Gitya OS ~ Ae dil hain mushkil ~

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Hello friends , My first try on Gitya… ( i was writing FF with same title but I have settled on OS)

Hope you guys like it … Fingers crossed..

Sorry for spelling and typo mistakes…

Enjoy and let me know feedback …





Few months later… (from current day)

tu firse ekbar sochle armaan said

he gave him look and continued packing

adi yar canada jake kya hoga yaha dekh na ab sab set hain sigh group ke hotels bhi ab ekdam forst class set kiye hain tune armaan continued

adi again gave him look

thik hai bhag ja firse armaan said

firse matlab? he asked

firse matlab pehle canada se yaha aya bhagake aur ab firse waha ja raha hain yar he said

armaan stop it yar he said

darji ke liye rukna unki umrah ho rahi hain u know that armaan said

armaan blackmail karna band kar mujhe he shouted

fine kuch nahi kehta waise bhi tu Aditya Raj Singh hain meri kyu sunega aur me hoon bhi kaun tera he rolled eyes

oye drama king chup kar samjha aur mujhe chodne aa raha hain he said

hmm armaan made face

That Night

Ginnis place

Gulabo was happy that dhaba is growing and flourishing and there loans getting reduce and everything getting normal

it was buzzing day in khushwant da dhaba ginni was busy with kitchen with other helpers and gulabo and her siblings were busy with customers

Khushwant da dhaba was now back to normal rather better than previous now

Ginni puttar ajka din kinna acha gaya nahi kinne sare customers aye

haji mummyji dimpy said

aur sabko ginni di ke hathka khana inna changa lagta hain shampy said

ginni smiled khana dilae banao to pasand ata ho hain tum bhi sikh sakte ho

nahi firbhi di aapke jaise namunkin hain dimpy hugged her

Gulabo smiled looking at her childern but missed goldie and ginni can observe that

Gulabonji aap goldi ko maaf kar dijiye na ginni hold her hand

maaf karne ka sawal hi nahi hain puttar uske pas s do raste the ek ghar ko chune ya simranpreet ko aur usne uska sath diya ab wo uski kismat hain isliye usko ye ghar aur dhabe which koi jagah nahi hain

ler aap

ginni puttar maa hoon isliye bura lagta hain kabhikabar per jo galat hain wo galat hi rahega humesha she kept hand on her head and smiled

Ginni just hugged her

Waise Ginni puttar wo me ki keh rahi thi..

Gulaboji me abhi aayi wo dimpy ko dudh dena hain na she excused herself

Kab tak bhagegi puttar gulaboji sighed

Ginni entered the kitchen

she took out milk from fridge and kept on gas and stood there and was lost in thoughts and milked boiled and was about to overflow when she switch off gas in hurry but still it was going to overflow so she hold the hot vessel with hand and she got hurt ahhh she hold her hand in other

pagal ho tum she heard someone and turned and he was there

aap

kitchen ke basics bhi nahi pata aur chef ginni he was angry and put her hand under water

nahi ji wo me to

chupp he said and she stared at him

Ginni this is basic yar dhyan rakhna chahiye na he said with utmost care

nahi wo thodasa she just looked down

thodasa hain ye ? he asked

she was hurt but he was in pain and they stared again

Dii dimpy called and ginni came out of her dream

are ye kya dimpy said

luch nahi ye le tera dudh she handed and left to her room

Ginni in thoughts

Aditya ji kyun aye aap meri jindagi me kyun… pehle aap humara dhaba chinana chahte the tab mene aapko galat samjha aur badme aapne hi hume papaji ki diary dhund kar di unka katil dhund kar diya aur uske liye aapne apne papaji ko jail tak bhej diya ji aap galat nahi the kabhi aapne humesha sachai samne layi simranpreet ki baat tab bhi aur papa ji ki baat ayi tab bhi… aapka me jindagi bhar shukragujar rahungi….. aap ache hain per humare raste alag hain she had tears

Background music

Tu safar mera
Hai tu hi meri manzil
Tere bina guzara
Ae dil hai mushkil

At Singhs

Aditya was suppose to fly 2 days later

Monster wo tussi canada bhag rahe ho na akash said

aditya looked at him

matlab wo armaan bhaiya ne kaha bhag rahe ho he said

armaaan he rolled eyes

me canada ja raha hoon waha mera kaam hain

he cleared

ha to wo canada jane se pehle wo aapka special wala icecream banalo na daarji aur mere liye akash said

he smiled thik hain banata hoon aj raat

yess he cheered and ran

Aditya came to kitchen to fullfill akash’s wish and started preparing icecream

he remembered the moments with ginni in THE KITCHEN its always special place for him because he is chef but this kitchen has different place in his life now he had fun fights and intense moments here with Ginni and he smiled unknowingly

Kyun chachchad singh ji akele akele muskura rahe ho ginni raised eyebrow

tum he was surprised

ha main kyun aa nahi sakati kya?

nahi per tum yaha?

yuhi she smiled

he smiled genuinely instead of getting angry snd was smiling lovingly at her

Background music

Tu mera khuda
Tu hi duaa mein shaamil
Tere bina guzara
Ae dil hai mushkil

Akash came running and interrupted him and he came out of his dreamland

monster fast fast yar

yes kar raha hoon he gave plain reply

jaldhi darji bhi wait kar rahe hain and he ran

Adi made 3 scoops and came to terrace

yippeeee akash jumped

Darji also smiled

Darji sirf ajke din cheating allowed hain adi told

ha ha pata hain menu aur tum mera darji mat ban samjha aur enjoy karne de kyu darji said and hified with akash

yessss monster matlab bro he bite his tongue infront of darji and smiled

adi nodded and have icecream

Waise icecream acha bana hain chachad singh ji someone whispers in his ear and he turned to see but saw her vanishing figure

Background music

Mujhe aazmaati hai teri kami
Meri har kami ko hai tu laazmi
Junoon hai mera
Banoon main tere qaabil
Tere bina guzaara
Ae Dil Hai Mushkil

After icecream Adi was in his room changing tshirt when he remembered when he was sick and Ginni had helped him to change cloths and medicine with care

Background music

Yeh rooh bhi meri
Yeh jism bhi mera
Utna mera nahi
Jitna hua tera

Next day morning ginni was getting ready for her day when she saw necklace set which Adi had offered her as A PAYMENT of her deeds but then at the end when they separate he said sorry for his mistake of misbehaving and ask her to take as gift which she had accepted on surpreets insist

Background music
Tune diya hai jo
Woh dard hi sahi
Tujhse mila hai toh
Inaam hai mera

Next day at Singhs Adi was suppose to fly today so he was bidding good bye to everyone , Gurleen Marleen and Akash were sad and with him but he promised them to come back.

pakka promise monster akash asked

yess he hugged him

Maa to nahi keh sakta kabhi but i respect you now he just smiled at surpreet and she smiled back

He hugged his tayaji and wished shailaja

he took darajis blessings

puttar khush reh dhyan rakh apna aur

adi looked at him aur

kuch nahi darji kept hand on his head and smiled

Armaan drove him to airport for flight and he got into flight with heavy heart for sure

Background music

Mera aasmaan dhoondhe teri zameen
Meri har kami ko hai tu laazmi

He boarded and was sitting in wondow seat. Plane took off and he just closed his eyes and can see her face again.

Background music
Zameen pe na sahi
Toh aasmaan mein aa mil
Tere bina guzara
Ae dil hai mushkil

Next day Ginni was in marriage function arranging buffet when her assistant didnt plate dish properly and she remembered Adis lecture of plating and smiled. Ginni rearranged the whole plate like Adi use to so and served

Background music

Maana ki teri maujoodgi se
Ye zindagani mehroom hai
Jeene ka koi dooja tareeka
Na mere dil ko maaloom hai

Adi was now working in Canada's restaurant and Ginni was busy with her dhaba and contracts. Both were busy in work , their passion, their career, their families.

Background music

Tujhse main kitni
Shiddat se chaahun
Chaahe toh rehna tu be-khabar
Mohtaaj manzil ka toh nahi hai
Ye ek tarfa mera safar, safar
Khoobsurat hai manzil se bhi
Meri har kami ko hai tu laazmi

Adi use to contact everyone on video calls now and was happy or pretending to be happy. Ginni was with Gulabo Dimpy Shampy all the time but something is missing….

Background music


Adhura hoke bhi
Hai ishq mera kaamil
Tere bina guzara
Ae dil hai mushkil

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: mishti_forever

Hello friends , My first try on Gitya… ( i was writing FF with same title but I have settled on OS)

Hope you guys like it … Fingers crossed..

Sorry for spelling and typo mistakes…

Enjoy and let me know feedback …





Few months later… (from current day)

tu firse ekbar sochle armaan said

he gave him look and continued packing

adi yar canada jake kya hoga yaha dekh na ab sab set hain sigh group ke hotels bhi ab ekdam forst class set kiye hain tune armaan continued

adi again gave him look

thik hai bhag ja firse armaan said

firse matlab? he asked

firse matlab pehle canada se yaha aya bhagake aur ab firse waha ja raha hain yar he said

armaan stop it yar he said

darji ke liye rukna unki umrah ho rahi hain u know that armaan said

armaan blackmail karna band kar mujhe he shouted

fine kuch nahi kehta waise bhi tu Aditya Raj Singh hain meri kyu sunega aur me hoon bhi kaun tera he rolled eyes

oye drama king chup kar samjha aur mujhe chodne aa raha hain he said

hmm armaan made face

That Night

Ginnis place

Gulabo was happy that dhaba is growing and flourishing and there loans getting reduce and everything getting normal

it was buzzing day in khushwant da dhaba ginni was busy with kitchen with other helpers and gulabo and her siblings were busy with customers

Khushwant da dhaba was now back to normal rather better than previous now

Ginni puttar ajka din kinna acha gaya nahi kinne sare customers aye

haji mummyji dimpy said

aur sabko ginni di ke hathka khana inna changa lagta hain shampy said

ginni smiled khana dilae banao to pasand ata ho hain tum bhi sikh sakte ho

nahi firbhi di aapke jaise namunkin hain dimpy hugged her

Gulabo smiled looking at her childern but missed goldie and ginni can observe that

Gulabonji aap goldi ko maaf kar dijiye na ginni hold her hand

maaf karne ka sawal hi nahi hain puttar uske pas s do raste the ek ghar ko chune ya simranpreet ko aur usne uska sath diya ab wo uski kismat hain isliye usko ye ghar aur dhabe which koi jagah nahi hain

ler aap

ginni puttar maa hoon isliye bura lagta hain kabhikabar per jo galat hain wo galat hi rahega humesha she kept hand on her head and smiled

Ginni just hugged her

Waise Ginni puttar wo me ki keh rahi thi..

Gulaboji me abhi aayi wo dimpy ko dudh dena hain na she excused herself

Kab tak bhagegi puttar gulaboji sighed

Ginni entered the kitchen

she took out milk from fridge and kept on gas and stood there and was lost in thoughts and milked boiled and was about to overflow when she switch off gas in hurry but still it was going to overflow so she hold the hot vessel with hand and she got hurt ahhh she hold her hand in other

pagal ho tum she heard someone and turned and he was there

aap

kitchen ke basics bhi nahi pata aur chef ginni he was angry and put her hand under water

nahi ji wo me to

chupp he said and she stared at him

Ginni this is basic yar dhyan rakhna chahiye na he said with utmost care

nahi wo thodasa she just looked down

thodasa hain ye ? he asked

she was hurt but he was in pain and they stared again

Dii dimpy called and ginni came out of her dream

are ye kya dimpy said

luch nahi ye le tera dudh she handed and left to her room

Ginni in thoughts

Aditya ji kyun aye aap meri jindagi me kyun… pehle aap humara dhaba chinana chahte the tab mene aapko galat samjha aur badme aapne hi hume papaji ki diary dhund kar di unka katil dhund kar diya aur uske liye aapne apne papaji ko jail tak bhej diya ji aap galat nahi the kabhi aapne humesha sachai samne layi simranpreet ki baat tab bhi aur papa ji ki baat ayi tab bhi… aapka me jindagi bhar shukragujar rahungi….. aap ache hain per humare raste alag hain she had tears

Background music

Tu safar mera
Hai tu hi meri manzil
Tere bina guzara
Ae dil hai mushkil

At Singhs

Aditya was suppose to fly 2 days later

Monster wo tussi canada bhag rahe ho na akash said

aditya looked at him

matlab wo armaan bhaiya ne kaha bhag rahe ho he said

armaaan he rolled eyes

me canada ja raha hoon waha mera kaam hain

he cleared

ha to wo canada jane se pehle wo aapka special wala icecream banalo na daarji aur mere liye akash said

he smiled thik hain banata hoon aj raat

yess he cheered and ran

Aditya came to kitchen to fullfill akash’s wish and started preparing icecream

he remembered the moments with ginni in THE KITCHEN its always special place for him because he is chef but this kitchen has different place in his life now he had fun fights and intense moments here with Ginni and he smiled unknowingly

Kyun chachchad singh ji akele akele muskura rahe ho ginni raised eyebrow

tum he was surprised

ha main kyun aa nahi sakati kya?

nahi per tum yaha?

yuhi she smiled

he smiled genuinely instead of getting angry snd was smiling lovingly at her

Background music

Tu mera khuda
Tu hi duaa mein shaamil
Tere bina guzara
Ae dil hai mushkil

Akash came running and interrupted him and he came out of his dreamland

monster fast fast yar

yes kar raha hoon he gave plain reply

jaldhi darji bhi wait kar rahe hain and he ran

Adi made 3 scoops and came to terrace

yippeeee akash jumped

Darji also smiled

Darji sirf ajke din cheating allowed hain adi told

ha ha pata hain menu aur tum mera darji mat ban samjha aur enjoy karne de kyu darji said and hified with akash

yessss monster matlab bro he bite his tongue infront of darji and smiled

adi nodded and have icecream

Waise icecream acha bana hain chachad singh ji someone whispers in his ear and he turned to see but saw her vanishing figure

Background music

Mujhe aazmaati hai teri kami
Meri har kami ko hai tu laazmi
Junoon hai mera
Banoon main tere qaabil
Tere bina guzaara
Ae Dil Hai Mushkil

After icecream Adi was in his room changing tshirt when he remembered when he was sick and Ginni had helped him to change cloths and medicine with care

Background music

Yeh rooh bhi meri
Yeh jism bhi mera
Utna mera nahi
Jitna hua tera

Next day morning ginni was getting ready for her day when she saw necklace set which Adi had offered her as A PAYMENT of her deeds but then at the end when they separate he said sorry for his mistake of misbehaving and ask her to take as gift which she had accepted on surpreets insist

Background music
Tune diya hai jo
Woh dard hi sahi
Tujhse mila hai toh
Inaam hai mera

Next day at Singhs Adi was suppose to fly today so he was bidding good bye to everyone , Gurleen Marleen and Akash were sad and with him but he promised them to come back.

pakka promise monster akash asked

yess he hugged him

Maa to nahi keh sakta kabhi but i respect you now he just smiled at surpreet and she smiled back

He hugged his tayaji and wished shailaja

he took darajis blessings

puttar khush reh dhyan rakh apna aur

adi looked at him aur

kuch nahi darji kept hand on his head and smiled

Armaan drove him to airport for flight and he got into flight with heavy heart for sure

Background music

Mera aasmaan dhoondhe teri zameen
Meri har kami ko hai tu laazmi

He boarded and was sitting in wondow seat. Plane took off and he just closed his eyes and can see her face again.

Background music
Zameen pe na sahi
Toh aasmaan mein aa mil
Tere bina guzara
Ae dil hai mushkil

Next day Ginni was in marriage function arranging buffet when her assistant didnt plate dish properly and she remembered Adis lecture of plating and smiled. Ginni rearranged the whole plate like Adi use to so and served

Background music

Maana ki teri maujoodgi se
Ye zindagani mehroom hai
Jeene ka koi dooja tareeka
Na mere dil ko maaloom hai

Adi was now working in Canada's restaurant and Ginni was busy with her dhaba and contracts. Both were busy in work , their passion, their career, their families.

Background music

Tujhse main kitni
Shiddat se chaahun
Chaahe toh rehna tu be-khabar
Mohtaaj manzil ka toh nahi hai
Ye ek tarfa mera safar, safar
Khoobsurat hai manzil se bhi
Meri har kami ko hai tu laazmi

Adi use to contact everyone on video calls now and was happy or pretending to be happy. Ginni was with Gulabo Dimpy Shampy all the time but something is missing….

Background music


Adhura hoke bhi
Hai ishq mera kaamil
Tere bina guzara
Ae dil hai mushkil

. . end . .


Good attempt. Well done 👍♥️

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Arre sad ending ho Gaya 😭
Itna acha likha hai ⭐️.. par please ek aur part likh ke happy ending de do ..

Mere dil ko raahat milegi ❤️

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Nice one ❤️....Keep writing Gitya story

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Originally posted by: Aniash


Good attempt. Well done 👍♥️

Thank you!
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Originally posted by: monsi08

Arre sad ending ho Gaya 😭
Itna acha likha hai ⭐️.. par please ek aur part likh ke happy ending de do ..

Mere dil ko raahat milegi ❤️

Thank you! actually it was fitting in song.. lets see if I can write else will try to write another 😊
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Originally posted by: sid_ridz

Nice one ❤️....Keep writing Gitya story

Thank you -! will try for sure 😊
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Such a amazing storyy....plz keep writing and continue 🙏this storyy

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