to buy it and looked at her while walking in

Dhoondte teri gali mujhko ghar mila

she looked surprised but he smiled and looked forward and helped her to settled in bedroom

wo me bed pe actually aap..

shoo ginni he said

jab tak tum puri tarah se recover nahi ho jati tab tak tum yahi bed pe soogi he said

ji aur tab tak 1 month bhi ho jayenge she nodded

Adi looked frowned at her statement but nodded silently

Adi had asked armaan to find out about shooters, also he had given strict instructions to everyone about her medication and other things. Adi have decided not to inform Darji about it because he does not want him to get worry and… he doesn’t want….

That night Ginni was sleeping peacefully because of painkillers and Adi was just laying on sofa looking at her face

He remembered when they had gurupath at home and he and ginni had taken blessings at same time and flower had dropped on them

Aab-o-daana mera haath tere hai na
Dhoondte tera Khuda mujhko Rab mila

He remembered when he had asked her about something in kitchen before their marriage when she was making kadha prasad

Tu jo mila lo ho gaya main qaabil


He was able to disclose the simranpreets fake thing in front of all

Tu jo mila to ho gaya sab haasil haan!


He remembered when he hugged akash and thats because of her

Mushqil sahi aasaan hui manzil

He walked upto her and sat beside her and slept there looking at her

Kyunki Tu.. Dhadkan.. Main Dil…

Days were passing and he was taking her utmost care

Adi and armaan were trying to track the shooter in parallel

Gulaboji had came to visit ginni and they were chatting

Gulaboji wo diary

puttar tu ab pehle chetti chetti thik hoja fir hum wo dhundhte hain

per gulaboji

shoo puttar she warned her

Aditya who was coming in heard it

diary? he got confused and entered in

he wished gulaboji

Ginni tumhare wo dressing ka time ho gaya hain he said

Ha ji she just nodded

nurse came and gulaboji and adi came out

gulabo was looking worried for her

aap chinta mat kijiye wo recover ho rahi hain aur wo medicine and khana time pe le leti hain adi said

she looked at him and smiled

aapse ek bat puchu he asked

Ha ji puttar ji

wo ginni kis diary ke bare me bat kar rahi thi?

ji gulabo looked surprised

sorry mene sun liya abhi door pe tha to per me madad kar sakta hoon kuch to isliye..

gulabo smiled and explained him everything

isliye ginni pareshan hain

ha ji puttar uske liye apne papa ki diary aur dhaba

jaan hain he smiled

ha gulabo smiled

thank you aur aap plz use mat batayiye ga ye ki aapne mujhe bataya hain warna use acha nahi lagega aur wo abhi aise ..

nahi bataungi she smiled

me ata hoon and he left

wahe guruji she just prayed for them and smiled

He immediately called armaan and told everything and they decided to meet tomorrow

Next day Adi was busy with armaan whole day just to work on shooter and diary though he was keeping check on her time to time

Ginni got bored at home as she was bed ridden almost for 2 weeks now and today being weekday all were busy , even akash has exams so he didnt came much except good morning di. she cant move and Adi who used to be there now and then today he is also missing and she can sense it and now she was missing him ..

When Adi return late in night she was sleeping peacefully and he smiled and sat beside her

Next day Ginni got up but by then Adi had left and she was surprised but kept mum

When he returned around lunch she was having soup

Hi Good afternoon he smiled

she just smiled faintly

kya hua ginni he asked with concerned

mujhe kya hona hain ji she said sarcastically

he got confused

Ginni tumne wo khane ke pehleki dawai li he asked

ha ji le li she said plainly

he again got something wrong but kept mum

thik hain ab wo khane ke bad bhi hain

ha ji ha ji breakfast ke pehle bad, khane ke pehle bad dawai lo aur ye bina swad ke soup piyo ab yahi reh gaya hain ginni ki jindagi me she was sounding like a complaining kid

he smiled as he found her so cute

she looked at him and got more pissed

aap to haslo ji chachad singh kahike she rolled eyes

Rooth jaana tera

Sorry sorry wo me tumpe nahi actually

ha ha sab pata hain haslo aap ekto me yaha beth bethke bore ho gayi hoon dibhar kahi ja bhi nahi sakte aur aap bhi ghumte raho bahar ji she pouted

he looked surprised what did she said

was she missing me? really? he smiled

she saw him again smiling

janedo ji me bhi kisse das rahi hoon

Ginni I am sorry kal aur aj me busy tha per bohot jaroori kaam tha kuch but I promise I’ll be here he just hold her hand and she looked at him and they stared

Maan jaana mera

Akash who had returned from school just ran in and they got distracted from stare

Ginni di aapke liye wo… he came running but stopped looking at adi

ohh monster he said and hide something behind in hand

He looked at ginni and she nodded no with eyes

kya hua aur ye hath me kya hain adi asked

monster me abhi aya and he was about to run back

akash adi came between his path

are monster wo me galat time oe aa gaya na isliye u continue your romance he said

kya ginni said

even adi looked what but both were feeling odd somewhere listening him

he indicated ginni that he is trying to distract him but adi being adi saw that

ye tumhare hath me kya hain batao adi said and tried to hold his hands

wo kuch nahi monster he said

akash he said and akash showed him

imli amla some berries aur ye?(usually all these things get outside school on thela )

wo monster ginni di ko khana tha he smiled

he looked at ginni

ginni felt like kid got caught but spoke

haji wo ye gharka beswad khana kha kha ke ji me pak gayi si she said

ha monster bechari di wo soup aur wo khichadi ji kuch swad hi nahi rehta akash also agreed

isliye ye ginni? adi was like what

to kya karu ji she asked like child

ha monster khane do na di ko waise bhi ye tasty hota hain he said

adi looked at both of them and smiled

khalo per 1-2 wo bhi dho ke pehle he told strictly

ha ji she smiled brightly and hified akash

yesss akash also jumped with joy and

akash and ginni wer enjoying it she was happy with such little thing , adi was smiling looking at them and felt happy too

Dhoondhte teri hansi
Mill gayi khushi

2-3 days passed and Ginni wanted to go to gurudwara so Adi took her there and she was happy

Shukriya wahe guruji ki adi ji ko kuch nahi hua usdin per wo goli unpe kaun kyun chalana chahta tha , unhe humesha musibatose dur rakhiye she prayed

Adi just smiled looking at her and when she got up saw him staring at him but he looked away immediately

Raah hoon main teri
Rooh hai tu meri
Dhoondhte tere nishaan
Mill gayi khudi

Its been almost a month now and ginni has almost recovered but still everything should be done carefully and also its time for darjis return

Armaan and Adi were at armaans place

Daarji kal anewale hain armaan said

hmm adi said sadly

armaan smiled looking at his friend gadha hi hain ye waise bachpan se

to ab ginni bhi thik ho gayi hain aur darji bhi aa jayenge to

to?? adi looked at him shocked

to ab time to tata bye bye ulti khopdi right?

Adi looked at him blankly

Mat kar tata bye bye armaan patted him

Adi looked at him with surprise

Samjhta hoon tuze Adi

per use kya lagega?

ab kya lagega ye tuze janna hain teri biwi hain he stressed on biwi word and adi looked at him with Hmmm

per armaan use laga ye usne aise goli mere liye isliye me… adi was concerned

armaan smiled

pyar karta hain tu Adi , its a big word mere bhai aur jitna bada word utni jyada strong feeling hain ye… sacha pyar hain to ye aise kaha kyun kaise bichme nahi ata… and ginni is sensible girl i feel

Hmm adi said

To kab batane wala hain use? armaan asked

Adi again gave blank expression

haye mere ashiq aise devdas look mat de , aur me bhi kise puch raha hoon Aditya Raj Singh se jo apne feelings dikha bhi nahi sakta achese chehre pe uske dil me kya hain wo juban tak lana matlab armaan hit his own head

Armaan adi said

to kya sach hi hain ye samjha he rolled eyes

kya karu me fir? he asked

sochne to de yar meri thodi 10 biwiya hain he said

very funny armaan he said

waise mujhe ginni ke reaction dekhni hain ha kahi wo tuze mar war na dale chachad singh armaan teased him and adi is like armaannn and both ran behind each other

Finally after discussing Adi settled on writhing letter thats little easy for him so he wrote letter that night when ginni was sleeping peacefully

Kalka intezar hain mujhe ginni he sat beside her on bed

Next morning he kept letter beside her bed with a rose on it and left for work

Ginni who finished her breakfast and returned to room saw that and was surprised

ye gulab aur ye she touched letter

she looked around but no one was there

ye aditya ji ne she can only think this

and opened letter and settled on bed

Ginni,

Janata hoon ye letter dekhake tum surprise ho gayi hogi, kya likhu samajh nahi aa raha mujhe, mene tumse humesha sirf jhagda kiya hain ginni tumhari scooter fasi thi wo chai ki tapri pe tabse usdin dhabe pe jab tumne mujhe samjhana chaha tabbar ka meaning humari life me tab tak. mere jindagi me meri maa ke baad koi family nahi thi ginni kabhi i was always alone, koi mujhe kabhi samajh nahi paya rather koi kabhi mujhe kabhi samajh na hi nahi chahta tha kyunki i wasnt important in anyones life. But tumne mujhe janane ki koshish ki mujhe khush rakhne ki hasane ki koshish ki which is special Ginni. Tumhe usdin goli lagi tab me samjh gaya ki tum mujhe kya samjha rahi thi Ginni and thanks for that… per mere life me sirf tum ho ginni us jagah jise me apna maan sakta hoon aur koi nahi …

Tumhe lagega me ye kya likh raha hoon na? I just want to say ginni ke i have started feeling something special for you, adat ho rahi hain mujhe tumhari, tumhare jhagde ki, daatne ki, samjhane ki, care ki…. Kal darji ayenge aur tum yahase chali jaogi ye mujhe nahi chaiye ginni… i want you to stay back, to stay in my life now and forever as my wife…

Ginni got emotional reading letter and wiped her tear and fold the letter and kept aside and she started thinking about him their moments last one month how her life changed from Ginni Garewal to Ginni Aditya Singh, Marriage took place for some other reason but things changed

A day didnt passed quickly for both as now they have to face each other

Adi was restless to know her reaction and she was waiting for him too

Finally Adi came home and walked upto room

she was there on bed taking her medicines when she saw him

Letter was not there so he understood she have read it

Ginni he said and she looked at him

he just walked upto her and sat beside her and kept hand on her hand and she hold it and he understood and looked at her

aap letter writing me kafi weak the na school me she said

kya ? he asked shocked

she giggled chachad singh

Ginniiii he said and smiled

she just rest her head on his shoulder

Ginni tumhe sach me bura nahi laga na

bura? she was surprised

matlab mene aise wo sab tumhe keh diya achanak but i can’t afford to lose you from my life, wo hospital me ekbar dekh liya he said in breaking voice

ab firse wo nahi he hold her hand tight

bura nahi laga aditya ji sachme… she smiled

he felt relieved

waise appne ye letter likhake acha kiya kyunki aapke mooh se thank you to asani se nikalta hain nahi ye inni waddi waddi bate kaise nikalti she teased him

really ginni he raised eyebrow

really ji she giggled and went away from him leaving his hand

Adi just followed her and pulled her from waist towards him

mera to khair chodo per tumhare mooh se to inni sari waddi waddi bate non stop aati rehti hain to tum bolo…

main ji ginni was feeling nervous now

bolo na he raised eyebrow and pulled her more close to him

main? she stared at him as his stare always makes her weak

ha tum Ginni he put a hair strand behind her ear and was staring intensely

main wo aapne likha hum wo husband wife hain na ji she said in low voice rather tried to say

You are cute ji he just kissed her cheek and left her

she just blushed harder and hugged him tight and he embraced her both felt top of the world.

Tu jo mila lo ho gaya main qaabil
Tu jo mila to ho gaya sab haasil haan!
Mushqil sahi aasaan hui manzil
Kyunki Tu.. Dhadkan.. Main Dil…

Ginni dii akash came running and they broke and stood aside

oh monster he said

akash kuch kam tha adi asked

wo darji aa gaye hain he told

per wo to kal ginni was saying

ha per ek din jaldhi aa gaye hain he told

hum aate hain adi nodded

akash just nodded and ran

chale mrs aditya raj singh aditya winked at her

ji she made big eyes and he smiled

aap na chaliye darji aa gaye hain she said

yes madam aur wiase acha hua mene aj letter diya, mujhe kya pata tha darji ek din jaldhi ayenge hush he said while going out

she giggled

haslo haslo tum tumhe kya tum kal bol deti darji ko jake fir me kya karta he rolled eyes

ha to plan to wahi tha na she asked

to plan badal bhi sakta hain na he asked

ha kyunki aapka plan full proof tha hi nahi she said

mera? oh hello humara okay.. chutkara sirf mujhe nahi dono ko chaiye tha u get that he said

ha ha thik hain per plan change aapne kiya she said

what? tumhe nahi chahiye kya ha he hold her hand and pulled her towards him ( they were reached at hall entrance by now)

mujhe .. per pehle aapne change kiya plan she said

ye lo adi ginni bhi aa gaye darji saw them and adi left her hand and she walked towards darji first and he followed her

ginni puttar kaisi hain bacha tu aur wo goli lagi thi kisine mujhe kyun nahi bataya he asked keeping hand on her head

darji wo aap pareshan ho jate isliye adi nodded

bacho ke liye dua mangne gaya tha aur yah bacho pe hi sankat aa gaya darji said sadly

per aapki dua kaam aayi darji me dekho changi bhaki khadi hoon aapke samne ginni smiled

haa daarji aapki dua kaam aayi adi smiled genuinely and ginni got what he meant and smiled looking at him

daarji saw them staring or talking through eyes and felt happy

khush rahi puttar ji he hugged them same way like he did before going but this time difference was Adi ginni were happily smiling at each other

haji aur aj to party banti hain darji armaan entered

armaan puttar aja and he hugged him

party shailaja asked and raised eyebrow

are taiji darji wapas aye hain isliye hain na bhabiji armaan looked at ginni asked

she just smiled and nodded and armaan got it and felt happy for his friend or brother

he just hugged Adi happily.

They had celebration at dinner time and all were happy.

Later in room

Ginni waise wo diary ke liye mrs randhawa se sketch banwana reh hi gaya hain na Adi said and she looked surprised

ji

wo tumhare papaji ki diary

wo aapko

he just hold her by shoulder jaise tumhe meri maa ka birthday unka sapna meri khushi jani thi wiasehi ginni i want to know your happiness

she smiled with tear but wiped ha wo sketch reh gaya hain

dont worry kar lenge ab wiae bhi armaan aur me already discuss kar rahe hain diary ka per usase pehle to wo shooter ka pata lagana hain

ha ji wo to khayal mere man me bhi hain koi aapko kyun marna chahta tha? she asked confused

thats what my question is Ginni per dont stressed much on that armaan aur me dekh lenge he smiled

waise wo me dhabe pe firse jane ka soch rahi thi she said

isme sochna kya hain ginni wo tumhara dhaba hain tum waha kabhibhi ja sakti ho ab because doctor ne clearance diya hain but still be careful not more than few hours a day

she smiled looking at his caring nature ji

Both were feeling awkward now as they have accepted feelings for each other now they have to accept many more things.

before it gets more awkward ginni said me change karke aati hoon and left

Adi was also in thought whats next

Ginni came out and saw him arranging his sofa and she got confused and he caught that and smirked

ye yaha soyenge aj she thought to herself

he smiled to himself looking at her confused face

to ab so jate hain adi said

ji? she asked him

mene kaha so jate hain kafi late hua hain na aj he said

ha ji ji she said reluctantly and sat on bed

ye chachad singh thoda ajib hi hain she thought

kuch kaha tumne adi asked her

maine? nahi to she said immediately

thik hain fir so jate hain and he laid on sofa

Ginni tera pala na kaise insaan se pada hain she was thinking and adi was looking at her and giggling

Ye ginni ke expressions se to saaf samajh aa raha hain ki ye madam kya soch rahi hain

jande ginni so ja tu jyada mat soch ulta sidha and she laid on bed

waise ginni kal subah hum gurudwara jate hain

ji she nodded and closed eyes

it was 10-15 mins and ginni was sleeping now and adi looked at her

are yar ye to sach me so gayi he sat on sofa

ab? he thought and walked upto her

she was looking sweet while sleeping

sote hue kitni pyari dikhati hain ye sach me he smiled

ginni listened that and smiled little and he got that

ohh to ye soyi nahi hain smart ha he thought

aur shant ekdam masoom he smiled

ginni got happy listening that

aur ek bar jag jaye to tufaan he said

kyaa? ginni opened her eyes in shock

are tum jag rahi ho mujhe to laga so rahi ho he said innocently

me jagu ya sou per aapne kya kaha me kya lagti hoon tufaan she asked angrily

he tried to hide his smile

has rahe ho aap chaddo janedo ekto aaj aap sofa pe so rahe ho aur uperse mujhe tufaan kaha she said

bingo he caught her and raised his eyebrows

kya ? she asked him as she didnt get whats she blurt out

wo abhi jo tumne kaha he said

abhi ky akaha wo tufaan wo to aapne mujhe kaha she said

nahi usase pehle he said

usase pehle kya she asked

wo sofa he aksed and she got what she said and now she was feeling nervous

ginni chup nahi reh sakti thi ye kya bol diya she thought

wo sofa ka kya nahi mene to tufaan kaha na she tried her best

nahi wo me aaj sofa pe so raha hoon na he said

ha to soiye na yaha kyun aye hain she was looking here and there

pakka so jau he asked her coming closer to her

ha wahi to me keh rahi hoon so jaiye she said getting back on bed

you sure about that? he asked in his typical tone

ha she just nodded as now he was staring at her which makes her weak always

aur me yaha bed pe so jau aj to he asked her and she nodded yes in a flow as he was staring her very intensely

tumhe bura nahi lagega na he asked

she nodded no immediately

tum yahi soch rahi thi na he asked

ginni nodded yes

Not bad Mrs Aditya Raj singh he winked and back off and got up to take his pillow from sofa

kya??? she was shocked how can he hypnotize her with his stares and she followed him

aditya ji she hold her hand and he turned and saw her there

he finally smiled and thought enough of playing with her now

Ginni he just hold her hand tightly and smiled

I know what you were thinking but I wanted to make sure you are comfortable.

She just smiled genuinely

He just took his pillow and both laid on bed

Waise Ginni I can promise you that I’ll respect you , care for you, protect you , make you happy and love you rest of my life.

She smiled happily and me bhi ji

he smiled first and then said this is cheating mene itna sab kaha aur tumne kya kaha main bhi ji, you cant do that ginni

everything is fare in love and war ji she said

and this is? he raised eyebrow

war of love she said and he hugged her happily and she also rested her head on his chest.

Tu jo mila lo ho gaya main qaabil
Tu jo mila to ho gaya sab haasil haan!
Mushqil sahi aasaan hui manzil
Kyunki Tu.. Dhadkan.. Main Dil…

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Super sweet this was ❤️

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Originally posted by: monsi08

Super sweet this was ❤️

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Awesome... that was so sweet and cute.

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Originally posted by: amulbaby06

Awesome... that was so sweet and cute.

Thanks for commenting… glad you liked it 🤗 I found Gitya really sweet couple and want such things happen with them lets hope actual serail me bhi acha acha hi ho
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Yup true. Hope the writers won't ruin them.


Please do write some more. Would love read them. Do pm me yaar 🤗

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Originally posted by: amulbaby06

Yup true. Hope the writers won't ruin them.


Please do write some more. Would love read them. Do pm me yaar 🤗

yes fingers crossed.

Yes will try to write more for sure. I’ll PM. I have written one more OS ~ Ae dil hain mushkil on Gitya. https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/161790299

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This was sweet, especially the part where Ginni gets angry at him for leaving her alone.😆

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