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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: FizaluvsKinshuk

Lovely super chapters Neeti, loved them both, made me smile</font>๐Ÿ˜ƒ

awww ๐Ÿ˜ณ thank u so much fizu mwaah ๐Ÿ˜›
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

awesome part loved it cont soon

thanks dear ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ur comment means a lot for me ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: UZIS

๐Ÿ˜ŠHey Neeti, this FF is just awesome.

I read all the updates... all r just lovely๐Ÿ˜ƒ... n these make me miss NIVREN even more๐Ÿ˜•
i knw i m commenting on this ff after a really long time... but i cant even say sorry๐Ÿ˜ณ as u dont permit me to do so...
i m waiting for the next update ๐Ÿ˜›


hey Uzi...you know what i always wait for your comment yaar...every time you comment on my ff you just make me so happy๐Ÿ˜ƒ...that's ok atleast you read it as i knw you are such a busy girl๐Ÿ˜‰
๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: deepti_9

very good update Neeti.you totally rock..loved the way nivi showing her love for viren n want viren to be with her๐Ÿ˜‰wating for next part.๐Ÿ˜Š


hey Deepti ๐Ÿ˜ƒ i know you always love my updates yaar๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜‰...thanks for such a sweet comment...btw i am saying thanks as a writer not as a friend ๐Ÿ˜†..love you๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: achu28

awesome updates neeti.i just loved it.loved the scene where viren showing anurag he is dead i was just laughing reading that scene.

really missing nivren more after reading ur ff.
continue soon dear.๐Ÿ˜Š


awww that's really sweet of you Achu dear๐Ÿ˜ณ ...i also miss NivRen and i guess that's what keeps me going to imagine more and more about NivRen and write about them๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 11 years ago
REALIZATION OF LOVE
PART-38


Nivedita was lost in her own thoughts when the door bell rang. She quickly opened the main door to see Tani standing there looking very happy.
"Hey Nivi how are you?" Tani squealed with delight
"Pretty good. You look very happy Tani? Anything special?" said Nivi trying to sound nice to her.
"Offcourse something special is going to happen tonight. But for that we both must look beautiful. So Nivi come, we are going for shopping."
"Shopping???? aah actually Tani I don't want to be rude but I don't like to go on shopping." Nivi tried to escape from the situation.
"No Nivi we are going and that's final. Don't you want to knock Viren dead after seeing you looking truly beautiful in tonight's party?" Tani dragged Nivi out of the house without listening her excuses.

Tani and Nivi went out for shopping. They went inside a mall. Nivi was checking out some saree when Tani came there with a dress in her hand
"Nivi how is this ?"
Nivi looked at the dress and smiled "Tani you will look gorgeous in this dress."
Tani rolled her eyes and spoke "This is not for me, that's for you Nivi."
There was 2 minutes silence between them after which Nivi smiled nervously "Nice joke Tani."
"Arre but I am not joking?"
"Tani have you gone crazy? I never wear dresses like that. You know I wear sarees usually."
"Haan I know but just try this, something new from your usual clothes. I am telling you Viren will go gaga over you after seeing you in this dress." Tani tried to convince her.
"No way I am going to wear this dress Tani."
After half an hour, Tani managed to convince Nivi to wear the dress for the party. After Tani was done with her shopping, they went to some coffee shop and dropped the shopping bags on the nearby table.
"Two cold coffee please." Tani placed the order. Waiter went after taking the order. Tani stared at Nivi who was busy in looking outside.
"So Nivi !!!"
Nivi looked back at Tani and said uncertainly "Ya ??"
"Tell me how Viren proposed you?"
"Urrmm...Actually he never proposed me properly. I mean he told me I love you many times and supported me in every situation. But the proper proposal thing never happened in our relationship." Nivi replied honestly.
Tani was shocked to hear this "Are you trying to say that Viren never proposed you ever?"
Nivi nodded her head in agreement unable to say anything, feeling totally uncomfortable while discussing this topic.
The shocked expressions on Tani's face were quickly replaced by angry one. Tani banged her wrist on the table loudly "See this is it !!!! Boys always do that !!!!"
Nivi looked around nervously "Calm down Tani. Its OKAY !!!"
"No Its not yaar. You know Anurag did the same. We studied together in school and in college as well, but he never proposed despite knowing that we both like each other. He never gathered courage to propose me. You know at last I had to confess my love for him during our graduation night. I am telling you these boys are just the same. They can kiss any girl, but cannot propose the girl they love." said Tani furiously.
Seeing Tani getting hyper, Nivi started thinking how to calm her down. Finally she said in low voice "So You three studied together in school and college?"
"What ???!!!! Oh yeah we did, and Nivi you know girls used to drool over Viren so much.Every girl in college and school had a crush on Viren. Every week, he used to get atleast one proposal from girls to be with them." Tani giggled
Now it was Nivi's turn to get angry "WHAT !!!! Umm I mean really !!!! then what he used to do?"
"Offcourse he used to say No as he was deeply in love with you." replied Tani in a matter-of-fact tone.
Now this really surprised Nivi. She was touched to know this but still she spoke out of curiosity "But how could this be possible? I mean Viren was sent to hostel when he was a kid and we never met again for years till Sid and Divya di's marriage preparations started."
"I Don't know. I mean he used to keep your childhood pic close to himself always without fail and everyday he used to stare at the pic for hours." said Tani uncertainly

Tears started to form in Nivi's eyes. Tani was staring at her continuously. She saw tears falling down from Nivi's eyes. "Hey Nivi Why are you crying? Did I said something bad ?"
"N...N...Nooo its just that I used to think that no one loves me. I was 4 years old, when my mom died. After her death, My father started keeping himself busy with office work so that he won't miss my mom. Only my dadi, my brother was there with me. People used to say that I brought bad luck for my family. I never thought anyone will ever love me like this. How ironic is it na? The moment I was hating myself, someone fell in love with me crazily."
Tani kept her hand on Nivi's hand and assured her "That's because you deserve it. I never saw such a selfless person like you Nivi."
Nivi and Tani smiled at each other and started sipping coffee while chatting with each other.

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Posted: 11 years ago
REALIZATION OF LOVE
PART-39


In evening, Nivi and Tani came back home to see Viren and Anurag sitting on the sofa and discussing something. When they heard some noise, they looked up to see Nivi and Tani entering in the house carrying shopping bags in their hands.
"So you guys went for shopping?" said Viren trying to start a conversation.
With a glance at Nivi, Tani replied "offcourse Yes Viren but don't worry we didn't emptied your and Anurag's whole bank balance."
"Thank you your highness for your minor mercies" spoke Anurag while bowing his head down in front of Tani.
Ignoring Anurag, Tani asked Viren "So you guys got anything to wear for the party?"
"Yeah. By the way what you bought Nivi?" Viren stared at Nivi.
After seeing Viren staring at her, Nivi lost all her courage and stammered "Wo...Wo...Viren."
She was about to answer him, when Tani caught her hand and started moving upstairs while announcing "WE are going to get ready for the party."
Nivi looked back at Viren and saw him looking all confused.

Nivi came out of the washroom after wearing the dress and checked out her reflection in the mirror. She looked back at Tani who was standing there like a statue- wide eyes, mouth open and shocked expression on her face.
"I am looking that bad Tani?" questioned Nivi while turning back to again look at her reflection.
Tani replied excitedly "Oh my god Nivi I didn't knew you will look this beautiful in this dress. You are looking just stunning, out of this world. Mr. Viren Sood get ready for the biggest surprise of your life."They giggled together.

Viren went towards his room to check if Nivi got ready. He was feeling a bit weird the way Nivi and Tani were behaving. He came near his room to see its locked from inside.Viren was surprised, Nivi never locked their room from inside ever. He knocked on the door "Nivi, Tani are you inside ?"
He heard some hurried whispers and footsteps and finally after some time, Tani opened the door a bit popping her head out and looking at Viren "Yes Viren ????"
"Tani where is Nivi?" Viren now got very suspicious
"She is right here with me. What you want Viren?"
"I just came to say that we should go now. Its time. You both come out while I will start the car." said Viren ,moving downstairs.
"Viren you go with Anurag, we will come later." Tani informed him.
Viren stopped and turned back at her "What are you doing with my wife, Tani?"
Tani gave him a quick smile "Turning her into a vampire. Stop inquiring about her Viren, I am not a mass murderer. Go."
Without hearing Viren's reply, Tani again closed the door and looked at Nivi who was hiding behind the door. They both let out a breath of relief and again went back to what they were doing.

Viren and Anurag were standing outside the restaurant waiting impatiently for Nivi and Tani from past half an hour. They kept looking at the watch again and again. Both dressed in black tuxedo, were looking furious.
"What are they doing yaar?" Viren roared.
"I am wondering the same yaar. Don't know what Tani is going to do with my sweet Bhabhi." Anurag wondered.
"I am telling you Anurag your drama queen fiancee is ruining my wife. I wish we wouldn't have introduced them to each other."
Anurag nodded his head curtly in agreement.

"Finally they are here." Viren announced while looking at the approaching car. The car stopped and the door opened. Viren walked towards the car to scold Tani. He saw them coming out of the car.
Viren opened his mouth to say something to Tani but words never came out of his mouth. His heart stopped beating for few seconds. He forgot to breath. He wasn't able to believe what he saw in front of his eyes.
Nivi was standing in front of him, wearing an off shoulder baby pink floor length gown and matching heels. She was wearing drop-shaped earring in her ears, a simple yet very beautiful diamond bracelet in her hand and drop-shaped locket around her neck, while holding a tiny glittering silver purse in her hand.She chose to keep her hairs open and brought them forward on her left shoulder. When she looked at Viren, a smile appeared on her face and she started walking towards him looking at him shyly, whereas Viren's mind stopped working to think anything. He stood there while looking at his wife with dreamy eyes.
Edited by edwardcullen19 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Guys in last update there were some mistakes so sorry for that...please hit the like button and do comment๐Ÿ˜Š
will update again this week surely๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 11 years ago

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Superb updates dear ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ‘
Would hav loved to see Nivi in such a lovely pink dress
So grand dress preparations for the party...๐Ÿ˜‰ ,,,, waiting for the next updates๐Ÿ˜›
No delay this time pls... write every weekend pls๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 11 years ago
Neeti awesome update yaar..u rock...i just loved reading it..just love nivren in your ff..really wanted to see this in reality๐Ÿ˜ณwating for next update soon๐Ÿ˜‰
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