FF- Treacherous Fate [Thread #2 (Obscured Fate)] Chapter 26- Page 17 - Page 8

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Posted: 9 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: twilightlover29

Niki what a fabulous comeback I missed you

This update is the reason I'm a fan of your writing and eagerly look forward for your updates
Child abuse is something that is so prevalent and yet not discussed that many prepatrators roam free when in reality they should be castrated and publicly punished

I'm looking forward for the next part and it's so good to see you on the forum



Thanks for the review. Seriously ur comments always raise my ego a notch.
Next part will be updated soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: Natasha_1234

Really nice update Niki! I love the way you describe everything so nicely! Feeling really bad about phools past 😭
I really like the bonding of Amar and prithika ❤️
I'll be waiting for the next update 😊



Thanks Natasha. Since u have like the post in the first page I will be sending u regular pm's.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: swara98

Hey niki I m swara I m in the forum
OMG phool's past is so horrifying 😲 feel bad for her

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Hi Swara! Thanks a lot for reading and reviewing my story. If u need pm's on updates plz like the post on page 1.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: AsYa_Celana

hawww...this reminded me of highway...

P.S. I'm gonna comment tomorrow. Promise!



I know. Actually I decided upon this scene after reading Tell me ur Dreams by Sidney Sheldon. The protagonist was abused at a young age and as defense mechanism she developed mpd. Only here I gave Phool PTSD instead of MPD.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: Asyalover

omg...poor phool had such distressing past...aww amar is missing pri...thnks 4 pm



Yah poor Phool. These troubles were needed for her character development. And next will be Amar Prithika arc.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76
Nikki... Welcome back gal !! Missed ur updates a lot... I thought u really abandoned this place and the story...😆
OMG, I really liked Phool's characterization here...A victim of a heinous crime...Its heartbreaking...and u portrayed those aptly...! Hope she comes out strong ! Amar missing his sister is so sweet...:)

Wow...Sidney Sheldon it is...! His books are so enchanting that I wonder, are there any such women, like his characters, in reality ?? :P

Waiting for next gal ! :)


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: mistofshadows

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Hi Swara! Thanks a lot for reading and reviewing my story. If u need pm's on updates plz like the post on page 1.



I have hit the like button on pg 1do update soon and pm me 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#78
Saved the chapter in my file. I look forward to reading the whole story when it gets completed.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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very nice one dear loved reading it...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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who's amar on about? - too much suspense!! Please update soon! :D and thanks for the pm :)
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