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Posted: 12 years ago
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NIVEDITA AND VIREN: HUM TUM
CHAPTER 68

Vicky and Vishal came to Sood's house while Viren was eating his breakfast. He got surprised to see them there and said "tum dono yahan?"

Vicky replied "bhool gaya Viren. Aaj koi bhi college nahi jaa raha sab shopping par jaa rahe hain."

"oh haan. Come let's go. But where is Shruti and Sneha?" Viren questioned them.

"Wo dono Divya ke sath gayi hain. Remember Vishal what they said, hamari shopping main boys not allowed. But they don't know we are not interested a bit in their shopping." Vicky imitated what Shruti said and all laughed after watching his acting.

Nivi was standing inside a clothes shop in a mall watching Divya, Shruti and Sneha choosing dresses for themselves Tarun and Sonia's wedding. She was feeling very bored when Divya called her and said "Nivi don't keep standing there like a statue. Choose dress for yourself."

Nivi began to look out for dresses. She saw many lehengas and chose 2-3 dresses for trial when suddenly Divya came near her and said " Nivi Viren called up for you. Take my mobile throughout the shopping otherwise he will drive me crazy by calling again and again to talk with you."

Nivi took phone from Divya. Divya got busy again in shopping. Nivi picked up the phone and said "Hello."

Viren replied "hi jaan. Enjoying your shopping?"

Nivi replied with a sad face "enjoying? You know that I hate shopping Viren. Oh god I am getting bore here."

"Hmm I can see this from your face." Viren replied with his voice filled up with laughter.

"You can see my face. Are you here Viren?" Nivi began to look around while talking with Viren.

"Yes I am here. We came to the same mall for shopping. Look outside the shop."

Viren replied back.

Nivi looked out of the shop to see Viren looking at her from the outside of the shop and waving at her. He was carrying 2-3 bags too with him. It appeared like he was done with his shopping. He signaled her to come to another side of the shop and entered in the shop quietly.

Nivi excused herself and went near Viren. She said "thank god Viren you are here. I was feeling so bored there."

Viren looked at the dresses she was still carrying in her hand and said "hmmm seems like you are confused in choosing the dress for yourself."

Nivi nodded in yes. Viren caught her hand and took her in front of a giant mirror placed near the trial room.

He took all the dresses from Nivi and looked at the dresses. Then he took the dupatta of all the dresses. He made Nivi stand still in front of the mirror. One by one, he began to put the duppatta of all the dresses over Nivi's head. In all the dresses, he loved a purple lehenga with simple embroidery and stone work. When he placed the purple dupatta over Nivi's head, he was dumbstruck to see that Nivi looked so beautiful in that dupatta.

He placed his hands around Nivi's waist and said "you look so gorgeous in this dress. Your beauty will complement the dress very well."

Nivi looked up at Viren through the mirror and felt very shy. Viren rested his head over Nivi's shoulder and looked at their reflection in the mirror and said "perfect."

He kissed her on cheeks and ran away from there as he saw Divya's reflection in the mirror.


Edited by edwardcullen19 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
forgive my errors guys ...really updated in a hurry so i don't know if it's good...sorry for this friends and i will update soon this time
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
A really lovely chapter...so nice to see Viren and Nivi showing their love for each other so openly to the world, and Virenis as cheeky as ever!!!
Many thanks for PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
lovely and wonderful update neeti dear😳
thanx alot for giving light hearted chapters...made me feel relaxed😃
awww...those sweet romantic scenes really made me blush sweetie!!!

continue soon neeti...take care n love u 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
amazing part loved it cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
hey neeti, sorry yaar,😔
i did nt know where i left the stroy of HUM TUM , i was completely immeresed in reading REALIZATION OF LOVE, i think i have to go the first thread, must be i left some part...
without any knowledge of this current story, i read the recent update, love the way viren keep holding on nivi😉, .
when sid is also there, badmaash... love this niviren in your FF, our hero is always looking for a chance to get close to her... nice updates dear, thanks for the PM and do continue soon.. 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
Loved Viren being naughty, I like ur nivren relation they r so cut. Thnx for the pm Neeti. Luved ur ud.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
congrats for starting the new thread dear
all the chaps are so cute..
ur ff is very unique dear
i loved it
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
Fab.,... Love the update i truly love the update and enjoyed reading them ... NivRen Romance .. missing it so much... continu soon Jaan
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
super updates neeti dear🤗.loved nivren's romance.continue soon dear.
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