chand zamee par (FF)

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Charachter Sketch

Anisa: A Calm, fun loving & Simple girl of a middle class family. She is talented, religious (she belongs to a Muslim family but yet she also believes in other religion and also respect them. She visits all religious places on the weekends), Love for her is like everything because she believes a person who have true love is the luckiest men/women on the earth. She lives in lucknow and now shifted to Mumbai as she got the scholarship to study in the most happening and reputed college i, e: St., Francisco College of Mumbai. She loved her family very much. She can't even think her life without them.

Jalal Sheik: Anisa's father and the only earning medium of their family. He loves her daughter very much and treats her like his son. He always believes in her.

Rehana Sheik: Anisa's mother and a housewife she is always their for her daughter in every move of her life. She loves when her daughter does pranks on her.

Arjun: A cool guy without attitude. He is one of the most bachelor and young business tycoon of Mumbai. He is religious, talented & family oriented. He believes in that there is someone special made for everyone and waiting for her Miss Perfect .He loves his younger brother very much. Their parents are no more so they are the only family. They both love each other very much and share everything with each other. There is no secret between them. In his free time he loves to listen Radio Fm. Because music is his passion and he loves the way RJs interact with people.

Rahul: A cool handsome ever-loving hunk of St., Francisco College. He is a basketball champ and rockstar of the college. He did not believe in love. He can not understand how a man/women can spend a whole life with each other. He only believes in one night stand. He loves his Big B (Arjun) very much.

Muskan: Bubbly girls like her name she always have a smile on her face. She believes in Kal Ho Na Ho Theory. So she lives every movement of life with happiness. But her friends and her family are her weakness as well as her strength if someone do or say bad thing about them then she will burst like hell on him/them . She don't even think what she is saying and to whom. She love Indian outfit. But she is always comfortable in jeans. She love basketball as she also a basketball champ in her school time but no one knows about it.

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Ehsaas

Part: 1

Rehana Sheik: Ammi, Jalal Sheik: Abu

Abu: Begum Anisa kahan hain usay late nahi hoo reha hain kya college Koo???..

Ammi: Arey app bhi naa ?? zara usey ready tho hoo jaae doo??..

Abu: arey yeh kitna time legii ready hoo ney k liye. AAj college kaa phela din hain aur aaj hii late pauchegii tho accha thodi naa hoga.

Ammi: arey baba abhi tho gayi hain. Itne der se tho apne hii roka hua tha kabi Tea mangte hain kabii kuch uske bina apka koi kaam bhi puura hota hain, aur vaise se bhi abhi college kaa time nahi hua hain abhi tho sirf 8 hii baj rehe hain college tho 10 baje ka hain . Ap bhii naa college Anisa ne jaana hain aur aap pareshan hoo rehe hain.

Abu: Vaise bhi hamarii betii kabhi bhi kahi bhi time see naa pahuchi hoo aisa tho hoo hii nahi sakta???.

A voice coming from behind Ammi?..Ammi??.

In Her room Anisa is very tensed because of her cloths she is not getting her bag which having her cloths???

Ammi: kya hua y r u shouting...and tune apne room kii halat kya banai hui hain??

now she turned to her mom with a cute and irritated look and said ???..

Anisa: dekho Ammi mujhe mere cloths wala bag nahi mil reha abhi tak unpacking bhi nahi hui hain aur mujhe aaj hii college bhi jaana hain now main kya phenu??.

Ammi: Anisa relax ok??. tera bag mere room main pada hain tu mera bag le aayi hain aur tera bag vahan hain?..

Anisa: ok ?..thank god maine tho samjhi kii mera bag kahi choot gaya hain ?main le kar aatii huun ??

Ammi: Tu bathroom jaa aur main tera bag lekar aati hun thek hain ?

Anisa: theek hain Ammi??..

Ammi? brings Anisa's luggage and open it to take out her cloths?. Then she saw a photo frame and smiles??..

Anisa came out from bathroom and saw her mom smiling?..

Anisa: Ammi app kya dek ker itna smile kar rehii hoo?

Ammi: O vo mian yea tere school time kii photo dek rehe thi teri best friend k sath joo hain??.tho uskii yaad aa gayi aur hasi bhi aa gayii

Anisa: Achaa tho aap meri aur Muski Kii School photograph dek kar has rehii hoo?.. maa mujhe naa muskii kii bahut yaad aati hain ek voohii tho thi apke baad jiske saath mein apnii baatein share karthe thi?.

Ammi: Vaise tuhje pata hain voo kahan par hain aaj kal nahi shayad Delhi main hoogii uske papa ka transfer vahii hua tha naa??.mere pass to naa uska koi telephone no. bhi nahi hain jisie main usse baath kar sakoon?

Ammi: terii saath baath karte karte tho mujhe time kaa pata hii nahi chala .. chal main breakfast lagatii huun tu jaldii se ready hooke aaja??.

Anisa: Ok Ammi aap jaao main jaldii se ready hookar or diya jalakar aatii huun???

Aammi: Arey miane tho bool hii gayi thi kii tera din tho diya jalaye bina start hii nahi hota?ok ab jaldi kar nahi tho late hoo jayigii??.

Anisa going to be ready for the college she is not choosy with his cloths actually so it did not take her the time to ready? She is ready and wore a suit of red colour of shot length and Chudidaar pajaamii.. she din't like kule baal so? she always tie her hair ???. You can call her a simple traditional yet elegant?

Now she is ready and goes near pujaa ghar and light the diya and pray for her family and friends?

By the time Ammi is serching for the Abbu ??

Ammi: Kahan Chale gaye yea abhi tak tho chila rehe thea Anisa jaldi kar jaldi kar?. Ab kahan chle gaye yea??

From behind Abu came

Abu: arey begum hum tho bahar garden main thae par humein nahi pata tha kii thodii dere bhii hamarii awaz nahi sunee seay aap itne chinta hoo jaaye gii?

Ammi: loo phir shooru hoogaye aap itne bude 😆😆(old) hoo gaye hoo par appka yea romance kab khatam hoga??.

Abu: Arey jiskii begum aap jaisii kubsoorat hoo voo kya bina romance rehe sakta hain bhala?..

Ammi: hai rabba main kya karu inka??😃😃😆chalo aab aap bhi ready hoojayiye Anisa koo college chodne nahi jaana?? and she went to the kitchen?..

Now Anisa finishes her puja and come to the kitchen and said .........

Anisa: Ammi main koi help karu apkii breakfast lagane main?

Ammi: Nahi tune apna beg tho ready karliya naa college ke liye naa?..

Anisa: Haan Ammi??

Ammi: Aur voo letter bhi rakliya naa ??..

Anisa: Haan Ammi sab kuch rek liya??aap kyon tension letii hoo??

Ammi: acha Achha meri daadi?.. chal bekfast kar lee aur abu ko bhi bula lee?vaise bhi 9 baj gaye hain phir tu late hoo jaye giii??..

Anisa: Abu jaldi aao late hoo jayeinge???

They all have their breakfast and Anisa and her abbu going for her college ??.

Her ammi make all the rituals (Dhai n all that)

Now she reaches the college ??..

Anisa: ok abu bye ?.Main ab chaltii huun?.. principal sir seay bhi milna hain?

Abu: ok beta all the best?.

They hug each other ??.. and she went inside the college??

Anisa to herself: Wow..kitna achhaa college hain ?.arey yaar yea principal kaa office kahan hoga?.

She bumps on a guy?..

Anisa: Soory?? soory..

Guy: can't u see main aa reha huun??..

Anisa: soory boola tho? actually main naa voo principal kaa office doond rehii thi??..

Guy: Are u a new admission??.

Anisa: haan aaj pehela din hain?

Guy: Shouts hey guyes??

Lots of people came around her

A girl said what happen Punnu tuu itnii zore seay kyun chiilaaya???

Punnu: Arey P tujhe pata hain yea ? oo soory maine apse apka naam tho pucha hii nahi?.

P: tho ab puch leee?

Punnu: Apka naam kya hain??.

Anisa: mera naam Anisa hain?or aaj mere college kaa phela din hain?..

P : what tum nayii (new) hoo college main??..

Punnu: tabii tho main chilaaya??.

Anisa: whith a surprised look 😲main iis college main nayii hoon thoo ismain chilaane waali kaya baat hain??..😆😆

P: ooo vo yea naa aisa hii hain jab bhi college main koi naya admission hota hain tho yea bahut jayda excite hoo jaata hain?.😆😆🤣

Anisa: Soory par yea kuch ajeeb nahi hain kya?😃 ok ok..

Vaise ap logoon seay milkar accha laga? par ab kay abhi mujhe bata sakte hain kii principal office kahan hain?..

P: ooo princi kaa office dhoond rehii hoo tum ?.

Anisa: haan kya aap meri help karingii??..

Punnu: With pleasure😃??.

Anisa to herself: Yaar yea tho sach main hii kuch ajeeb hain..😕and pass a fake smile to them😊

P to Punnu: Tu aise kyun beheve kar reha hain usey shak hoo jaayegaa ..

Punnu: Yaar voo kya hain naa bahut dinoo baad koi bakra mila hain tho hallal kaney kii kuch jayada hii excitement hoo reheii hain??🤣

P: Yaar tu toth really main hain ajeeb hain?and they also pass a fake smile to Anisa?

Anisa: Kuch naa kuch thoo kadbad hain?..

P: hmm tum nee kuch kaha kya

Anisa: haan voo pls mujhe jaldi bata doo kii pncipal office kahan hain?

P & Punnu together: haan jaroor???

Anisa: Ab tho mujhe sachii main hii kuch gadbad lag rehii hain?..

P: tum yehan seay straight jaao aur phir right jaana phir left phir right? phir seedee chalte jaana saamne joo cabin hain voohii principal kaa office hain?

Anisa: thanks?

Punnu: jaldii jaoo nahi tho prince gussa karenge?.

Anisa: ok? bye phir milte hain ??.

Punnu: yea phela bakara dekh reha huun jisey hallal hoone kii itne jaldii hoo rehii hain?.

And then Punnu and P make a five??..😉😉😃

To... be continued..............

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Great start.... please continue soon

Love,
Ehsaas

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