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Posted: 11 years ago
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1.Guys from so many days i am not at all happy with your response seriously this is too much. I have a college life which occupies most of my time even then whenever i get time i try my best to give my readers a very good update. barely 10 likes, 3-4 comments this is really not done especially when i am so close on closing this ff of mine. only 10% is left now of this ff then i am done.

2. in the last update i forgot to say 2 things - first forgive me i updated it without proof reading what i updated and second i was a bit confused about this whole roka ceremony. I mean what i know in roka, engagement is done and in some parts of india engagement ceremony takes place separately. I combined it because it is what i saw in the wedding rituals i have attended ever.

3. I feel that i didn't did full justice to the roka ceremony...because that time i was more concerned with giving you all update and i barely had time after that so hope you can understand

4. Its the biggest announcement i am going to do through this note...I want this ff to have 100 chapters precisely. That means only 6 chapters are left, 2 of them will be posted during this week hopefully. Please bear me for few more weeks.

That's all please read my updates, hit the like button and comment as well to let me whether you all liked my updates or not ๐Ÿ˜Š
Edited by edwardcullen19 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

super update Neeti...loved the romantic kiss between Nivren๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜‰..how well u wrote i was imagining nivren in every bit..i was totally in nivren world n still there as wating for next part..now what viren will do..n where is he taking Nivi๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†..n i m so happy that u willl complete 100 chapters of your ff.congrats in advance๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ.looking forward to next update egarely.๐Ÿ˜›n i think u did justice to each n every chapter of ur ff so for me your ff is best.love u n really look forward to your ff always๐Ÿ˜Š

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Neeti "Happy And Prosperous New Year" wow girl you have written 94 Chapters!!!!!! So proud of you for giving us both the stories. Will be waiting for your next ud. Sorry if I was late replying term ended and then holidays.
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Awesome Update Neeti, loved both chapters, they were soo sweet and loved the Falshback too, you have 6 chapters left and it will be 100 Chapters, that's a lot, you are doing a great job with this FF Neeti, I can't wait for your next FF on Nivren after you finish this FF ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Originally posted by: deepti_9

super update Neeti...loved the romantic kiss between Nivren๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜‰..how well u wrote i was imagining nivren in every bit..i was totally in nivren world n still there as wating for next part..now what viren will do..n where is he taking Nivi๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†..n i m so happy that u willl complete 100 chapters of your ff.congrats in advance๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ.looking forward to next update egarely.๐Ÿ˜›n i think u did justice to each n every chapter of ur ff so for me your ff is best.love u n really look forward to your ff always๐Ÿ˜Š


Deepti did i ever told you how much i love you?๐Ÿ˜ณ ...Really i never knew that you love my ff this much...yeah i am also happy that my ff is going to complete 100 chapters...๐Ÿ˜ƒ
thanks dear for telling me that...still i feel sometimes that i don't gave my best in some updates...love you sweetheart๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Butifuleyes

Neeti "Happy And Prosperous New Year" wow girl you have written 94 Chapters!!!!!! So proud of you for giving us both the stories. Will be waiting for your next ud. Sorry if I was late replying term ended and then holidays.


aww thanks Suny sweety ๐Ÿ˜ƒ...it's you guys who encouraged me to write my ff till now sweety ๐Ÿ˜ณ...that's ok sweety atleast you read my ff and gave ur feedback...that's enough for me๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: FizaluvsKinshuk

Awesome Update Neeti, loved both chapters, they were soo sweet and loved the Falshback too, you have 6 chapters left and it will be 100 Chapters, that's a lot, you are doing a great job with this FF Neeti, I can't wait for your next FF on Nivren after you finish this FF ๐Ÿ˜ƒ


aww love you a lot Fiza ๐Ÿค— such a sweet comment Fiza๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 11 years ago

From Now I will dedicate my last few updates of this ff to readers who always read my ff and encouraged me to write more and more

Today's update is dedicated to my sweetheart Deepti !!!! love you


NIVEDITA AND VIREN: HUM TUM

CHAPTER 95

Nivi continued to struggle in Viren's arms although not saying anything as instructed by Viren. Soon, she smelled the sweet scent of flowers planted in Sood's garden which made Nivi realize that they are in the garden.
Soon she found herself on her feet again, Viren helping her to walk properly while her eyes still kept blindfolded.
"For god's sake Viren, tell me what are we doing in the garden at this hour of night?" Nivi shouted furiously at Viren.
"Shhh...keep your voice down. Do you want to wake everyone up? Wait for 5 minutes more." Viren replied back in a hushed voice.
He helped her in climbing the stairs of the small canopy which was built in Sood's garden. He made her stand still and went to open the cloth wrapped around her eyes.
Nivedita felt Viren opening the cloth wrapped around her eyes and she lowered it down with her hands. She opened her eyes slowly to be closed soon by her again at the sudden bright flash of light on her eyes.
She once again opened her eyes to witness the marvelous sight in front of her and let out a loud shocked gasp. Fairy lights was wrapped around the walls of the canopy, shining brightly, accompanied with beautiful flowers, making it look stunning. She lowered her gaze at the floor to see every inch of it was covered with heart shaped balloons. In front of her a small table was placed, flowers placed on it making it look beautiful. A square shaped box was placed in the middle of the table.
She turned towards Viren looking dumbstruck with all the arrangements he did for her, but she didn't knew that why he did all this? Viren understood the questioned look on her face. He slapped her forehead with his hand playfully before replying "Happy Birthday Nivi Dumbo !!!!!"
Oh god it's her birthday. She forgot her own birthday thanks to all the stress she took for the roka ceremony. "Unbelievable me !!!" she muttered under her breath giving Viren a sheepish look which he returned with a wide smirk on his face.
Once Nivi got over from the shock, she threw her arms around Viren's neck, stepping closer to him for a warm hug. "I love you Viren
" she muttered in his ears.
Breaking the hug, Viren kissed her forehead while replying "I love you too."
Placing his arms on her shoulders, he made her turn towards the table and opened the box for her. A yummy , delicious chocolate cake was lying on the table now. Viren lighted the candle for her. He looked at Nivi who was still in awe seeing him doing all this for her and smiled. "Now make a wish and blow the candle."
Nivi bent down, closed her eyes for few moments and blew the candle off. Viren started clapping and sang "Happy Birthday Nivi...Happy Birthday Nivi...Happy Birthday to You."
Picking up a large piece of cake, Nivi stuffed it in Viren's mouth quickly and grinned when she saw Viren's mouth full of cake.
After swallowing the cake hastily , Viren picked up a small piece of cake and moved towards Nivi to feed her. But when Nivi opened her mouth for it, he ate it himself earning a glare from Nivi. Once again he picked up a piece of cake and this time he actually fed her. Nivi once again hugged him feeling very happy and blessed to have him by her side.
"Thanks for the surprise Viren. I loved it."
"Wait I want my reward for it."
Before Nivi could reply anything, he wrapped his arms around her waist, pulling her closer. Anticipating what is going to happen, Nivi clutched his shirt tightly. Viren swooped down and kissed her rosy lips. Tasting chocolate, he slowly sucked her lower lip waiting for Nivi's response. Soon, Nivi responded kissing his lips back with the same passion. His hands traveled towards her long hairs, clutching them softly in his fist, titling her head a bit to kiss her properly. After few minutes they broke the kiss, panting, trying to inhale some air. Nivi brought her open palm forward and said "Now I want my gift."
"You just got your gift Nivi." replied Viren mischievously.
Blushing crimson, Nivi lowered her gaze. Soon after few moments when she remembered something, her expressions changed and she looked angry.
"Viren you never gave me any birthday gift during our college time and today too, you are denying. When will you ever give me a proper birthday gift by the way?"
"Waise to I told you I will give you all your birthday gifts after our wedding only but since we just got engaged and I don't want a fight like we had always on your birthday previously, I will give you your this year's birthday gift."
Nivi's face lit up with excitement. Grinning broadly at the excitement visible on her face, Viren grabbed her hand and went inside the Sood's mansion. They entered Viren's room together. Viren looked around and opened his cupboard- upper section filled with his clothes and lower section was closed. Viren looked at Nivi, urging her to open it handing over a key to her. Glancing at it curiously, Nivi unlocked the padlock with the key and opened it. Looking at the contents of it, Nivi once again gasped with shock.


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NIVEDITA AND VIREN: HUM TUM
CHAPTER 96


The lower section of Viren's wardrobe was filled with different shaped boxed wrapped in shiny and glittery paper. Nivi was staring at it with shock when Viren sat besides her and said "all this is for you, for your each birthday."
Nivi stared at him and said "for me??"
Viren nodded and replied "Of course. Remember when I confessed that I Love you, I did told you that on your every birthday, I got gift for you and kept it safe in a hope to give all your gifts to you one day. I wasn't lying that day. These gifts were bought for you and only for you. But..."
Nivi's face clearly showed confusion after hearing 'but'. Ignoring that, Viren continued with a smirk "But You will not get all these gifts right now."
Viren witnessed a revolted look on her face. He picked up a velvety colored gift from it and gave it to Nivi. He urged her to open. Still feeling shocked, she unwrapped the gift with trembling hands. A square shaped jewellery box came into view.
Nivi glanced at Viren once who nodded at her to open it. Nivi opened it and saw a pair of golden bangles encrusted with diamonds. It was beautiful beyond words. Smiling at her, he made her wear the bangles in her hands. He looked at her hands and kissed the bangles. "It looks like these bangles were made for you only."
Tears started to roll down on her cheeks. Viren wiped them with his thumb and hugged her looking concerned. "What happened Nivi?"
"Don't love me like this Viren, I don't deserve it." Nivi whispered in his ears.
Placing his index finger on her lips, he silenced her. "Your deserve much more than this Nivi."
Looking at him with teary eyes, she caught his hand and kissed them "Thanks for the gift Viren."
"Pleasure is all mine sweetheart." replied Viren cheekily.
Nivi looked at other gifts. She was about to grab one of the gift when Viren caught her hand and warned her "don't you dare Nivi. I told you, you can't open them now. Today you can only have this year's birthday gift."
"But when I will get the chance to open the other gifts?"
"On our wedding night." Viren winked at her. Nivi blushed and pushed Viren away from her.


Nivi kept stroking Viren's hairs lovingly while he rested his head in Nivi's lap. Viren's eyes were closed enjoying the soft touch of her hands in his hairs. Suddenly Nivi remembered something and called out for Viren.
"Hmm" Viren replied.
"You remember you said you wanted some thing in return on Niyati Di's and Aditya's wedding anniversary. What was it?"
Viren's eyes flew open. He completely forgot about it. He sat up next moment with a naughty glint in his eyes. Nivi studied his mischievous expressions and rolled her eyes. She exactly knew what he wants in return.
"I got it. You want a kiss in return right?"
Grinning broadly at her, Viren shook his head in disagreement. Nivi frowned and started thinking about other alternatives- may be a dinner date or a promise something. But nothing looked much good. She shook her head in defeat and said "Ok what do you want?"

Viren thought for a moment. He wanted something special from her keeping the fact that he barely accepted any gift from Nivi in his mind. At last he spoke in a firm voice "I want something from you which reminds me of us. It should remind me of the time we spent together. But that doesn't mean you will gift me something costly, got it?

Nivi nodded her head in consent. A warm smile crept on Viren's face. He caught Nivi's hand and said "Come let's go before any one gets to know that you are with me." Nivi followed him worrying about what he said moments before. Viren never expects anything from her usually, but now he did expect something, she must think about it very seriously.


Edited by edwardcullen19 - 11 years ago
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Will update 1 more chapter this week...Wedding ceremonies are gonna start from next update
happy reading guys...hit the like button and please do comment for the last few updates of this ff๐Ÿ˜Š
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