FF- Treacherous Fate [Thread #2 (Obscured Fate)] Chapter 26- Page 17 - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: rosal_awesome

OH MY GOD no you did not just do this to your readers another cliffhanger?? 😭



Cliffhangers are good for health my dear!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: rosal_awesome

Thanks for the synopsis in front though 😃



Welcome though the due credit for the idea goes to mishrapriya68.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: poeple1234

I read both the posts. Do you mean that Amar's a secret and Ajab is probably living as Baijilal and everyone thinks that she is dead? You know, while reading your ff I had made a timeline for the dates you had provided. So according to my calculations, Amar was born in 2009, the same year in which those goons (probably hired) had chased Ajabde. Also , as far as I remember, Pratap had been backstabbed by his bros in 2008. am I correct?


I have also got a feeling that the man being burnt is probably a Suryavanshi.

Beautifully written as usual. Update soon.😊



Yes, u r quite correct. Amar is a secret which will come out soon cuz if u remember he gave his real name to Prithika. Also Ajabde is "dead", and Baijilal is an unknown rebel raging against Rao Shiladitya and Shams Khan's son.
As for timelines, u know when this concept came to my mind the first thing I did was arrange the timeline. Sitting with a calculator for three days straight is a maddening work, seriously.
Btw since u r so interested in the timeline, do u want me to post it up?
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: mistofshadows



Yes, u r quite correct. Amar is a secret which will come out soon cuz if u remember he gave his real name to Prithika. Also Ajabde is "dead", and Baijilal is an unknown rebel raging against Rao Shiladitya and Shams Khan's son.
As for timelines, u know when this concept came to my mind the first thing I did was arrange the timeline. Sitting with a calculator for three days straight is a maddening work, seriously.
Btw since u r so interested in the timeline, do u want me to post it up?



I would love to see the timeline 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
You have a gift for writing. I have not yet read the story, but do skim a bit when the updates come out. Since this is a mystery / suspense theme, I am just saving the chapters in a file for now. I will read it all when it is finished. Better for my sanity that way. Otherwise I will drive myself crazy imagining all possible angles.

I would not be surprised if you went on to publish books in future. You are worthy of that.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: twilightlover29



I would love to see the timeline 😃



Alright then. I will post it up by Sunday.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: coderlady

You have a gift for writing. I have not yet read the story, but do skim a bit when the updates come out. Since this is a mystery / suspense theme, I am just saving the chapters in a file for now. I will read it all when it is finished. Better for my sanity that way. Otherwise I will drive myself crazy imagining all possible angles.

I would not be surprised if you went on to publish books in future. You are worthy of that.



Since my dream is to write a book one day, a reader telling me that I have that capability is very humbling. Thanks a lot. I will try my best to keep up to ur expectations in the future updates.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Intriguing. ...u sure know how to keep ur readers on tenterhooks. .. 😉 ...but do update soon to end the suspense... 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: kaku17

Intriguing. ...u sure know how to keep ur readers on tenterhooks. .. 😉 ...but do update soon to end the suspense... 😛



I will update soon but... who said another update will end the suspense and not increase it? 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
Oye Nikki!!!!!
Happy new year to you too!!
howz you yaara?
And congratulations for thread 2!!!!
I hope someday we reach thread 5 too!!!!! heheheee

Sorry nikki i don't cum to IF these days so i am commenting really late!!!!
Will comment again after reading part 21!!!!
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