Crime Investigation Department...PrAja FF....Chapter 17 on page 42 - Page 6

Hi Natasha!

I just read all the chapters in one go - and am so excited!!! Can't wait to read more!!

Khadoos Pratap😆😆

ChakraWati 😳😳👏 Loved the teasing too 😆

As for Krishna and Duda - 👏👏👏 nice pairing - looking forward to where you take the story and of course - am looking forward to my darling PrAja meeting and moments

And sorry for being a late lateefa - I just got time out to read the story...

Wishing you lots of success with your story (even though you don't need it 😆😆) and creativity,

RuVa

Originally posted by: RuVa

Hi Natasha!

I just read all the chapters in one go - and am so excited!!! Can't wait to read more!!

Khadoos Pratap😆😆

ChakraWati 😳😳👏 Loved the teasing too 😆

As for Krishna and Duda - 👏👏👏 nice pairing - looking forward to where you take the story and of course - am looking forward to my darling PrAja meeting and moments

And sorry for being a late lateefa - I just got time out to read the story...

Wishing you lots of success with your story (even though you don't need it 😆😆) and creativity,

RuVa

Thanks!! I hope I can write good PrAja moments...I'm not good at romantic scenes you see!! But glad to know that you liked it so much!! Thanks a lot...I'll update in some time...just the revising is left

Hey guys...so this is just some more introduction to the other important relations which are quite important...uske baad pakka you'll have some PrAja and let's hope I can write romantic scenes and mystery scenes well coz I've never tried...let's hope you like all my further updates

Here you go...

CHAPTER 4

At suryavanshi mansion

Pratap lay on his bed all golden because of the morning sun...he usually got up at 5 and did some sport or went to the gym but he had seldom slept so late...it was 9:30 and he had snoozed his alarm about 12 times...

'Pratap!! Pratap wake up!! My god this boy!! Pratap come on its 9:30!!'

'Mom! Some more ti...wait what? It's 9:30?' And he jumped out of bed shocked that he woke up so late..

'Mom!!! You could've woken me up earlier! I'm very very late!!'

'I thought you must have woken up already! But why so late...you normally wake up much earlier and that's a practice you're very particular about!'

'I know! I must have been very tired maybe...I read till late night...I wanted to finish that book you know.'

'Dad called , pratap'

'Ohh..that's great I guess'

'He was saying..'

'Ohh i know what he must have said...tell pratap to join my business and stop this job right?'

'Yes he did...you should talk once and try making him understand...'

'That would me of any use if he is ready to listen...any other father would have been proud mom! I respect him and what he wants but sorry...tell him I would not really like to argue any more so it would be better if he stopped trying to pursue me to do something I'm not keen into...

And saying that he went to take a quick shower and he soon drove away eating an apple on the way...



At punwar bungalow

Ajabde stood in front of the mirror looking at herself with hundreds of questions running in her mind 'am I looking good' 'is this dress too dressy' 'should I we are something else' 'should I tie my hair' and many more such questions...after all this was her first day at work and it was quite important to make an impression on everyone...

She was wearing a navy blue shirt and black pants and a brown colored belt with minimal makeup...she just tied her hair into a smart high pony when her mom entered

'My god ajabde! You look beautiful!'

'Thanks mom! I just hope I don't mess this up...hope it goes smoothly'

'I'm sure that my lovely daughter will do very well'

'Ok mom...I'll rush now...don't wanna be late...mom!!!! did you tell dad? He'll be so angry!!!'

'I know!! But you don't worry! We'll manage somehow...right now you should go...you don't wanna be late right? Bye sweetie!'

'Bye mom..'




So this was it...hope you liked it...also the real story will start to begin...I just hope you'll like it and I match up to your expectations...this is my first attempt to write and so forgive me if I fail to match up to your expectations

All criticisms, opinions, ideas are welcome. 😊 keep loving me and my story and please tell me if you feel there's anything wrong or you want any changes... 😊
And ya! I might take some time to update from now on as I have lots of tuitions + tuition homework+ school work...so please bear with my irregular updates...next update will probably be on Friday...till then enjoy the other wonderful stories and you'll can also go and punish the CVs on the other post I made for all the stupid tracks
Also please leave a comment so that I can send regular PMs 😉

Lovely update Natasha! Pratap late lateef like me 😆😆😆

And Ajabde must look beautiful... Am eagerly awaiting their first meeting - Pratap pehli look mein flat hone waala hai kya?? 😉

Chalo, will wait for your update - no worries girl - studies first!👍🏼

And I'm sure you'll do very well with the rest of the story too 😃😃

Love and creativity,
RuVa

P.S. - I'm first! For the first time!... the alliteration is completely unintended 😆😆

Originally posted by: RuVa

Lovely update Natasha! Pratap late lateef like me😆😆😆

And Ajabde must look beautiful... Am eagerly awaiting their first meeting - Pratap pehli look mein flat hone waala hai kya?? 😉

Chalo, will wait for your update - no worries girl - studies first!👍🏼

And I'm sure you'll do very well with the rest of the story too 😃😃

Love and creativity,
RuVa

P.S. - I'm first! For the first time!... the alliteration is completely unintended 😆😆

Thank you ruva!!!! Yes...pratap is late...but for the first time...and yes Ajabde does look very pretty! 😳
Pratap ka reaction toh baadme dekh Lena! Thanks a lot ya!
And yes you're first for the first time 👏 I should tell you what you usually say...you're very quick and I'm surprised 😆 that alliteration just rocks 😉 I'll try and update whenever my mind works and I get time

Awesome update! 👏So,it is the first day at work for ajab.Now i am waiting for praja's first meeting.😃

Originally posted by: crazy-for-praja

Awesome update! 👏So,it is the first day at work for ajab.Now i am waiting for praja's first meeting.😃

All the best for your studies👍🏼 and Please try to update soon.😛😉

Thanks! Hope you like their first meeting..
Thanks for your wishes...I'll update straight on Friday now, I guess 😉

@Natasha: Read all the four updates in one go. Wow!! Story looks intresting. Great going...waiting for the next update and waiting for some nice PrAja scenes.

Great update nutz waiting for praja meet 😳 best of luck for your studies 👍🏼 and do update soonish 😛

Originally posted by: _CutieCute_

@Natasha: Read all the four updates in one go. Wow!! Story looks intresting. Great going...waiting for the next update and waiting for some nice PrAja scenes.

Thank you! I'll make sure to add some PrAja scenes in the next few updates..I'll try at least! Thanks once again 😉