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Posted: 12 years ago
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Congo on your new thread. Gr8 part cont soon
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Congratzz for completing one full thread n for dis new thread. Keep it up . Asusual very nice update .lovedd it . Continue soon n thanxx for d PM
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⭐️⭐️ Congratulations👏 Neetika for the new thread, luving the story. Aditya and Niyati look hot.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nikiii...Jaan ... congrats jaan.🤗. happy and u r so talented..⭐️.. i love the parts ... awesome ...👏 u really bring smile to my face ... u r so sweet ... love the fight..🤣. truly was crazy and i imagine verin as a kid when tajji shouted at them .😆..lolll that was really fantastic part ... and NivRen scene was the best ... remembering NivRen SR... Love u sweety and sorry for the late replay
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome update please continue soon. 😊
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Congrats neeti for the new thread and the huge success of ur ff...🥳
and ur update is very nice...loved the way niyathi fooled viren...and end part is very romantic..waiting for ur new updates...


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Posted: 12 years ago
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new thread for hum tum😛😊

waah waah waah waah waah waaahhh😳
awesome updates👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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neeti jaan im glad u havent stopped writing hum tum and i am very sorry for not reading it the past few days but im sure i wud love it and i will really try to catch up if i can really really sorry
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Please update soon can't wait for you to update. 😊
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NIVEDITA AND VIREN: HUM TUM
CHAPTER 67

Viren placed his hands around Nivi's waist and pulled her closer to his body. He moved hairs from Nivi's neck and kissed her on the neck. Nivi shivered a bit when Viren kissed her on the neck and kept a firm grip on Viren's shoulder. Viren and Nivi looked at each other with love and intensity. Viren tapped her on the cheeks and was about to kiss her again when Nivi pushed him away and said "tum kabhi ek bhi chance chodte ho romance karne ka Viren. Let's go downstairs for breakfast."

She moved towards the door when Viren caught her hand and said "kya karoon Nivi tumhe dekhta hoon to kuch yaad hi nahi rehta."

Viren placed small pecks on her hand and began to move closer to her. Nivi got lost in his love. She hugged him tightly.

They both were still in a tight embrace when Sid came in Viren's room. After he saw what's going on in the room, he turned back awkwardly and said "oh sorry I think I came here at wrong time."

They both broke apart from the hug and Nivi said while getting totally embarrassed "no Sid, it's just nothing."

When Viren saw that Sid is not looking at them he again embraced her from behind and began to play with her hairs. Nivi tried a lot to get away from Viren but Viren was too adamant to be close to Nivi. He caught her hands and kissed her palms passionately.

Sid replied while laughing silently "ok Nivi I just came to say that Maa is calling you both for breakfast."

"yes Sid we are coming." Nivi replied while trying to get away from Viren.

Sid went away while laughing. Nivi said "oho Viren sometimes you behave like a kid. Leave me."

Nivi went out of Viren's grip and ran downstairs so that Viren don't catch her again.

After some time, Nivi came back home. She saw Divya standing in the verandah and waiting for someone impatiently. "kya hua Di? Waiting for someone?" Nivi questioned Divya.

"Thank god Nivi you came. I was waiting for you only. Come let's go for shopping." Divya said excitedly.

"Shopping? For what Di?" Nivi panicked.

"Stupid you forgot? We all are going Chandigarh tomorrow for Tarun and Sonia's wedding. From tomorrow their wedding rituals are gonna start." Divya said.

"Di I just remembered that Dadi called me up for some work I am going there. You go to shopping with someone else. Haan, take Siddharth for your company. Sorry di." Nivi tried to make excuse and was about to go.

Divya caught her hand and said "mujhe sab pata hai tujhe kya kaam hai. Ab chal mere sath. Varna main Viren ko bulati hoon. Wo tujhe utha kar mere sath le chalega."

Nivi made an innocent face and requested to her Di "Di I hate shopping you know that. And the way you do the shopping like bargaining with the shopkeepers for Rs.50-100 is annoying. Please Di go to shopping without me."

"Thik hai main abhi Viren ko call karti hoon." Divya started to dial Viren's number in her phone and was about to call him when Nivi said "ok Di I am coming with you. Now don't call him."

Divya smiled and said "good that you are coming with me otherwise Viren would have got tired while carrying you all the way. Kyunki tu bahut moti hai na."

Nivi picked up a pillow and threw it at Divya who ran away from there in attempt to escape from it.


Edited by edwardcullen19 - 12 years ago
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