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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: UZIS

๐Ÿ˜Š waah kya update kiya hai ๐Ÿ˜ณ kya yummy ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜‰mazedar dhamakedaar party scene likha hai๐Ÿ‘

it seems like... mrs. malhotra needs eye check-up๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜‰... ya phir woh ho gayi thi jealousy ki shikar...hamari nivi ki khubsurti dekh kar๐Ÿ˜ณ
right neeti? ๐Ÿ˜ณ



arre aap hamari issi tarah tarif karte rehiye phir dekhiye aur kitne dhamakedaar scene likhti hoon main๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜‰

Urrm about the question i think the note i am going to leave after the next update will answer your question

waise shukriya itne meethe shabdon ke liye๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜‰


Edited by edwardcullen19 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: UZIS

Arrey haa... i forgot ke u r antaryaami...๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜† aap ko toh sab pata rehta hai ...๐Ÿ˜‰
ok ok ... u r a bad writer... happy now?๐Ÿ˜† i knw ur tricks of making me praise u more n more...๐Ÿ˜‰
arrey butter lagana hota toh...bread par laga kar na kha leti ...๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†... aap par laga kar... kyu aapka soap kharaab karti๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜‰
ok jokes apart, i would like to read ur next ss... but hw come u expect me to love ur next ss ..๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜‰... iske baare mein toh mai hee bataogi jab usse start karogi... u sweetu ๐Ÿ˜ณ



yeah i know i am antaryami ๐Ÿ˜† once again i am flattered to hear your 'good words'๐Ÿ˜‰...i know i am bad writer๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜‰

haan ye to sahi bhi hai bekar main mera soap kyun kharab karna๐Ÿคฃ

about next ss, well i was assuming that you will love it but i was wrong am i? my readers don't love me anymore

acha aisi baat hai then wait till next week i am gonna start new SS next week then we will see


Edited by edwardcullen19 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: deepti_9

awesome update Neeti.n really Mrs. Malhotra needs checkup..!!you define nivi's beauty so beautifully that i can imagine her how sweet n cute she must be looking that viren could not took his eyes from her๐Ÿ˜ณwating for next part.๐Ÿ˜›




Oh thanks dear...since the time i became writing i have been reading stories, learning new words to improve my standard of writing i guess that's paying off now๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

The way i imagined nivi's look in my eyes i just tried to memorize it with words

about Mrs. Malhotra we will see๐Ÿ˜† for that you will have to read my note๐Ÿ˜Š

love you Deepti๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 11 years ago


REALIZATION OF LOVE
PART- 53





As Viren kept driving, Tani chose to speak to Nivi "Nivi don't even for a second feel bad about what that hag said. She always behave like that. I hate her. You were wearing a saree na that's why she said all those things to you. She is one of the women who considers it out of fashion when someone wears a saree. For them fashion means wearing western clothes. Britishers chale gaye inhe yahin chod gaye hmph. You are looking so beautiful. She is blind to not see your beauty."
Nivi glanced at Viren who was gripping the steering too hard and quickly replied "Tani leave it yaar. What others say doesn't matter to me. Not everyone is good like you guys."


Next day when Nivi was still stuck with office work before leaving for home when her phone rang, again !!! She sighed and picked up the call without seeing the caller ID. Viren had been calling her after every 5 minutes since an hour despite the fact that she repeatedly told him to not worry about her.
"Viren not again. I told you na I will be leaving home for soon" she spoke in an irritated tone.
"Yeah right I have been hearing the same thing since past an hour." came Viren's sarcastic reply.

Nivi picked up her purse from the table and went towards the entrance of the office, "Okay now I am really leaving for home, happy?"
"Yeah, see you soon." Viren disconnected the call before she could reply anything. Now days she saw Viren getting possessive for her more and more with each passing day. Not that she didn't liked it. She loved her husband's protective side for her but she didn't wanted him to worry too much for her.

She reached her office's main gate and saw Viren there sitting inside the car, clearly waiting for her. He was still in the same office clothes he wore today in the morning. That meant only one thing that he had been waiting for her there since past an hour.
The moment Viren saw Nivi approaching the car, his eyes lit up with up with joy after seeing his wife. He opened the passenger door of the car for her while giving her a warm smile which she returned with an angry glare.
He frowned seeing Nivi's angry face and spoke "What happened Nivi? Any problem? "
"You, you are my problem Mr. Viren Sood. Didn't I clearly told you to go home when you called me an hour ago? Why are still waiting for me here Viren? I would have come home on my own seriously."
"But I didn't wanted to go home without you." replied Viren in a stubborn voice.
"But I don't want to trouble you, Viren." Nivi argued.
"Waiting for you isn't a trouble for me Mrs. Nivedita Viren Sood. You can never trouble me." replied Viren in a hurt voice, not liking the last sentence she spoke.
Nivi sighed in defeat, clearly marking the end of the argument which Viren won just now. Viren started driving the car while Nivi looked out of the window, smiling a bit now that Viren waited so much for her. You are lucky Mrs. Nivedita Viren Sood!!! As the thought crossed her mind, she looked back at Viren the same time Viren turning his head to look at her. Their eyes met and time stood still allowing them to stare at each other for few moments before Viren shifted his gaze on the road. Nivi kept her hand on Viren's left hand which was clutching her duppatta tightly and smiled. Viren looking surprised, smiled and relaxed the moment he felt Nivi's touch on his hand.

The moment Viren and Nivi entered in the house, they heard some noice from kitchen. Feeling curious, they walked towards the kitchen and peeped inside it to see what's going on. Their eyes widened the moment they saw Anurag trying to cook something totally covered with wheat flour from head to toe. He exactly looked like a ghost.
"Anurag what are trying to do?" came Viren's amused voice. Anurag turned and smiled as he saw his favorite Nivi Bhabhi along with his best friend standing at the kitchen door, whom he chose to ignore right now.
"Bhabhi you came. Look I am trying to make pasta like the way you told me few days ago, remember?"
"That's ok Anurag but what's all this?" questioned Nivi while pointing towards Anurag's messed up state of clothes.
Anurag looked at himself before replying "woh while searching for pasta, the box which had wheat flour fell over me accidentally."
"Yeah I can see that." this time Viren spoke and started laughing loudly at Anurag. The moment he saw Nivi and Anurag glaring at me, he walked away while saying "I better order food from outside for my own sake."

The moment they all were done with their dinner, Viren stood up picking up the plates and spoke to Nivedita "Nivi I will wash them while you go upstairs and pack our bags. We will be leaving for Shimla tomorrow."
Nivi looked up at him and said in a concerned voice "Anything important Viren?"
"Actually Bhabhi finally we are going to launch our Shimla branch in the upcoming week so we all have to go. Speaking about that I must call Tani to ask her if she is done with her packing. Don't know if she even came back from Maa's place." Anurag answered and took out his phone to call Tani.

When Viren entered in their room, he saw Nivi folding his shirts carefully before placing them inside the open suitcase in front of her. She appeared to be lost in thinking while packing Viren's clothes as she didn't registered when Viren entered in the room.
Viren placed his hand on Nivi's shoulder, shaking her a bit "What are you thinking Nivi?"
Nivi glanced at him stepping out of her thoughts and replied while smiling "I was just thinking that all will be very happy to see us there again."
"Hmmm." Viren started to help her in packing.

"Viren???" Nivi called out hesitating a bit. Viren raised his eyebrows sensing hesitation in Nivi's voice, urging her to continue with his eyes.
"I was just wondering whether we are going to settle down there permanently or will we come back here?"
Viren caught Nivi's hand making her sit on the edge of the bed while kneeling down in front of her. He cupped her face with his hands while studying the emotions in her eyes. "What you want me to do Nivi? Do you wish to come back here?"
"Yes I mean I love living here now. Can't we just live here permanently? We can visit our family after a gap of few months always na."
"off course. But still I can't understand why you want this?"
"I know now you are in good terms with your family but you still prefer to live here in Delhi. And It's not ok if we leave Anurag and Tani here alone I mean you and Anurag consider each other as family from such a long time. Won't you feel bad about it? Plus I am loving my job here. I always wanted to do this." explained Nivi sincerely.
Viren smiled at her while looking at her with watery eyes. No matter how much Nivi has changed still she consider others no correction his feelings before thinking about herself.
"As you wish jaan." Viren whispered as Nivi leaned towards him to hug him.



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Posted: 11 years ago
Note:

Ok guys as usual I would like to make few things clear- mostly i take inspiration for writing from what i see around me in my daily life except the romantic stuff of course
last chapter i wrote someone clearly criticizing Nivi, i had a reason to write it...as a firm believer in dressing simple i too have faced some criticism from some peoples but i don't care as i do what i like...my family knows that very well
there Mrs. Malhotra was making fun of Nivi because she was wearing a saree which is categorized in Indian dresses...this kind of thing happens so i picked it up

oh yes as i read uzi's comment i need to remind few things to you all, i am starting my ss next week and guys it's different...it's totally based in Delhi and mostly focuses on page3. I hope you guys know what is page3.
my writing style for that will be different which maybe you guys don't like...so i am warning you guys now. waise its a sweet ss. I can't write dark stuff, it's not my genre for now.

will update on monday...till then Cyya๐Ÿค—

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Posted: 11 years ago
good update as usual Neeti.๐Ÿ˜›wating for next update.love u too ๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 11 years ago

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Good cute updates... waiting for the next one๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜ƒ
hey whats the need of crying out tub-full tears ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†... n that too blue tears ๐Ÿ˜†... kyu jee... neel daal liya tha apni eyes mein๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†
seems like... u dont like my jokes๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜‰ n ur leg pulling๐Ÿ˜ญ
but i dont care๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†... i keep on doing like that๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: deepti_9

good update as usual Neeti.๐Ÿ˜›wating for next update.love u too ๐Ÿค—





awww๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณโ˜บ๏ธ...thanks for the comment Deepti๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: UZIS

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Good cute updates... waiting for the next one๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜ƒ
hey whats the need of crying out tub-full tears ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†... n that too blue tears ๐Ÿ˜†... kyu jee... neel daal liya tha apni eyes mein๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†
seems like... u dont like my jokes๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜‰ n ur leg pulling๐Ÿ˜ญ
but i dont care๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†... i keep on doing like that๐Ÿ˜ณ




๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Wo kya hain na my fav color is blue is isiliya tears bhi blue๐Ÿ˜† special logon ke liye special color ke tears๐Ÿ˜†

arre i looovvveee your jokes yaar chahe kitna bhi cheesy kyun na ho๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜† don't mind ha

great keep it up jahanpanah i also don't want you to stop got it?



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Posted: 11 years ago



REALIZATION OF LOVE
PART- 54


Next day when they reached, they all were touched to receive a very warm welcome by the Soods. It looked like they all were waiting for their arrival very eagerly.
As they sat down for lunch, the entire mansion was echoing with their chatters and laughter. It appeared like a big family reunion for everyone.
Almost everyone said that they missed Nivi the most. All were elated to meet Tani who for the first time met Soods.

After meeting everyone, Nivi went to their room and was arranging clothes in the wardrobe when someone knocked on the door.
"Come in. The door is open."
When the person came didn't said anything for a long time, Nivi stopped her work and turned to see Chanchal standing a few feet away from her while looking at the floor.
"Maa do you need anything?"
Chanchal looked up at Nivi still not meeting her eyes with Nivi. Nivi was shocked to see tears in her eyes. She rushed towards her and held Chanchal's hand.
"Maa what happened why are you crying?"
Chanchal launched herself on Nivi, hugging her tightly and broke down completely. Nivi tried to step away. She was getting anxious to see Chanchal like that.
"Maa please tell me what happened?"

Chanchal caught Nivi's hand and bowed her head while saying "I am sorry Nivi. I am really sorry for everything I did to you and your family. I always tried to harm your family but you never did anything wrong with me. I intentionally made Sid marry Divya, my husband insulted your family, he insulted your father, I always tried to make your life miserable after your marriage with Viren but I never wanted to kill you. Trust me I didn't pushed you away intentionally that day when you fell from stairs.
I just never liked how my family and your family loved you always. But Now I know you are worthy of the love they always showered on you. Please forgive me for my each mistake, Nivi Beta. From now on, you are like my own daughter. I am so ashamed of my deeds that I am not able to look in your eyes. I am sorry."
Nivi made Chanchal look up at her and replied with a sweet smile "Maa I never had any grudges with you. What you did absolutely made my life miserable and I always wondered why you did all those things with me. But now I think what happened was destined to happen. With all the things you did, I know my family got hurt but I personally think it helped me in becoming a better person. I stood up for my family, I worked to earn money which made me confident. About marrying Sid, I am so glad that I didn't married him otherwise I would have the missed the most wonderful thing in my life, my Viren. Viren always healed every wound given by you. So I forgave you a very long time ago."



A week went past since the time Viren, Nivi, Tani and Anurag came in Shimla. But Nivi was clearly cursing herself for coming back here. After coming here, Viren got so much engrossed in work that he barely spent time with Nivi which made Nivi very sad. The whole family was there with her, but the person she wanted to be with was so busy to even talk to her.
Soon the day came when Sood mansion was being decorated for the launch party of Viren and Anurag's company. Workers were rushing here and there to decorate the whole mansion meanwhile Tani and Nivi chose to supervise all the decorations. Today Nivi was very very sad. Tomorrow was Their first marriage anniversary but with the way Viren was behaving, Nivi was sure that Viren forgot all about it. While the thought of their marriage completing one year was making her happy, the ignorant behavior of Viren was pissing her off a big time.
Nivi and Tani were busy in making floral rangoli on the entrance door of Sood's mansion when Tani finally asked what was bothering her so much.

"Nivi you look very sad, Did Viren said anything?"
"That's the problem Tani. He didn't said and did anything at all since he came back here. He is ignoring me so much that I feel like breaking his laptop in two pieces and burning down all his office files. But I can't even do that."
Tani burst out laughing. Nivi looked so cute while she was saying all those things. She knew that this launch event was a very big thing for Viren and Anurag so she didn't felt even a bit bad when Anurag was doing the same thing with her like Viren did with Nivi. But when she saw Nivi's sad face she knew that she must do something.
As the rangoli was almost complete, She stood up when her phone rang and was talking with her PA when she saw Viren coming downstairs while reading some file and making his way towards the main door.
She disconnected the call and looked up at Nivi who was gathering all the things. An evil smirk was playing on Tani's face. She waited for Viren to come closer. The moment Viren went past her, she stuck her leg out in his way. Viren tripped and lost his balance. Nivi saw that and she grabbed his hand to prevent him from falling.
The file flew away from his hand and he fell on the ground taking Nivi along with him. As soon as they both fell, Tani ran away from there in case Viren understood what she did. No wonder Viren and Anurag were best friends, they both were biggest jerk in the world when it comes to love.

Viren fell straight on the rangoli with Nivi on top of him. All the remaining flowers that Nivi was holding in her hands got showered on his face. Her hairs flew on his face as his right hand wrapped around her waist. Feeling his touch she quickly opened her eyes but she was not able to see anything as her face was covered with her hairs.
Viren brought his left hand forward. He gently brushed aside her hairs from her face and as she lifting her head looked in to her eyes, she was lost.
Viren was looking at her with such tenderness and love filled eyes that she forgot she was angry with him. She brought her hand forward brushing the flower petals on his face away. She saw when she touched Viren, he closed his eyes.
Her heart started beating fast when she saw Viren smiling at him. She was unable to stop herself from returning the gesture.
She felt Viren enveloping his hands around her waist tightly while she kept looking at him, her heart thudding with anticipation.
She saw him leaning towards her eying her lips. Breathing hard, she closed her eyes waiting eagerly for his touch.

Viren was just few inches away from her when he heard someone clearly their throat loudly. Viren looked up and Nivi opened her eyes when she heard some noise. She looked up to see Vandana Taiji standing there, smiling and avoiding looking at them.
They stood up quickly but not before falling once again in their haste. They heard Taiji's giggle.
"What you two are doing here? Did you forgot that this is not your room?"
Viren and Nivi looked down clearly feeling embarrassed after getting caught. While mumbling something under her breath, Nivi ran away from there to hide her red face from Viren and Vandana.
"Taiji wo wo..." Viren tried to say something at which Vandana just patted his cheeks happily and went away.





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