FF- Treacherous Fate [Thread #2 (Obscured Fate)] Chapter 26- Page 17 - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
#41
Thanks for the PM and update Niki ๐Ÿ˜Š

Interesting chapter so Amar does deal with things and is kept in the loop.. Prithika is so adorably annoying I love it

We get a flashback of happy times as well...

Amazing and as usual you leave me speechless after every update so I ramble...

But am looking forward for the next update already I hooked to your story- it's my brand of drug โญ๏ธ๐Ÿ‘
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
nice going...so i guess ajab is alive
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
thanks for the PM
Prithika is so adorable and seems like Amar has already realized what life is like...awesome update... please PM me when you update the next part๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nikki...fb good ...interesting. ...and the curiosity levels have increased. ...so Amar is there so is ajab...lets see how treacherous fate deals with them waiting for next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nicely written keep updating is there amar and pritika story
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: twilightlover29

Thanks for the PM and update Niki ๐Ÿ˜Š

Interesting chapter so Amar does deal with things and is kept in the loop.. Prithika is so adorably annoying I love it

We get a flashback of happy times as well...

Amazing and as usual you leave me speechless after every update so I ramble...

But am looking forward for the next update already I hooked to your story- it's my brand of drug โญ๏ธ๐Ÿ‘



Thanks for the review.
Yes Amar is kept in the loop to some extent. You will notice that he was told his Godfather died in a house fire due to short circuit, whereas the truth is quite well known to all.
He is shielded without being made naive.
Prithika! Where would we all be without annoying sisters. I had given them a chapter to themselves in the previous thread, so thought it was time they got their space, after all they will have a big part to play.
As for flashback, I missed Pratap- Ajabde comforting presence they had before leap. This was for Rosal!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: mistofshadows



Thanks for the review.
Yes Amar is kept in the loop to some extent. You will notice that he was told his Godfather died in a house fire due to short circuit, whereas the truth is quite well known to all.
He is shielded without being made naive.
Prithika! Where would we all be without annoying sisters. I had given them a chapter to themselves in the previous thread, so thought it was time they got their space, after all they will have a big part to play.
As for flashback, I missed Pratap- Ajabde comforting presence they had before leap. This was for Rosal!



True annoying siblings you can hate them or dote on them but cannot live without them...am looking forward for more Prithika-Amar scenes where she drives him crazy๐Ÿ˜†
I miss Rosal wish they did not have the leap afterall according to history Pratap was 18 when he had his first kid (withing a year of his wedding to Ajabde) but I guess they cannot show that on television- teen pregnancy and all ๐Ÿ˜› but I enjoyed Praja getting busted by his mentor๐Ÿ˜ณ as he says it could have been worse it could have been Som or Maan or Guru Raghvendra๐Ÿ˜‰

Looking forward for the next update ๐Ÿ˜Š

Edited by twilightlover29 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
Thanks for the pm!!

Too much suspense! Oh Nikki, my heart just cannot take this anymore ๐Ÿ˜†
That update was a mix of both fb and present, interesting technique there! ๐Ÿ˜‰
Wonderful update ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: poeple1234

thanks for the PM


Prithika is so adorable and seems like Amar has already realized what life is like...awesome update... please PM me when you update the next part๐Ÿ˜Š



Yeah Amar is good at adding 2+2 and getting 4. Soon both Amar and Prithika will get more story.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: jyotic74

Nikki...fb good ...interesting. ...and the curiosity levels have increased. ...so Amar is there so is ajab...lets see how treacherous fate deals with them waiting for next update



Yeah a glimpse of both mother and son, one in the present and other in the past. Fate is unpredictable and treacherous, and will get more dangerous soon.
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