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Posted: 8 years ago
mere comment se pehle hi tumhara update aata jata hai
anyway I'll comment on both updates
Ajab to Ajab hai kya stunt tha... kya performance kya baat kya baat kya baat ...
future FIL fully impressed πŸ˜‰ πŸ‘
aur sabko laga 1000 volts ka jhatka
Pratap to Devdas ban gya yaar πŸ˜•
dadhi badha li, thank god drink nahi kiya πŸ˜› bus an thoda intense wala romantic update hona chahiye

waiting eagerly. update soon
love you
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow wireworks all the way...
The difficult situations Pratap had been through cuts inn a perfect analogy between other difficult situations n the going away of Ajab types situation. N him feeling or wanting her presence was very touching. The void she left behind in him was very very well brought out by just one word EMPTYNESS. BRAVO!!
Shows how entwined they were in each other... Waiting to know how were these 15 days for her as she left with a hope and a longing!!!

And her eyes said a different story from the smiling face; wonder what that was - emptyness of 15 long days, or his pain reflecting in her eyes or was it purely her own pain of seperation?

Ajab definately explained him as her hero to Ratan n all... n when Ratan calls him the hero she is again very afraid of distancing him. Hero rescues n sometimes does walk away. How can she let that happen, she already had been through 15 long days n night... so starts throwing the usual banter of do this n do that for me to keep him near. Again making things personal between them like butler,shawffer, bodyguard... Pratap take the cue n make a move rather strike the jackpot!!!

Even the walk sequence ~ Ajab behind her Pratap n the rest behind them... N hey where's Akbar n BK they also came to Bijolia rt??

Garima throughly enjoyed the update n waiting for more..

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ramya06

Wow! Update was superr se bhi bahut uparr! πŸ‘ ⭐️
Personal chef and butler! 🀣 Apni baijilal ne na jane kya kya bana diya hai pratu ko. πŸ˜† But jo bhi hai,great going ajab. ⭐️ ⭐️ Loved the songs you added in both the updates,perfectly suiting the situations. ❀️
Do give next update soonish. πŸ˜› πŸ˜‰



Ramya my firstie
Ajabde waapis aa gayi hai ab toh Pratu ko sab kuch banayegi and this time Pratu bhi maze lega
Thanks re
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Nonie12345

Fantastic chapter GarimaπŸ˜ƒ



Thanks Nonie
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ApekshaM

update ekdam mast tha!!πŸ₯³

pratu ka jungle was bohot ghana ki mein toh kho hi gayiπŸ˜† πŸ˜›
ok so ajab ka butler is backπŸ˜‰ chal bhai lag jaa kaam pe.. payment baadme dengeπŸ˜›πŸ€£

mela dilon ka aata hai..
ek baar aake chala jaata hai😳

yeh mela dilon ka milan ki bela layega..😲 wah wah!!πŸ˜† i'm hoping for lots of praja scenes as ajab is in all'mere hospitality dekho' mode.. so mera popat mat kariyoπŸ˜›

Update soon...
lots of loveβ€οΈπŸ€—



BacchaπŸ€—πŸ€—
Pratu ke jungle ki cutting karwa denge

yeh kaunsa gaana hai baccha??
Praja scenes milenge- masti waale bhi and romantic bhi
Ajabde ki hospitality se sab darne waale hain


Maine kabhi poppat kiya hai kya?

Love you loads to Baccha
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: enaluvfiction

mere comment se pehle hi tumhara update aata jata hai
anyway I'll comment on both updates
Ajab to Ajab hai kya stunt tha... kya performance kya baat kya baat kya baat ...
future FIL fully impressed πŸ˜‰ πŸ‘
aur sabko laga 1000 volts ka jhatka
Pratap to Devdas ban gya yaar πŸ˜•
dadhi badha li, thank god drink nahi kiya πŸ˜› bus an thoda intense wala romantic update hona chahiye

waiting eagerly. update soon
love you



Hey Anamika

Sab log are impressed with her
jhatke lagne shuru huye hain abhi toh
Pratap ka devdas mode hoga switch off soon
Intense romantic update will come after the next one- uske liye thoda background build karna hoga
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sujata_patil

Wow wireworks all the way...

The difficult situations Pratap had been through cuts inn a perfect analogy between other difficult situations n the going away of Ajab types situation. N him feeling or wanting her presence was very touching. The void she left behind in him was very very well brought out by just one word EMPTYNESS. BRAVO!!
Shows how entwined they were in each other... Waiting to know how were these 15 days for her as she left with a hope and a longing!!!

And her eyes said a different story from the smiling face; wonder what that was - emptyness of 15 long days, or his pain reflecting in her eyes or was it purely her own pain of seperation?

Ajab definately explained him as her hero to Ratan n all... n when Ratan calls him the hero she is again very afraid of distancing him. Hero rescues n sometimes does walk away. How can she let that happen, she already had been through 15 long days n night... so starts throwing the usual banter of do this n do that for me to keep him near. Again making things personal between them like butler,shawffer, bodyguard... Pratap take the cue n make a move rather strike the jackpot!!!

Even the walk sequence ~ Ajab behind her Pratap n the rest behind them... N hey where's Akbar n BK they also came to Bijolia rt??

Garima throughly enjoyed the update n waiting for more..




Hey Sujata

You and Ruva are two people whose comments make me go all😳😳😳 with the way you pay attention to the tiniest of details

Akbar and BK are in Bijolia and will make their appearance soon

Those 15days will be shown but from someone else's POV because it will help Pratap realise something very important about Ajabde

Pratap is the hero and he's here to take what is his- we will see him making his move slowly and then he will just take it

Will update tomorrow


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Posted: 8 years ago
Update is served!!!


Chapter 31

The evening saw the families seated together for dinner with the exception of Ajabde who had been called for some work. Kokoiaji thanked Karnawati for allowing Ajabde to stay and taking care of her to which KW said that she considered Ajabde her own and no thanks for was required. Ratan decided to take everyone for a tour of the haveli when an idea crept inside Pratap's brain and a smile on his face

Pratap: Ratan aapki jija kahan rehti hai

Ratan: Arey humne aapko jija ka room nahi dikhaaya. Chalo dikhaate hain

And so everyone was taken to Ajabde's room where Pratap played his next step. Ajabde came home late after everyone had fallen asleep she had been occupied with some work with regards to the mela and the puja. Utterly exhausted she went straight to her room which was on the top floor in the corner- her room had the most magnificient view of the gardens and she had a secret way to the rooftop. Her room walls were double coloured in match of pink-purple colours chosen by her siblings when the room had been redecorated only the ceiling was done according to her- it had the glowing galaxy pasted over it- stars and the planets. The room was quite spacious with a king size bed in the middle with windows on the either side her wardrobe was next to the window on the right side and opposite to it was a temple with Lord Kanha in it and placed nextto him was her first gun out in the open. She removed her jacket throwing it at the sofa seat and then took of her shoes as well. Yawning she plopped down on her bed and closed her eyes suddenly she opened them right back

Ajabde: Yeh bed itna zyaada hard kaise ho gaya? Kal tak toh soft tha (she moved on her bed trying to get as much comfortable and closed her eyes again)

A hand made its way to her waist and she placed hers on top of it- feeling the hairy hand ahd Ajabde in alert so she stealthily moved her leg trying to feel what was on her bed when it found something- she moved her leg up and down (like when one plays footsie) making the hand on her waist tighten its hold. Ajabde now very much awake used her hand to move the hand on her waist and then in a quick move was directly on top of the hardness suddenly the hardness moved a bit but she kept herself stable taking out her knife

Ajabde: Agar zinda rehna chaahte ho toh chup chaap apna face dikhao warna yahin par tumhaara gala kaatkar alag kar dene mein mujhe der nahi lagegi

The covers were thrown and her eyes widened

Ajabde: Tum!!!

Pratap looked at her and then at the knife

Pratap: Kya hai dekh rahi ho na main so raha hoon- jaao yahan se sone de mujhe

Ajabde: So raha hoon...arey par yeh mera room hai

Pratap: Toh

Ajabde: Toh tum yahan kaise so sakte ho? Main yahan soti hoon

Pratap: ohhh but ab main so raha hoon so good night

He threw the covers on himself again only to have them removed forcefully

Ajabde: Dekho kahin aur jaakar so jao. Am exhausted and mujhe neend aa rahi hai

Pratap: Arey aaj subah toh bada keh rahi this ki hospitality dikhaungi- yeh hai tumhaari hospitality

Ajabde had no answer when he continued: Ab main tumhaara guest hoon na toh itna toh kar sakti ho apne guest ke liye

Ajabde: Main kahan jaaon ab?

Pratap: Guest room mein (she looks at him) Dekho raat bahut ho gayi hai aur kisi ne tumhe mere saath dekh liya toh kya sochenge mere baare mein (gathers the covers against his upper body) Suno jaate waqt na lights off karna mat bhoolna. Goodnight

Next morning saw a cheery Pratap chatting with Akbar and Khan Baba- they had taken a small detour to visit a dargah nearby and had just arrived in Bijolia

Akbar: Panga kyun le raha hai usse Pratap she's a scary thing

Pratap: Alag hai- unique hai but scary nahi hai. Waise bhi mujhe itna tang kiya tha usne thoda toh payback banta hai

Ratan and Chand were enjoying the traditional breakfast together both of them had developed a camaradiere and now could be seen together. Suddenly Hansa called for Ajabde but got no response

Ratan: Jija nahi hai ghar par

Hansa: Nahihai matlab ghar nahi aayi thi kya

Ratan: Aayi thi but phir chali gayi thi

Pratap and Akbar were now attentive along with the others

Akbar: Chali gayi?

Ratan: Jija apne silent mode mein thi -lagta hai kisine panga le liya unse

HB: Hey bhagwaan uss bechaare ko bacha lena

Akbar: Aap ko uss bechaare ke liye itni chinta kyun ho rahi hai kakiji?

HB: Meri Ajabde agar gussa kare- scream kare toh theek hai par agar silent ho jaaye toh samjho aafat aane waali hai

Akbar looked at Pratap scared for his best friend and then uttered: Yeh dono perfect hain ek dusre ke liye bas mereko kuch na kare
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Posted: 8 years ago
OMG!!! This one was hilarious!!🀣

pratu is playing tit for tat.. 😲 aise nahi karte bacche.. buri baat hai.. πŸ˜†

and upar se ajab ko guest room mein jaane keliye bola..😲ab toh yeh zaroor pitega..chip jaao kahi pratu.. nahi toh baijilal aajayegi !!!😈

pratu beta.. ab toh bajega tera band.. lagegi teri waat,, pratu ki toh haalat kharab hone wali hai Boss!!🀣

ha bas akbar ko bacha loπŸ˜› nahi toh woh bechara bali ka bakra ban jaayega...πŸ˜† but wait.. bakra toh pratu ban ne wala hai.. jab ajab ka gussa niklega like a volcano BHOOM!!!!😲 🀣🀣 update soon.. i'm eager to know what happens next😳

Lots of love❀️

PS - i'm first this timeπŸ˜ƒ
Edited by ApekshaM - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Akbar Darling tujhe kyu kuch karenge vo dono??? ITs a fight between them both or LOVE...
Hmm Pratap trying to get her room like she did was too good... What must have prompted him was not to trouble her like she did to him but it must be the Ehsaas of Ajab that could not have kept him out of her room!!!

Teri Doori Ka Ehsaas Jab Satane Laga Tere Sath Guzra Har Lumha Yaad Aane Laga Jab Bhi Bhulane Ki Koshish Ki Tu Dil Ke Or Kareeb Aane Laga

He must have slept very peacefully after 15 days with Ajab's ehsaas!!!! N she must have been equally boggled by his presence and him being so near to her. After all its not easy to control oneself when someone you long for is so near to you. N that's why at first when his hand came on her waist she maybe subconsciously knew who that was. I dont think Ajab Pange walla gussa kar rahi hai. Maybe just maybe she is working out a alone moment between the two so that Pratap comes out with what she wants to hear!!! A little pressure from her side will do the trick... 😊😊😊

Pratap bhai bol de esse pehle Ajab par Baljilal ka roop sawar ho jaye knoun ki phir to wo nachayegi tumko...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Khair Pratap to dhundh hi lega Ajab ko aur reason bhi pata kar lega uske jaane ka...

Garima I will be very very glad if this is not the angle you thought of... Its very exciting to get into the writers prospective n decipher their thoughts!!! And even better is their ability to think what you can not reach upto... Are we getting another update today itself...

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