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What an awesome update Neeti and thank you soo much for dedicating this one to me and I loved both creations but the one you used even more I'm soo sad this FF is finishing, but make sure you come back with another FF soon
Originally posted by: mystery-lover
love it ... but y u r ending ur ff plzzz don't ..
and i loved dis more
Originally posted by: deepti_9
Very beautiful n emotinal sangeet ceremony..loved reading it..n i like this pic more
even i m sad that i will not get to read this ff of yours.please start new one after u end this.please Neeti
Originally posted by: FizaluvsKinshuk
What an awesome update Neeti and thank you soo much for dedicating this one to me and I loved both creations but the one you used even more I'm soo sad this FF is finishing, but make sure you come back with another FF soon
Originally posted by: Ragvir_Prishna
I read the whole FF and I have to say it's a beautiful FF, Keep it up, I love this FF =D
Nivi was preparing to sleep when her phone rang loudly. She picked up her phone and pressed the green button to attend the call. She knew who was calling her without even looking at the caller ID.
"What is it Viren?" She spoke the moment she picked up the phone.
"At least say hi, hello before jumping on me like that jaan. Or are you too busy to talk with your fianc?" said Viren in a very seducing voice.
"Hmm you can assume that. Now tell me what's the matter? I am very tired Viren and I want to take rest."
"Okay okay I am not going to take much time. I just wanted to tell two things to you."
"And what are those two things?"
"First I am going on a night out with Sid, Aditya, Vishal and Vicky tomorrow. I told them that I don't want to go but they are insisting to take me along with them. Can I go Nivi?"
"Why are you asking me Viren? You are free to go with them, I never stopped you. And you don't need my permission for it." Nivi was surprised.
"Are you sure Nivi? I think that you didn't understood it fully."
"I understood everything. What are you trying to say Viren?" Nivedita wondered lying comfortably on her bed.
"That tomorrow night is my bachelor's party where all boys are supposed to party without girls. A boy's night out I mean to say."
"Okay I am cool with it."
"Are you sure?"
"Viren do you want me to write it on a stamp paper to assure you?" Nivi got irritated with the way Viren was speaking with her.
"No not at all. I got your point."
"Good Now what's the second thing?"
"Now I wanted to ask you that where would you like to go for our honeymoon? I want to book our tickets for it."
As expected, he heard a loud gasp and then complete silence fell on the other side of the phone the very next moment. Viren could bet on anything, he was damn sure that Nivi was blushing very much, her face turning red. He knew Nivi too well and her actual response was similar to what he assumed in his mind though Nivi was taking much more time in replying to his question.
"Nivi jaan are you there???"
Silence.
"Jaan ???"
He heard a sharp intake of breath and finally Nivi replied, stuttering " V...Vi...ren you can decide about it. I don't have any particular place in my mind for our h...o...n...ey...m...oo...n."
He pressed his lips in an attempt to hold his laughter as Nivi stuttered. He knew Nivi was shy and definitely not comfortable with discussing this topic.
After thinking for few moments, he spoke "Hmm so I think we should go Paris for our honeymoon, what say?"
"As you wish, Viren" Nivi said in a low yet embarrassed voice.
"As least give your views on it Nivi, we will stay there for 20 days, so your opinion is important."
"It's a nice place Viren and I really liked that you chose Paris. I wanted to see Paris." Now Nivi was in a hurry to end this discussion as soon as possible not only because she was feeling shy but also because she was actually happy that Viren chose Paris as their honeymoon destination. She always wished to see Eiffel tower as it was considered as one of the most romantic place in the world.
"Okay then I will book our tickets tomorrow." replied Viren finally satisfied with Nivi's answer.
"Okay then, Goodnight and sweet dreams." said Nivi quickly, disconnecting the call the next moment.
"Listen..." Viren again spoke to realize that Nivi has already disconnected the call. He let out his laugh he was holding back till now. Teasing Nivi was the one thing he loved very much. Now he knew that Nivi will not be able to sleep peacefully tonight.
True to what Viren assumed, Nivi was pacing in her room wondering about what's going to happen when they will go there. Hell, she should think about the day after tomorrow when she will get married to Viren. OMG, she is getting married in next 2 days. In 2 days, she will become Mrs. Nivedita Viren Sood. Getting married caused strange sensations in her stomach making her feel more nervous. She rubbed her forehead with her hands in nervousness.
She can't handle this seriously. It was making her feel nervous and self conscious. Despite of all this, she felt excited when she thought about her marriage. Finally they will be together as life partners.
She fell on her bed feeling a bit better than what she felt after talking with Viren. She kept dreaming about her upcoming married life for the next few hours, all sleep thoughts forgotten. She hugged her pillow in excitement and closed to see all those dreams once again.
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It became a normal routine for Nivi to wake up with a loud smack on her head by Divya. But today she received two smacks on her instead of usual one. Eyes still closed, she heard Divya talking excitedly with Niyati about something. She opened her eyes slowly and sat up.
Seeing her awake, Niyati and Divya sat on the bed on the either side of her. She looked at their excited faces curiously and finally spoke what was in her mind "Why you guys look so excited?"
Niyati and Divya looked at each other dramatically and chorused in unison "We are going to have a girl's night out."
When Nivi came down dressed in dark pink chooridar suit, she saw Chanchal and Vandana Taiji entering inside, Dadi and Hemlata chachi talking with them. She quickly went towards them, touching their feet and getting a warm hug from them. She saw them holding something in their hands which was covered by a piece of cloth. She excused herself and went to make tea for them. After serving them tea, Nivi sat with them, Divya and Niyati joining them looking very excited. Finally, Chanchal spoke handing the huge covered plates they were holding till now to Dadi and Chachi "Maaji we came to give shaadi ka joda for Nivi and Divya. I hope girls like them."
Nivi was about to have a look at her wedding dress when Dadi stopped her. Caressing her cheeks slowly, Dadi spoke "Nivi Beta won't you visit mandir with me today? Today is the last day, then tomorrow you will get married. Who knows when we will meet again?"
Tears forming in her eyes, Nivi managed to gave Dadi a smile and joked "Oh Dadi, you are talking I am going saat samundar paar from you after my marriage. Sood mansion is at five minutes distance only so don't worry I will always visit mandir with you in the morning like always."
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She caught her Dadi's hand and went mandir with her. After the pooja and prayers to the god for the safety and happiness of her family, she made her way back to come back home with Dadi. On the way, she saw two huge mandaps and tent being set up near their house. Their marriage was supposed to happen there.
Telling Dadi to go home, she made her way towards the mandaps which was still half decorated. Workers were there trying to decorate the mandap and arranging things properly. She looked around, the red shinning curtains draped around the pillar with marigold flowers. Fairy lights giving the still half decorated mandap ethereal look. Bouquets of beautiful and fresh flowers were being used in decorating the mandap. She wasn't able to describe what she was feeling while seeing her own marriage mandap.Tears threatened to spill down from her eyes and then she heard warm, familiar and full of life voice of her mother telling a 4 years old Nivi.
"Nivi one day, Your prince charming will come in your life who will hold your hand and take you down to the mandap and then he will marry you binding your life with his with a promise to keep you happy always."
"But why Maa?"
"Because that's what Prince Charming is supposed to do. He will come and will make you fall in love with him, sweeping you off your feet."
"And tomorrow is the day, Maa." Nivi whispered to voice buzzing inside her. Then she heard the heart-warming, charming laughter of her mother telling her that she heard her daughter.
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When Divya and Niyati thought it was the most difficult task ever to convince Keshav and Pratap for their night out, then they were clearly wrong. After completing the task , when they came and told Nivi to wear that knee length dress, she flatly refused and wore reluctantly after getting threatened by them to not talk with her ever.
Nivi looked at her reflection in the mirror. Who was the person staring back at her? It's definitely not her. She never looked like the way she did right now. Dressing in a dark blue, sleeveless knee length dress, it was all Nivi managed to think. She was still staring at her reflection with disbelief when she heard a soft shriek. Divya finally dressed in a red again sleeveless knee length dress was gaping at her. "You look hot Nivi." she heard Divya's voice.
Nivi blushed quickly picking up silver star shaped earring and wearing them. She wore silver heels and tried to walk in them but alas like always she fell again.
"Di I don't think I can wear it and go out without getting hurt."
"Shut up Nivi. You always do that. Nothing is going to happen. Now come let's go Di is waiting for us downstairs."
Finally, they stepped out to sit in the car arranged for their night adventure by Keshav. While the driver kept driving the car, Niyati, Divya and Nivi sat in silence. Shruti and Sneha were supposed to meet them at the club directly.
Breaking the silence, Divya spoke "I am wondering what boys are doing right now?"
Niyati faked a laugh and replied "Getting drunk, flirting with girls."
"WHAT !!!!" shouted Nivi and Divya together.
Niyati turned to look at them from the passenger seat, and spoke "What do you think they are that innocent? Even till now, when I ask Aditya what happened in his bachelor's party, I never get a straight answer."
Nivi and Divya looked at each other, looking horrified with the whole thing that Niyati said just now. Nivi and Divya both were cursing themselves for letting them go out for the party. Suddenly, Nivi imagined an unknown girl, face not visible clearly, hugging her Viren tightly. She clenched her fists, going red on the face with anger and jealousy. Oh the nerve of the girl, the whole idea of night out was stupid, stupid and stupid. That was the reason Viren asked her again and again about it. Viren Sood, you are so dead, Nivi thought with determination.
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Viren, Sid, Aditya, Vishal and Vicky were holding their 10th vodka shot in their hand, ready to gulp it down. They all were having fun while sitting together inside the private area of the club. While having the 10th shot, Viren glanced at the entrance of the club and chocked on his drink. He coughed while staring at the entrance.
"Guys tell me that I am dreaming." Viren said while pointing towards something.
They looked at the direction to get the biggest shock of their life. Nivi, Divya, Niyati, Sneha and Shruti were there, looking dead gorgeous. They started looking around causing the boys to duck inside the table.
"What are they doing here? They said they are going for a night out but how come they came in the same club where we decided to chill out" Aditya whispered.
"Maybe spying on us." Sid suggested.
"Whatever it is, I am not going to meet anyone of them here. If Niyati realized that I am this drunk, she will kick me out of my own house."
The others agreed. They all looked back to see them settling down on a table around the bar. They all got up carefully and ran towards another table from where they can see the girls but they cannot see them.
On the other hand, after settling down, the girls were pondering over the drinks. Finally they all decided and ordered tequila shots.
"No way I am not going to drink that tequila shots." Nivi declared.
The others rolled their eyes. Divya replied "Arre Nivi what's wrong in getting drunk for just one night and driver is there so we don't need to worry about how we will go back to our home and when boys can have fun without us, then we can also enjoy without them." Everyone including Nivi agreed with that. Yeah I can have fun without you Mr. Viren Sood, thought Nivi.
Boys eyes widened when they saw them gulping down tequila shots like water.
"What are you doing Nivi?" Viren muttered but still kept sitting there while watching her. He never saw Nivi in such a short dress, however he was admiring her. She was just looking too hot and gorgeous in that dress. But tequila shots were not the right drink. What is someone tried to flirt with her while she got drunk? He looked around to see some peoples leering at Nivi and other girls as well. He felt a sudden urge to beat them.
"Come Di let's dance." said Nivi suddenly feeling very energetic and happy.
She caught Divya's hand and moved towards the dance floor. She got lost in dancing on the loud music with Divya, Niyati, Shruti and Sneha unaware of someone's piercing gaze.
"What are they trying to do? They are getting a lot of attentions." exclaimed Sid while looking at them. Viren was having a hard time to keep control on his anger. His control snapped when he saw some guy moving towards Nivi, looking at her with lust. He got up and said "We should go now. They are drunk."
Suddenly Nivi felt someone's hand on her waist. She tried to push the hand off her waist when she got pulled. She placed her hand on that person's shoulder to steady herself. She looked up to see Viren smiling down at her. She looked around to see Aditya dancing with Niyati, Sid with Divya, Vicky with Sneha, Vishal with Shruti. She got happy to see Viren but then she remembered what Niyati said and pushed him away.
"What are you doing here? Got bored of flirting with girls?" said Nivi in anger.
"What are you saying Nivi? I was not flirting with anyone. And how come you all are here?" replied Viren looking shocked.
"We decided to come here for our night out. Don't lie, Di told me what guys do in their bachelor's party?"
"And what guys do, according to Di?"
"Flirting and getting drunk." Nivi replied in a hurt voice. Viren laughed. Nivi got more angry with she saw him laughing.
"You are laughing Viren. I am serious." Nivi yelled.
"Of course I am laughing. Nivi do you think that I can flirt with any girl other than you?" Viren questioned while looking at Nivi's eyes. Nivi kept looking at Viren for few minutes before replying 'no' in a low voice. Viren smirked pulling Nivi more close to his body. Nivi wrapped her hands around Viren's neck.
"You look hot in this dress Nivi." Nivi blushed when she head Viren's compliment. Feeling her eyes a bit heavy, she rested her head on Viren's chest, sliding her hands down towards his waist hugging him tight and moving her feet in a slow dance.
They kept dancing for a long time after which they all decided to head home together. Viren picked Nivi in his arms as she fell asleep while dancing with him. It looked like she got drunk for the first time.
After reaching home, Viren carrying Nivi in his arms walked towards Nivi's room. After tucking her safely inside the duvet, he stared at the angelic face of his fiance. He moved closer, kissing her forehead and whispered "good night Nivi."
Originally posted by: edwardcullen19
Oh Lj love you...I am happy that u read my updates😳...but dear when i started this ff, I decided to end it when i will complete 100 chapters...I am feeling sad but yes this is the right time to end this ff as well😊
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