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Posted: 14 years ago

Jaane yeh kaise Hua - Part 25

Its a brand new day floods washing away the sun rising
and we see imu taking payal home
Payal: i'm sorry imu i went off like that
Imu: its ok yaar
Payal: ur a gud friend😊
Imu gets fraustrated on hearin 'friend' he wants to be more and stops walking payal frowns
Payal: kya hua
Imu: payal i
Payal: u what
Imu: i love you
Payal is shocked 😲 and doesnt know what to say
Imu: i loved you since we first became friends
Payal: imu i
Imu: i know you stil love bhaskar
Payal: nahi i know u loved me leekan always bhaskar came to mind and i jus
Imu nods away: i get it comon let me drop u home
Payal feels bad for hurting imu once again
Meanwhile Armaan & Bharti are still in the classroom
armaans head is on Bharti's lap her fingers running through his hair
Armaan: have you given any thought about Harvard
Bharti's silent
Armaan: kya hua comon bharti this will be good for the both of us
Bharti: my friends my brother is here i cant leave him Armaan
Armaan straight away gets up and walks towards the window looking out
Bharti: kya hua
Armaan bangs his fist againest the wall
Armaan: damn it bharti i'm ur boyfriend i will take care of u i told u that i love u so much and i am sure payal and every1 will understand and its not like bhaskar is a kid that he cant take care of himself
Bharti: Armaan
Armaan: no just leave it ok
then they hear the door unlock and its mr sharma
Mr Sharma: both u go home and rest and come bk in 2 days
Armaan walks past in anger and bharti just looks on sad
Mr sharma: kya hua Bharti
Bharti: kuch nahi sir *wiping her tears and quickly walks out*
Meanwhile we go bk to the apartment
(imagine its empty and imagine theres a fireplace somewhere and its empty jus use ur imaginations)
Noori's head is on bhaskar's chest the sun shines in her eyes she wakes up her eyes slowly widen as shes wrapped in a sheet and looks up and sees bhaskar staring and then he kisses her forehead
Noori: what are you doing
Noori gets up straight away holding onto the sheet
Bhaskar: hey kya hua *he gets up walking towards Noori
Noori: bhaskar get out
Bhaskar: what
Noori: GET OUT *she screams*
Bhaskar backs up and goes into the other room and changes he sees noori still in a sheet and crying he makes a step towards her and then stops and just leaves and then Noori's fone rings and answers it
Noori: hello
Father: is this Noori
Noori: yes ap kaun and what are you doing with my boyfriend's phone
Father: he is with us in a church his health took abit of bad turn
Noori: kya matalab😲😭
Father: he keeps calling your name i suggest u come down here its St Andrews Church
Noori: ok father i'm coming 😭
Noori hangs up and holds on the phone tightly
Noori: what have i done what i have done 😭😭😭
Meanwhile they show Bhaskar walking on the street and having flashes of the previous night
Bhaskar: i am sorry noori forgive me but i cant forget about last night and i am sure u felt something to and i wont give up on u telling me
then ekta sees bhaskar and frowns
Ekta: bhaskar at this time and that to coming from my apartment building huh interesting *she smirks
1 by 1 boxes appear showing each character
1st box shows Payal looking sad thinking about imu and him hurting
2nd box shows Imu trying to make payal laugh and not show his hurt
3rd box shows Armaan smoking and just feeling anger
4th box shows bharti thinking on what to do and weather to go with armaan
5th Box shows Noori in the car stuck in traffic and suddenly breaks down crying
6th Box shows Bhaskar walking and kicking a stone as he lost in thoughts of Noori
7th shows Harman in a church stil uncouncious and the father doing a prayer for him
to be continued comments wil b appreicated xxx
Edited by BlessedCuteOne - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wooooooow girl loved the part πŸ€— ok bhaskar noori big mess
but Armaan is angry with Bharti 😭 bharti is right big decision to make armaan should give her time😳 love the pictures u pick πŸ‘πŸΌ love class room starting moment between ArBi 😍 love boxes thing at the last πŸ‘

but i don't like Armaan smoking girl
fabulous update love reading ur FF is Awesome continue sooon girl
take care
luv
Naley

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Posted: 14 years ago
Wowow Box effects again huh...πŸ˜‰
Loving the ending part how you showed all the different scenarios with the boxes shifting..
Bhaskar and Noori..hmmm...i wonder what's gonna happen..and man Harman is so funny..i don't know why but i feel like laughing when i think abt him..πŸ˜† Anyways hope he is okay...and for some reason the way you showed Armu being angry with Bharti..and smoking one corner made me think "man that is hot"......πŸ˜† πŸ˜†...though obviously smoking for me is a big no no..πŸ˜ƒ
Poor Immy...Payal still thinks abt Bhaskar..? ....wonder if Bharti will go Harward with Armu or not...
Getting exciting, do carry on! πŸ˜ƒ
Edited by Blueberry_07 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
really nice part πŸ‘πŸ‘
hearts broke😭
immy's heart broke because payal cant forget bhaskar😭..... armaan is sad that bharti is still thinking about her brother😭.... and bhaskar sad because of noori😭..... well did u notice that all the men are sad and women are sad because men are sad......... soooo sad...........πŸ˜† sorry have to laugh on my commentπŸ˜†
well really nice part πŸ˜ƒ
i am really looking forward to know what noori will do now and what bharti's step will beπŸ€”
con soonnn πŸ˜ƒ
nice part
Edited by ghazal_naz - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Wowiieee....noorie...thank u ssoo much for updating...πŸ€— n well feeling quite sad for Immy......Aww....poor dear....but m sure that Payal will surely come around...in time...knwng how much immy really luvs n cares for her...πŸ˜›

N OMG........ArBi fighting...πŸ₯Ί nahiiiiiiiiiiiii.....oh Armu darling...plz calm down...plz understand Bharti......plzzzzzzzzzzz....!! Very sad to see ArBi in pain......
& oh god...dun tell me Noorie feelng guilty abt the nite wit Bhaskar... oh man...Bhaskar must b so sad.....!! Hope Noorie realises that she is no longer in luv wit Harmaan...n doesnt blame herself abt Harmaans condition.......
Luvly update...n m very anxious to knw abt Harmaans condition....πŸ˜’
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Posted: 14 years ago
Tension tension tension
But I am loving it NooriπŸ˜‰
Loved the box thing you used😊

@Gazal, you always make be laughπŸ˜†

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Posted: 14 years ago
😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭. story of my life bein hurt and havin to act ok 😭😭😭😭😭😭 (time my cat got ran over 😭😭😭) anyways, nice updateeeeeeeeeee love itπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: kaninikabasuray



@Gazal, you always make be laughπŸ˜†

reallyπŸ˜‰
thanks
i will take it as a compliment couse i know it isπŸ˜†πŸ˜†
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Posted: 14 years ago
thanx for ur comments guys wil cont soon xxx
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Posted: 14 years ago

Jaane Yeh Kaise Hua - Part 27

We see a guy in a garage fixing his car when suddenly the garage doors wide open
the guys pop up and we its imu staring at the gawjus sexy Anita Hassandani
Immu's jaw dropped and this song begins to play
(music playing
she roars lolz sori ahem and he acts all tough and leans bk againest some boxes and falls she calls him over and he begins to cry and they both begin to dance a lil then she begins to chase him around and he holds on to some rope and swings round the room and stil chasing him she stops and does a lil seductive dance and he grabs a bottle and drinks it and gives a tough face and then payal magically appears and winks at immu)
(Immu: Kab maine ye socha tha
Payal & Anita turn around)
(Immu: Kab maineye jaana tha
Swings the bottle and throws it and Payal shrugs him off and walks away whilest anita dancin a lil)
(Immu: Kab maine ye socha tha
Anita and Payal dancing swaying their hips as immu is dancin in the middle)
(Immu:Kab maineye jaana tha
Then shows him singin infront of anita and she is shocked and payal is behind her)
(Immu: Tum itna badal jaoge
Immu holdin his arms out and Anita head on his chest and he holds onto payals hands from behind)
(Immu: Tum itna mujhe chahoge
Immu turns round stil holdin onto payal's hands)
Immu: Tum itna pyaar karoge
and he hugs payal and anita looking confused as she doesnt see any1 and hes hugging himself
Then suddenly the doorbell goes yes ppl it was a dream!
Immu: ramu kaka u go get it
Then theirs a knock on the door
Immu: arre ramu kaka i said get it na
Payal: immu
Immu's head shoots up
Immu: na ur not real
Payal frowns
Immu: i mean y wud u come bk here ur not real And my god u were so gud in my dream had a face off with anita u know that
Payal: Acha *then she pinches his arm*
Immu: owwwww o shit u r real o shit what did i tel u
Payal laughs
Immu: why u here u made it clear 2 me
Payal: immu i jus
Immu: no i want u 2 leave now
Payal: immu i wanted 2 talk
Immu: well u have made it quiet clear these last few dayz and u know what i cant be bothered anymore being just a friend so til u know what u want then talk to me
Payal shocked jus leaves and shakes her head
Immu: sorry payal this was the only way 2 see how u feel about me
Meanwhile Bharti is on her bed and thinking weather to go with Armaan or not
Bharti: god give me a sign just 1 sign what shall i do shall i go with him or stay here
suddenly the phone rings and its Armaan
Bharti: hello
Armaan: hey bharti i jus wanted 2 say i'm sorry and i wont force u anymore
Bharti: i want to come with you
Armaan: kya r u serious
Bharti: haan
Armaan: u have made me so happy i love u so much i love u bharti khanna
Bharti love u 2
then she disconnects the phone armaan frowns and calls her bk but she doesnt answer and buries her head under the pillow then bhaskar enters and answers her phone
Bhaskar: Armaan call bk later
Armaan shocked: uh yh sure bhaskar
Bharti comes out under the pillow
Bhaskar: i heard ur convo just as i came out
Bharti: o um right
Bhaskar: if u want to go america with Armaan then go i can take care of myself sis
Bharti smiling
Bharti: really bhaiya
Bhaskar: haan really
then she tightly hugged him and ran out
Bhaskar: Bharti
She popped her head in
Bhaskar: yh i think u mite wana change ur clothes unless wearing pj's is latest fashion *he laughs*
Bharti: uh i was goin 2
Meanwhile Noori is at home taking care of Harman and is stil in a daze with what happen with bhaskar
Harman: noori
shes busy mixin the soap in the bowl and looking ahead
Harman: Noori *he shouts*
still stirring the the bowl and has flashes of bhaskar and her
Harman comes to the kitchen and taps noori's shoulder
Noori: huh kya hua what are you doing here ur meant to be resting
Harman: i been calling you but it seems u didnt hear me
Noori: i'm sorry *she cries*
Harman: hey kya hua
He hugs her
Harman: kya hua bolo
Noori: i am a horrible person harman u shouldnt be with me *she cries*
Harman: i love u jan so how can i not be with u
Noori lets go
Noori: No harman dont love me pls i am a horrible person i am a *she conts to cry*
just then the doorbell goes and its
Ekta
Harman: hey ekta wats up
Noori turns her head and looks on
Ekta: just wanted to see u silly how u doing
Harman: feeling good after all i got noori to look after me *he smile and winks at noori*
Ekta: you know i saw bhaskar leaving apartment block i thought he would of come n seen Noori
Harman nods his head
Harman: he didnt come n see her infact he came to help her with decorating our apartment and u know with the monsoon weather happening he must of gotten stuck just like i gotten stuck at the office
then he whispers in her ear
Harman: ur looking very hot
and then slams the door noori smiles as he slams the door but then rememebers again and just looks down
Harman recieves a txt
Ekta: cant wait for tonight xx
He smirks
Harman: jaan i have to go office some important work has come up
Noori: leekan ur not well
To be continued
Loves ya love Noori

Edited by BlessedCuteOne - 14 years ago
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