Crime Investigation Department...PrAja FF....Chapter 17 on page 42 - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: aayu_26

Yay we got a new writer in the forum πŸ‘ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† I wabt this story since I like mystery and don't worry about all that re tum aage badho hum tumhare saatg hae lol πŸ˜† πŸ˜›


Thanks 😊 I hope you like it πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey guys...so this is my first update!! I had to post it some time ago but I could make limited no. Of posts but I just got to know right now that I can make unlimited posts a day now!! Anyway hope you'll like the update...this is kind of description..the actual story will start some time later...here you go:

CHAPTER 1
A tall and handsome man was scanning through the books from an enormous library...he just loved reading murder mystery and found that to be a good pastime apart from martial arts and sports...he was just in love with physical activities and that could be seen by the well built muscles that he had as he loved gyming...he didn't get too much time for his hobby of reading books..but yes! He certainly got a lot of opportunities to practise martial arts on the criminals he had caught...
Coming back, he thought that this particular day was the best day to read as he was quite weary after the tiresome day...he picked out a big fat book, sat on the black couch in the center and started reading.
He was a Crime Investigation Department inspector and was taking charge of the entire team since the last leader had gone..
He lived in a huge mansion with every single facility which could be thought of, provided to him...it had a huge library, spacious rooms, an indoor swimming pool, a huge study for pratap as well as another for his father and also a gym with wonderful facilities.
The library was mainly for his mother who loved indulging herself into reading books while her son was out at work or college earlier...her husband was hardly at home since he had a lot of meetings and conference that he attended and he was out of town most of time...he was a busy man with a huge chain of industries under the name Suryavanshi industries...he wanted pratap to join his company at the head office but pratap had different ideas from the very beginning...he had tried to pursue him to join him saying that he wanted his huge chain of companies in capable hands but all his requests and commands went in vain and he had to surrender to his sons wishes as pratap did not change his mind easily...he was a very very determined boy...
Pratap was also a very practical and intelligent boy with an amazing control over his emotions which was much needed in such an occupation..
He had a strong and confident personality and that made it easy for him to scare the criminals and get them to open their mouths
Apart from that he was also a very dedicated and loyal person with a sense of duty and love for his country and he made it very clear by his acts that would die for his country and its people but he would make sure that he took on as many criminals as he could...

Just as he sat down and started reading, his space grey iPhone started vibrating...
'Hello'

'Hello pratap'

'Ya chakrapani'

'I just wanted to inform you that the decision is made...a new officer will join us from tomorrow...she is most eligible for this job according to all the heads'

'Ok...Name?'

'Ajabde Punwar'


Do tell me if you'll like it...criticisms, opinions, ideas are all welcome

😊
Edited by Natasha_1234 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
Me first!
Great intro nutz looking forward to read the story! πŸ‘ πŸ˜ƒ
And I loved the house that you chose for pratap I mean the interiors are too good 😊 πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice so Ajabde is going to join the team. ..hope pearl foes not act as an akhdoo towards her
Looking forward for the next one
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: aayu_26

Me first!
Great intro nutz looking forward to read the story! πŸ‘ πŸ˜ƒ
And I loved the house that you chose for pratap I mean the interiors are too good 😊 πŸ˜‰


Yes! You're my firstie πŸ˜‰ I love that house too πŸ˜‰...house of my dreams 😳 thanks ❀️
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: twilightlover29

Nice so Ajabde is going to join the team. ..hope pearl foes not act as an akhdoo towards her

Looking forward for the next one


You'll see what happens next πŸ˜‰ though everyone will be quite sweet and she'll gel with everybody quite well... thanks...I'll try and update soon...it might take time though πŸ˜‰
Edited by Natasha_1234 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
Awesome start natasha!πŸ‘ I loved watching CID long back.😳And i like the fact that your story is related to that.
So,ajab is the new officer.πŸ˜ƒ
Update soon,waiting to read more..πŸ˜›

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Posted: 9 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: crazy-for-praja

Awesome start natasha!πŸ‘I loved watching CID long back.😳And i like the fact that your story is related to that.

So,ajab is the new officer.πŸ˜ƒ
Update soon,waiting to read more..πŸ˜›


Thank you so much...will try to update tomorrow πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
Natasha u write very well plzz update... and as ur an amazing writer so plzzz continue the story and don't leave it in between...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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ohk i loved this intro
so update soon
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