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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: deepti_9

Nice update Neeti.now got the point why Viren is confused about Nivi's feeling.now lets see how nivi react when Viren will tell her about this i m sure Nivi will choose viren as she loves her so much.๐Ÿ˜›




Thanks for the comment Deepti๐Ÿ˜ƒ...updating my ff today so you will get to know that what Nivi choose๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: UZIS

๐Ÿ˜ƒArrey waah waah waah.. Arrey waah waah waah...๐Ÿ˜ƒ

This very update made me sing this kishore kumar's song๐Ÿ˜Š
Arrey.. meri filmy writer๐Ÿ˜‰... now u have become typical bollywood masala type full-fledged writer๐Ÿ˜‰...
Itni tareef bahut hain?????? ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜† ya phir aapki jahanpana kuch aur kahe..?๐Ÿ˜†
Got the viewpoint of viren๐Ÿ˜ณ... aap bataye... aur hamein samajh mein na aaye... aisa kaise ho sakta hain...๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜›
A very well written update... loved it to the core๐Ÿ‘



Which song of Kishore Kumar dear?...that one arre waah waah๐Ÿ˜†

kya kare aap jaise logon se inspire hokar hum filmy writer ho gaye๐Ÿ˜‰...bollywood masala to apne aap hi add ho gaya๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜‰

aap to hamari jitni bhi tarif karo jyada hi lagti hai๐Ÿ˜ณ

love you for appreciating my update dear๐Ÿค—

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Chandni1996

plzzz continue soon!!!!!!



i am updating dear๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: FizaluvsKinshuk

What a Filmy Chapter I loved it, please do continue soon ๐Ÿ˜ƒ



thanks Fiza...mwaah๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 11 years ago

REALIZATION OF LOVE

PART- 45


Since the time Viren left alone, Nivi was going crazy while thinking about Viren. She said the same thing to Anurag but he too was confused like her after seeing Viren's weird behavior. After sitting with Nivi for a long time, he went to sleep in his room. Nivi kept thinking about Viren. What's going on in his mind? Why is he behaving like this? Did someone said anything bad to him? Anything went wrong in his company? - were some thoughts that came in Nivi's mind again and again. She didn't knew why Viren was worried but somehow she felt it's something related to her. She kept pacing in their room after changing into a simple pale green sari.

For about an hour, she kept pacing glancing at the door again and again. Every time she heard any voice, she ran towards the door thinking that it must be Viren. But Viren didn't came. At last, as Nivi started feeling tired she sat on the couch and kept looking at the clock. She kept waiting for Viren. Soon, she slept off while sitting on the couch.

Even in her sleep, she kept opening her eyes to see if Viren came back. Finally after a long time, she heard the voice of someone stopping the car. Then she heard someone opening the door. She knew that it's Viren. But she didn't ran towards him. She kept waiting for him to switch on the lights the moment he entered in their room. But that too didn't happened. Through her half-open eyes, when she saw Viren moving towards the wardrobe, she switched on the lights. She looked at the clock. It showed 2 am. She glanced back at Viren to see him sighing with a sombre expression on his face. She realized that a storm of thoughts is going on in his mind. His tensed expressions lighted fury inside her. She moved towards the door and latched it. She didn't wanted anyone to know what they were about to talk. She wanted answers and she was determined to get them. She was tired of playing this game again and now she wanted it to end as soon as possible. She turned towards Viren and spoke in a icy, stony voice "Is it the time to come home Viren?"
On the other hand, ever since Viren came back and saw Nivi awake, he was expecting her to shoot multiple questions at him regarding where he went and why he look tensed. But today he glimpsed something else on Nivi's face. It was determination. He was expecting her to hug him with concern but today it was something different. He was taken aback when he heard her question. It was not like Nivi at all.
He mumbled "I was busy."
"Oh I see. You were busy. But what kept you busy Viren? Around 10 pm, you left alone from here and around 2 am you came back to tell me you were busy. I know it's not some office work so tell me what was it, Mr. Viren Sood?" replied Nivi with a stern expression on her face.
Viren gulped and looked at don't-play-with-me attitude of Nivi. He inhaled some air to calm his mind and moved forwards, holding Nivi's hand in his. He spoke in a barely audible voice "Nivi today in the party, I met one of my friend. Some months ago, his elder brother was about to marry a girl but he backed out at the last moment and my friend married that girl under family pressure. Later they felt that their relationship is a compromise and a forced relationship. So..." Viren stopped hesitating a bit to continue further.
"So..." Nivi said indicating him to continue.
"So I was just thinking that our marriage was just like their marriage. I mean we got married just because we wanted to save Divya and Sid's marriage. If something like that wouldn't have occurred, we wouldn't have ever decided to get marriage to each other. I know you loved Sid and sometimes, it eats me that you are living with me just because we got married. Since the time, I fell in love with you, I never wanted you to live with me because of some tricky situations we had in front of us and to solve that we got married. Sometimes I feel that I don't deserve you. The guy who got rejected by his own family can't be worth of marrying such a wonderful person like you. So if you too feel like that you can take divorce from me. I will always be with you to help you. I just want you to live you life with happiness. I want you to get what you wish for. So what you think about it?" said Viren while holding his breath.

He looked up and saw Nivi's face. It was blank. Even after staring at her for few minutes, he wasn't able to read what's going on in her mind. She was staring at him. Her eyes looked unfocussed like lost in some deep thinking.
"Nivi, are you okay?" Viren called out feeling very nervous. He panicked to see Nivi like this. Suddenly something flashed in Nivi's eyes. She took some long and quick steps towards him and caught his shirt collar in her fists.


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Posted: 11 years ago
REALIZATION OF LOVE
PART- 46


To say that Viren was shocked would be an understatement. One glance at Nivi completely shook him. Her face went white as chalk completely blank devoid of any color and emotion. Her fists clutching his shirt's collar had a tight grip on him. After staring at him for a fair amount of time, Nivi spoke in a low yet full of warning voice, "tell me what should I do to make you believe that I love you? Just tell me Viren."
Viren was about to say something when Nivedita shouted at him "JUST TELL ME DAMMIT!!!!!!" Viren gulped completely scared to see her like this. He brought his hands forward to place them on Nivi's shoulder when she pushed him away from her using all her strength. Viren stumbled a bit, took few steps back to balance himself. He stared at Nivi in disbelief. This was worst than he ever imagined. Nivi turned away from him, her body shook a bit as she started crying silently. Once again her life dragged her back from happiness which broke her heart completely. Everyone was right, she is a manhoos.

Nivi started sobbing silently. A muffled sob escaped from Nivi's mouth. Unable to hold herself back anymore, she fell on the couch with a loud thud, her body giving up. Tears flowed down continuously from her eyes. She started sobbing loudly. On the other hand, Nivi response made him think deeply once again. Lost in his own thoughts, tears formed in his eyes clouding his vision. Continuous sobs from Nivi broke his trance. He blinked his eyes few times, tears fell from his eyes. It took few minutes to understand the scenario playing in front of him. To him, Nivi looked like a lost person. A lump formed in his throat and a sharp pain was felt in his heart. He cannot see her breaking down like this. He took few steps, knelt before her on the floor, looking up at her. He cupped her face, wiping the tears with his thumb. He whispered "I just want the best for you Nivi. I don't want you to compromise on anything because of me. If you want to leave me, I will not stop you. I want you to be happy."
Nivi stared at him with wide eyes shining with tears. She spoke in a broken voice "you want me to be happy right? " Viren nodded unable to say anything. Nivi touched his hands and caught them gently in between her hands. She stared at him and replied in a pleading voice "then include me in your life, Viren. I want to be with you at every phase of your life as your life partner. I want you to reciprocate my love. You are my everything. Give me back my husband who loved me crazily, Viren. Give him back to me. I need his support to move on in my life." Viren stood up freeing his hand from her grip. He pulled his hairs furiously. He was angry with himself. His Nivi was in tears just because of him. He buried his face in his hands and spoke "I want to love you back, Nivi. You are the one whom I loved always with all my heart. But the guilt of forced marriage is eating me. The way you are suffering after our marriage makes me feel that I shouldn't have married you in the first place. This guilt haunts me, kills me.
Viren closed his eyes and spoke "sometimes I feel it would have been better if you would have got married to Sid. He was your love and you would have led much more happier life than this. I wish I wouldn't have ever came back in your life." Viren looked up at Nivi who looked shocked. He stood up and went near her. He touched her face hesitating a bit and called out "Nivi !!!!!"
Nivi jerked his hand away and stood up on her feet next moment. Before Viren could understand anything, Nivi caught his collar once again and yelled "why can't you understand that I NEVER LOVED SIDDHARTH. It was an infatuation, nothing else. He was my best friend. I liked his humble behaviour and got attracted to him. But what HE did? HE DITCHED ME. I wouldn't have ever married a guy without a spine and courage to support truth. I MARRIED YOU ON MY WILL. YOU NEVER FORCED ME. You gave me a choice and I accepted it. I agree with the answer that I gave you earlier. I wouldn't have married you if I didn't wanted to save di's marriage."
Nivi's expressions softened a bit as she spoke "Marrying you was the decision I took under pressure I accept that but it was the only decision I took in my life and never regretted it ever. I felt proud whenever I thought that I am your wife. I agree that our marriage was a bit kind of forced but how can you expect me to trust a guy whom I knew from barely 10-15 days when your own cousin broke my trust and your own family tried to insult my dadi and papa? All the time when I met you before we became friends, you always replied very rudely to me. Only later I realized that you behaved like that only because I was trying to portray myself as a weak person in front of everyone and you wanted me to fight back with anyone who tried to misbehave with me. You are my life partner in every sense Viren." Nivi cupped his face looking straight into his eyes "You always supported me, always fought with everyone for me and I always saw how much you love me in your eyes. How can you expect me to not love you back Viren? "
Holding his hands gently, she whispered "I want to live my life with you. Without you, my life mean nothing to me. Please don't do this ever again with me. But if the guilt of forced marriage isn't letting you live in peace, then I am ready to marry you again. This time with my wish to be with you not for saving anyone's marriage. Please don't push me away from yourself. I can't live without you." Happy tears flowing from his eyes, Viren squeezed Nivi's hand lightly, his heart jumping with joy. He spoke in a serious voice "think again Nivi. Do you really want to spent the rest of your life with me?" "Of course yes Viren. But why you wanted me to think again?" Nivi replied in a hurt voice. "Because after today even if you want to go away from my life, I will not let you go." Viren replied laughing a bit. He engulfed Nivi in a tight embrace feeling relieved. Nivi smiled while resting her head on his chest, listening his heart beat. He captured her lips in a passionate kiss, holding her possessively in his arms.
After kissing her for a fair amount of time, he stepped back inhaling some air, resting his forehead against her. They smiled at each other. After looking at each other for a long time, Viren scooped down picking Nivi in his arms. He went towards the bed, laid her down in the middle of the bed. Tucking her inside the duvet, he kissed her forehead and whispered in her ears "goodnight Nivi. Switching off the lights, he joined her on the bed holding her tightly in his arms. They both closed their eyes hoping for a good sleep.

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Posted: 11 years ago
will update next week only...happy reading๐Ÿ˜‰

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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update Neeti.i loved it so much.how beautifully u explained everything.loved the way nivi expressed her love for Viren n loved the cute last part when viren said now if u will ever want i will not let u go ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜ณ.wating for next part Next week ๐Ÿ˜›
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Posted: 11 years ago

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Super duper updates ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜› Ekdum JHAKAAS wali๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜‰
I really love the way u made Nivi express her feelings for Viren... really nivi's dialogues r the highlight of these updates...๐Ÿ‘...
these updates r ur best ones... seem the track is again back to happy wala ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Ab kya kare... aap hai hee zyada tareef ke layak... jitni kare utni kum...
Love u dear for keeping the Nivren's memories alive ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 11 years ago
I loved these 2 chapters, just loved them, can't wait for your next update :D
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