Chakrabyuh New RishNa FF,Chapter 3 UPDATED 13.10.2016 - Page 4

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: gaurav84

So rishab made an entry but badly injured...hope Raina finds her rishab soon...can't wait for next parts...good going😊


Thanks Gaurav for your lovely comment. Glad that you are liking the story. Next Part, Coming Up.😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chapter 3

Doctor Soumen Desai - We removed all bullets from his body, but next 72 hours is critical. Aditi make necessary arrangement to shift Rishabh in ICU.

Prashant Dixit- When he will back in his senses?

Soumen-dad, he is still not out of danger.

Prashant Dixit took a deep breath.

Aditi- Please dad, relax. don't take too much stress, that can increase your BP.

Prashant Dixit- You both are not understanding the seriousness of the situation. Anyway, but be careful both of you. It should remain a secret that Rishabh is here.

Aditi- Dad, I have a request. Please make arrangement to bring Raina here. She has the right to stay with her husband & Rishabh really needs Raina this time. Prayer, faith & love can do any miracle.

Lt.General Prashant Dixit, former head of Defence Intelligence Agency, now he is retired but still he is a important part of Defence Ministry. Major Rishabh Srivastava considered him as his Guru. Prashant Dixit had noticed Rishabh in his visit in Indian Military Academy. He took Rishabh in his Intelligence wing & trained him. Prashant Dixit's wife, Doctor Archana Dixit died 2 years ago. She also used to love Rishabh very much. She founded the Nursing Home in Chandigarh. Prashant & Archana's only daughter Aditi is also a doctor, who is married to Doctor Soumen Desai. Both together manage the hospital & are good friend of Rishabh & Raina.

Raina was arranging all the scattered things in her house. She carefully put the small Lord Krishna's idol & the Srimad Bhagavat Gita book in the rack. Rishabh is an atheist. But his mother regularly used to do the puja & Raina accompanied her mother-in-law. What the intruders tried to find in this place? Raina carefully looked here & there but she got nothing. Raina lighted a diya."Please Lord, let him be safe. He is my life."

Raina locked the door of her house. She can't only sit idle & wait for Rishabh. She knows that she is under scanner of the Investigation team. But she is not afraid. It is her trust in Rishabh, he can't do anything wrong & truth always prevails in every difficult situation. She has to start from the accident site. Raina sat in the car & closed the door. She noticed a mobile phone in her car seat. Raina was surprised. She left her phone in the house then this phone? Who put it in her car??The phone started ringing also. The rings are coming from a Private number. Raina received the call.

"Doctor Capt.Raina Srivastava, Come in the City mall & parked your car finding an empty place in the parking lot."- A female voice instructed her. Before Raina could respond, the lady cut the phone. Is it a trap?? The thought came in Raina's mind. "No, my gut feeling is saying, Soon, I will meet with my Rishabh". Raina started her car. She parked her car in the City mall parking lot, took the mobile & entered into the mall & started roaming in the shops. After sometimes, another car entered in the parking lot & a lady came out from the car. She also entered the mall. Raina received a message from the mobile."Come in Washroom". Raina looked here & there but followed the instruction. She can't ignore the fact Rishabh spent most of his time in Defence Intelligence. As soon as Raina came in front of the door of Washroom, someone pushed her inside & locked the door. Raina looked at the lady in front of her."Take this dress & change it."

Raina- Where is Rishabh?? Just tell me, he is fine.

The Lady- I don't know. I am only following the instruction.

Raina sighed & took the dress for her hand & closed the door. Soon, she came out changed in a black kurti & jeans. The lady gave her a sunglass. Raina wore it.

The Lady- Now, you give me your clothes & car key & take my car key."DL 02 ****".It was parked just beside your car. Take this mobile & give me which you are using. You will get further instruction in it.

Raina- Thanks.

But the lady not responded. She stood there without any reaction. Raina came out from the mall, went in the parking lot, took the car & left. Soon after she left, the lady came in the Parking lot wearing Raina's dress, took Raina's car & went in different direction.

Chandigarh, Nursing Home, ICU,

The only noise was of the machine displaying the patient's heart beat.

Flashback

Rishabh kept his left ear in Raina's tummy. She is five months pregnant with his child.

Rishabh- hii Princess. How are you doing inside? I am your papa.(& he lightly kissed her tummy)

Raina (giggled)- Rishabh, how you know it's a girl??

Rishabh- I just know. Now, don't disturb. I am talking with my princess.

Raina- & what about Princess mother??

Rishabh- I am angry with her. She is not taking proper care of herself.

Raina- Rishabh, you know it impossible to take maternity leave now. Plus, I am very much taking care of myself & you are forgetting I am a doctor & whole day I am staying in Hospital with other senior doctors.

Rishabh- I am worried. This is my first time.

Raina- ohh really?? Main to kitni baar maa ban chuki hoon. Rishabh,its my first time also & I am fine. Don't take tension.

But Rishabh remained silent.

Rishabh- If anything happens with me, you both will manage right???

Raina- What?? What you just said?? I already told you right, don't you dare talk with me in this topic.

Rishabh- Raina be practical. It is the life of a soldier. I have some responsibilities.

Raina- & what about your responsibility towards me & our child?? What I wanted from you?? Every night of yours??Tell me, one single moment when I stopped you while you are going to fulfill your duty?? Did I ever complain?? You know I cherish every moment when you are with me.

Rishabh sighed. He came closer to her & captured her lips with his. At first he was slow and gentle but as soon as he felt her responding back he deepened the kiss and made it more passionate.

Raina - Don't you dare to think I can leave you that easy. You will find me always with you.

Rishabh- Okay, okay. My possessive wife. I will tell Yamraj I don't want to come with you without Raina.

Raina- Just shut up Okay.

Flashback Ends.

Rishabh finds himself in a dark tunnel. He looked here & there but he failed to locate any trace of light.

"Where am I?? Raina, Raina. How can I break my promise?? I can't live without her"

"A TRUE SOLDIER FIGHTS TILL HIS LAST BREATH, GET UP & MOVE"- Lt.Gen.Prashant Dixit deep voice booms in the darkness.

Rishabh tried to get up but he felt a tremendous pain in his body. His mind kept trying but his body giving up.

"Papa, Papa. Where are You?? I am missing you. Come Back Soon."Rishabh heard her daughter voice. She is calling him. He heard her crying also. With Renewed effort, he started trying to get up.

"I am coming Princess."

Rishabh got up & he was frantically trying to find a way out from this darkness. But he felt His Body burning & losing. He started taking small steps.

Raina rushed inside the ICU. Her heart shattered to see him in such state. He was looking so pale. Machines attached with his body. She sat next to him & tightly hold his hand & started kissing it. Her tears soaked Rishabh's hand."You Can't Go Rishabh. I am not leaving you at any cost."

Rishabh is still lost in darkness. He is taking small steps, suddenly a hand caught hold of him. Rishabh stopped in his path. He saw his mother standing there in the darkness.

"maa" a whisper came out from his lips & a droplet of tear escaped from his eyes. His mother tightly hold his hand."You took wrong path Rishabh. Come with me."Rishabh followed his mother just like he used to follow her in childhood. He saw a faint light in distance. His mother kissed his forehead & wiped his tears & left in the darkness. Rishabh tried to follow her. But now he can feel a warmth. He can feel Raina. She is crying. He went towards the light. He is remembering their marriage, how tightly he hold her hand. He remembered first time holding Anu in his hand.

Rishabh remembered the dark night. He was trying to save the file. He was already injured. Two bullets already hit him. Some people caught hold him. One put his booted leg on his bullet wound. He cried out in pain. They tried to snatch the file from him. Suddenly more bullets hit him & he finally fall in the ground. His last sight was they left with the confidential file.

Raina noticed the Zig-Zag design in the machine. It getting up. Rishabh's right hand clutched the bed-sheet.

In Kolkata,

Sananda Banerjee was standing in the entrance of Metro. The area is crowded with many people. Suddenly someone plough into her. She tightly hold her bag. Soon, a man, almost 6 ft.in height & fair complexion came near her murmered the numbers "512567". Sananda took out a yellow envelope from her bag & handed it to him. The man was lost in the crowd. But Sananda discovered a small chit in her bag."I am sorry.I cannot come to take the envelope. I am being followed." Sananda started sweating. With a shivering hand, she dialed Prashant Dixit Number.

In New Delhi,

A middle-aged lady was sitting in the Police Station. She came to file a FIR.

"Officer, My husband is missing. Punit Sanyal, he is a scientist of DRDO (Defence Research & Development Organization).


Thats all for today. Waiting for reviews.

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Posted: 8 years ago
#33
Wonderful chapter Madhu😊
I loved how Rishabh talked to his princess❤️
I will update that SS soon😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#34
really loved it dear...
very well written...
loved that flashback part the most...
plzz do give more flash back moments of RishNa..
really loved it...
thnx fr the pm dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
#35
Wow... really great...so RishNa met finally...loved the flashback scenes ...Rishab talking to annu in Raina's tummy...RishNa flashback scenes...their kiss...Rishab's anxiety in dark tunnel...his mother's guidance.. he remembering Raina in unconscious state...the suspense...everything was so balanced...the story is really getting interesting...and thanks for the pm...pls continues soon😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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First let me tell u dat i am a hard core defence personnel fan.. I luv evrythin about Army... So dis was such a treat.. Thnk u.. Cntinue soon.. :D
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Brilliant update Madhu, just loved it. I'm just awestruck by your thought process. How do you think so differently. The story has everything, thrill, romance, suspense , sentiments just everything. The kiss, the baby talk and the restlessness in the tunnel, lovely Madhu.
Thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#38
madhumita...i like your fanfic..please continue sooon :D,raina became a military doctor n aham became an army officer, they are very suitable eachother, very interesting story ..keep update
Edited by Dwia12 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#39
full on emotional chapter
poor rishab still not out of danger 🥺
thank god prashant dixit is rishab guru & good man 😊
finally rishna met
it was heart breaking moment for raina seeing rishab in that condition 🥺
poor rishab tried to save that confidential file but look like he couldn't as he was injured 😭
hope rishna will find out mastermind
continue plz
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Posted: 7 years ago
#40
its been longtime sania still no update? 😲
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