Crime Investigation Department...PrAja FF....Chapter 17 on page 42 - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Great update nutz I love the intro do continue soon πŸ€—
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sidyali4

Natasha u write very well plzz update... and as ur an amazing writer so plzzz continue the story and don't leave it in between...


Sure! 😊 thank you so much...I'll try to give regular updates and will surely not leave it πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: roshallovepraja

ohk i loved this intro

so update soon


Thanks 😊 I'll update as soon as possible
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: swara98

Great update nutz I love the intro do continue soon πŸ€—


Thank you! 😊 will update soon πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey guys...so here you go with the second update...once again this is only kind of a description..the real story will start some time later..till then enjoy 😊

CHAPTER 2

A beautiful girl sat in her room on her bed with her laptop on her lap looking for the different types of codes..not that she didn't know all of them..she was very particular about details and didn't rest till she found the most minor details of whatever she studied or did...
She sat munching on packet of potato chips while there was a knock on her door
'Come in'
'Ajabde bitiya, saubhagyawati bitiya has come to meet you'
'Send her in ramu kaka'

A girl came storming in with excitement written all over her face...it looked like she was going to burst with happiness

'Hey subho! When did you start asking for permission to enter your bestfriends room?'

'Since you got selected as a CID officer'

'Ohh...that's w...wait what???? What did you just say? Say it again! Come on!! Go on!'

'I said that we will be working together from tomorrow and that you are shortlisted as the new CID officer after Neha left and that I'll have to knock on your door since we are co-workers'

Ajabde jumped with joy and started clapping and jumping with excitement and joy...she was red with excitement and felt like just screaming with happiness

'Madam! Won't you say anything...wasn't this what you always wanted...so atleast give a nice speech of thank you which you have been rehearsing since childhood in front of the mirror'

' I'm just out of words subho!!! I can't express how I'm feeling with mere words!!'

'Ok..so do that with a nice pizza treat for me!'

'I'll buy the entire pizza shop for you idiot! I just love you!! Let me check my email and send my confirmation and then I'll give you your treat'

'Sure!'

She quickly sent her confirmation letter via email to a man called chakrapani who saubhagyawati had started dating recently

'ok, so tell me how the people there are and stuff na!'

'Ok...but the treat first!'

'My god!! I'm not running away na! But tell me na! I can't wait!'

'Arre! But we'll have to have something to talk about while we wait for the food..take me first and then we'll sit and chat and I'll tell you everyone's character and stuff in detail...pakka!'

'Ok, let's go'




Do tell me if you'll liked it...criticism, opinions, ideas are welcome
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Yayyy subho enters the story and the girls are happy
Nice chapter...very excited to see Praja's first meeting

I'm first!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update
Subho dating chakri πŸ˜† well thats very interesting 😊
Edited by Nandini6 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Natasha !! πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€—
Congrats on becoming a writer ! πŸ‘
Oh man ~! The plot is sooo edgy and exciting !
Awesome idea to base this story om crime and investigations ! πŸ‘πŸ‘
Like Pratap in this story, I too am a fan of murder mysteries, crime-detective novels ! 😳
Update soon !! 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Fab update!πŸ‘So bhago has entered the story!πŸ˜ƒ
Looking forward to the next updateπŸ˜›πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: twilightlover29

Yayyy subho enters the story and the girls are happy

Nice chapter...very excited to see Praja's first meeting

I'm first!!!


Thank you!! Yes my firstie πŸ˜‰
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