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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks everyone. I am a potter head and i am writing this after reading Chamber of secrets. I have taken few ideas from this book. Now here you go the first update.

Chapter 1

We were happy with our life. He was a happy go lucky man. And I was one too. No worries. We had our parents with us as every time. I had my bestie and he had his. Everything was going on fine. We got married after facing a lot to difficulties but never gave up. After we got tied together, we never forgot that we were just friends before being love birds or couples. We had no fixed plans. He was always busy with is work; he leaves for the office by 8 and returns by 6. After that is just our time.

I, to pass time usually go to library nearby and read books there coz it is one of my hobbies. Sometimes I prefer being at home and learn something. I used to like to paint and I paint sometime. Seeing our wedding albums was one of my time pass. It was not even a year since our wedding but still I liked to see all the albums. Sometime my eyes filled with tears or sometimes smile adored my face.

I was with Bhago. We were having something everyone called "gossip". As always she was behind me to tease leaving me all red. I was no less either. I also made her go red. Sometime later a message entered my inbox, I was sure it was from Phool- my sister-in-law but I was wrong. Bhago snatched the phone and saw whose message it was. She started again

Ooo. Already started huh

What do you mean?

See whose message it is.

Give me.

See see

Oh it's from him. (Simile was seen on my face)

What is it?

It says that I have to reach China Town around 6pm.

Ooo, date huh huh

Plz yaar nothing of that sort.

Accepted, btw what are you wearing?

You tell na.

Ohk wear the one he gifted you, that gown, the blue one with long back and flowing one with those diamond necklace.

No no it will be very

Ohk I understand, the wear that spaghetti floral dress and your pendent. Simple and sweet. Fine?

Oh yeah I will wear that only.

Bhago stayed back till I left. I got ready and came out to find her smiling at me. She shouted

Ajab you are toh looking damn pretty. Pratap will toh fall for you once again in just a sec.

Bhago!

Blushing ha ha?

Bhago stop it ha.

Ohk ohk I will. Acha tell me why did you call you today.

I don't know.

What do you know, for everything the answer is I don't know?

Bhago how will I know, why he called me.

Ohk ohk its getting late so let's leave.

Yeah

We left and I went to China Town and Bhago went home. I went and settled down on the reserved table. I was very happy thinking about the very fact why he called me here. He came and sat opposite to me.

So what's all this?

It's something and Ajab I want to give you something.

Give na plz

Close your eyes.

Ohk

Here you go

He captured my lips and there we were spending our evening with a kiss in a restaurant. We were close, extremely close and it was hard to breathe but we didn't bother. We were ready to die due to cut of oxygen supply like this only in each other's embrace. I didn't expect this but enjoyed every second of this moment.

Pratap...

Yes?

Do you love me?

Obviously Ajab, if not why did I marry you after facing all the obstacles in our love, passing every test with flying colors and moreover why did I abandon my step mom who tried to break up apart.

Wow was it Pratap who did this I couldn't believe it; he gave me this short and sweet speech. Ohk I pinched myself to see whether it was dream. No. It was reality.

Ajab do you love me?

Huh?

Do you love me?

Do you love me?

Pratap you know what the answer is?

Do you love me?

Ohk yes I love you.

Do you know why I called you here?

No. Tell na.

I will tell, do you remember the day I proposed you in this very place but in Delhi

Yeah I remember every second of it. But why all this planning?

Just to spend time with my dear wife.

Oh now I understand the reason why you recently started behaving weird

We had our dinner and left. He rushed the car into a mall and took me to a jewellery store at 11 pm to buy what I like. I didn't buy anything special but a chain with a locket cum photo holder. And made him wear one piece and I wore one.

He later took me to forever 21. He bought me a beautiful dress, a floral one with heart cut on the back and full neck top. I loved it. Later we went and saw a romantic film sitting arm in arm with a single can of coke and little popcorn. After everything was done we went home and jumped on bed. I saw a gift next to my bed. With complete enthusiasm I opened it. I found few books and a note

Dear Ajab,

My love and my life here is one set of gifts from me. Please accept it. I love you and will continue loving you.

Your love,

Pratap

I was happy and found few books as gift. One was a diary and others were my favorite novels. I loved the diary so much that I started to use the diary. I wrote about this day and went to bed.

Next day arrived and the first ray of sun fell on my face and it caused my eyes to open. I woke up and saw Pratap was not there. I checked the washroom and the dining room but no he was not there. I went back to the room to see if he left any note. Yes he had left one. It said that we are going to Jaipur and mom, dad, Shakti, his wife Phool, Chand, Maan, Bhago, Chakri and Veni. It also said that he is in the airport and I have to come there with all.

I took a shower and dumped my saree's, one lehenga and few chudi's for night. No western clothing. I could make out why we were going there but was not sure. After getting ready I went to the dining table. All of us had our breakfast and left. Ma told me that we are going there for some special purpose. We reached the airport. Pratap was there. Papa told me and Pratap had to take next flight coz two seats were in the next flight.

We waited in the airport for 2 hours for the flight. We landed in Jaipur in next 3 hours. All were waiting for us. We directly went and took seven rooms for all of us. We all had our lunch together and I left with Pratap after him insisting me to join him to go for site seeing. Chakri and Bhago denied joining with us when asked. I didn't know why they were behaving weird coz they used to follow us everywhere.

I was happy to get some time with my hubby. He was also happy which was written on his face. We went and saw places. I was really happy. We spent money like senseless fools. We ate Dhal Bati and Jalebi and may more. We ate all our favorites and reached hotel and found no one so went to our room and changed. We went to bed as soon as everyone returned.

Precap- Pratap and Ajabde nok jhok

Edited by roshallovepraja - 9 years ago
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A fabulous beginning.👏Loved all the romantic stuff.😳
I'm waiting to know the purpose of the visit,so update soon..😛
BTW,i'm first.😃😉
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Originally posted by: crazy-for-praja

A fabulous beginning.👏Loved all the romantic stuff.😳

I'm waiting to know the purpose of the visit,so update soon..😛
BTW,i'm first.😃😉


thanks. yeah u r first.
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Originally posted by: jyotic74

Superb.. suspense..awaiting

thanx
yeah a big suspense
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Nice update looks like some suspense is there in the ff do update soon
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Awesome title of the story and lovely update,Roshni ! 👏
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Awesome beginning. Awaiting the next one
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Really awesome update! I totally love it! Update soon... ❤️
The title is awesome!! You a potterhead?
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harry potter series in praja style nice thought yr...doo update it...
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thanks everyone was appreciating me
i am back with the second chapter
here you go

Chapter 2

As soon as we woke up we got ready and went for breakfast. After Ma told me that all the ladies are going to the fair and asked me to accompany them. Pratap told me not to but I couldn't deny and went to the room to dress up. Pratap came.

Ajab

What?

Ajab, you can go only if you do what I tell you.

Huh, why?

Coz wanted to spend time with but you want to go with ma so if you

Ohk tell me what do I have to fulfil

Then you have to first promise me.

Ohk promised.

Then give me a

No no

Remember the promise

No means no

Then don't talk to me

Ohk, I am leaving

I just wanted him to be surprised by my actions. I went behind him and gave a peck on his cheeks. He was really surprised. I ran away after this action. But he didn't leave me to go, he held my hand

Ajab

Hmm

Thanks

But for what

For this (and gave me a peck on my cheek)

Pratap

Yeah

Leave me, ma is waiting for me

Ohk bye

Bye

And Ajab I am following you.

What? No no

No Im following you n that's it.

Ohk but I don't know if you get caught.

No worries. All set.

Bye I will leave now.

Bye

I knew why he wanted follow me. I went with all the ladies. We reached the fair and there were many things to see, shop and mostly eat. I love food so my first thing was getting a Jalebi. Best part of the trip I guessed. I loved the way all the gentlemen's were followed their beloved. I was the one aware of it, others were busy I thought. We went to a small shop. Ma told that she knew the person who stitched these lehenga. All of us started picking up many lehengas.

I chose one, yellowish red but Pratap said no by signals. Ma noticed this and she thought to send me but I refused. Then I chose a green blue combo that too he didn't like. He told me to choose something elegant. I saw a pink one with clothing inside and net outside. The net was worked with heavy stones. I loved it. I showed it to Pratap and he accepted it. The lehenga was Amazayn according to me. The dupatta was the best. Net one with border work done and it was looking very pretty.

I brought two more, a greenish yellow one with not too less not too more work. It was simple yet pretty. Ma told me to buy a red one so I bought one red colored lehenga with long border working and purple color blouse and reddish golden dupatta with large amount of work. Ma bought two, Phool bought three and Bhago bought two too. We paid and left.

Then we reached the jewellery shop, and ordered a ring. Ma asked me my choice. I chose one and all of them agreed but I didn't know the reason only why they were buying a ring at this time. I was so busy with choosing jewellery that it slipped out of my mind. Pratap chose one for me, hiding. I loved it so I bought it. When everything was done all of us reached the hotel for a short rest.

Ma came in to the room

Ajabde beta

Ji Ma

Ajabde we are all going for site seeing

Ma but I and Pratap already saw all the places

Ohk then you people can catch a bus and visit Udaipur and return by day after.

Ohk ma

I will talk to Pratap about it.

Thank you ma for giving this idea.

She left the room and I was very happy. Soon Pratap entered. He came hugged me from behind. His sudden action shocked me.

Ajab

Hmm

Ma told me that we can visit Udaipur and return by day after.

Yeah she told me too. I really want to be there.

Ohk then plan confirmed that we are leaving now only.

What? I need time

Ohk I give you five minutes and here take this clothes and wear them, don't wear your saree coz bus journey will be a hectic.

Yeah but

No buts and ifs come on get ready

Go out

No I won't

Pratap go out I have to change

What the hell no one is stopping you from doing so, so change

No I won't until you go out

I am your husband.

So what get out I have to change.

Ohk I give up. Change quickly and come out.

I quickly slipped into the jeans he gave me and put on my tee and a pair of light earrings. I came out and saw him staring at me.

Prat

Shhh

What are you seeing?

You

Huh

I said you

Stop it now and let's go.

I held his hand and dragged him to the reception where we bid bye to our parents and other too and went to the bus station and boarded a bus. I was damn tried and sleepy. So I rested my head on his chest and took a nap. Almost an hour I slept told Pratap when I woke up and that we have reached Jodhpur. I called Ma and told her that we have reached safely. Ma told me to go to the Sisodia Enterprises.

We reached there and told Papa's name. They told us to enjoy and gave us a room. We reached the room to find there were two single beds and not one double bed. Pratap's simile turned into a frown. I could understand. He started behaving weird. I didn't care much coz I knew he would understand why it was so. To cheer up his mood I told him to freshen up and got ready to go out.

We hired a cab and reached the Udaipur palace. I loved going to historical sites so did he. We went and saw everything. He being a successor of the Sisodian kings, we could see many things such as the ancestral room, the library with books written by the queen itself which public were restricted to see. I reached the library whereas Pratap was in ancestral room. I was really excited; I took out my dairy and started writing notes about different queens, kings and many more.

The thing that fascinated me was when my husband's name and my name came in the book. I saw that Maharani Ajabde was Maharana Pratap's wife had written the book. All the names and relationships were same, my parents name, his parents name, his siblings and my siblings too. How was that possible, something was fishy. By the time I could figure out the reason Pratap came and took me away. Thank goodness I had written everything in my dairy.

At first I thought of telling everything to Pratap but when I saw him smiling I could not even dream to tell him all this. Pratap saw me and he found out something was wrong but did not ask me. He knew I would not tell him anything.

We reached the room in the cab. He got a call and went out to attend that call. I thought this to be the moment when I could browse about the things I have written in my dairy. I opened the dairy and found that the page was empty; nothing about Maharana Pratap and Maharani Ajabde was there. Everything was gone. I was a little scared. I wanted to go back to the library but how was the question.

He came back with a serious face. I was like why this leather face. God knows why he was acting so damn weird.

Pratap, what happened?

Ajab the thing is...

What is the thing?

The thing is that I have to fly to Mumbai right now

Why?

It's an emergency

But what happened?

I don't know. You stay back in Udaipur itself for tonight and I will go to Mumbai and come here by early tomorrow.

Can't I come with you?

No Ajab. It will be better if you stay back here only; it's only a matter of a night.

Fine but call me when you are free

Yeah sure

Now get set and go

Yeah or else I will miss the flight

Ohk Ajab plz give me one

What?

That

Pratap again no no

Yes yes

No no every time you want one

Atleast give me a hug

Here you go

Now days Pratap was becoming very naughty I thought. It was a god gifted opportunity for me to go to the library. I hurried quickly and reached the library with my dairy. I opened and saw my dairy completely washed out. Not even my personal information was there. I quickly removed the life story written by Maharani Ajabde but surprisingly nothing was there, only blank pages. Now I was freaking out. I didn't know what to do.

A bulb flashed in my head, I went and showed the book to the current take caring person of the library. He was surprised. He consulted the higher authorities and kept the book in a trash can. When he was busy with something I took the book from the trash and went away.

I reached hotel and first closed all the doors and windows. Then I covered the windows with the curtains. I changed and called Pratap before doing anything. His phone was switched off. I left it. I couldn't wait to see what is there in the book. I opened the book and carefully saw each page but nothing could be seen or maybe it was an empty book. A light flashed in my brain and I called the reception and told them to send a cup of...

Precap: Ajabde is really scared.

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