FF- Treacherous Fate [Thread #2 (Obscured Fate)] Chapter 26- Page 17 - Page 10

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Posted: 9 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: twilightlover29

Oh my Amar now knows of his family...

Curiosity is one thing that can either free us or trap us forever
And you incorporated history as well
I love your updates and am looking for more of them

I'm first!!!!



Thanks for appreciating the chapter.
I am sure y remember the end of the previous chapter. These chapters part 1 and 2 will have the reasons for Amar escaping the castle to meet Prithika.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: poeple1234

OMG now Amar knows about his family... wondering what will happen if Pratap tells him about his mother... It must be hurting Pratap so much... nice to see that you connected it to history as well.. update soon



Amar has only found out about the familial connection he shares with Suryavanshi's. Next chapter will clear many things. Its gonna be an important draft for the whole fanfic.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: Natasha_1234

I love the update! Amar Singh and pratap talk! It was nice and the way you put the history and the story was amazing
Waiting for part 2



Actually a Amar Pratap scene was long due. So I thought why not clear up major twists in the plot with their convo. I am glad u liked my impromptu history addition.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: AsYa_Celana

<font color="#FF0066" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Amar is only six, but from what i can see, he is quite mature for his age...and yes incredibly intelligent...just like his father.
You know, even i am as curious as Amar to know the whole matter. There are many questions brimming in my mind.
Why is he Pratap SONGARA? And Ajabde, where is she? What is the reason for the conflicts between Pratap and his family's conflicts? And why the hell PrAja got separated? Did they had any kind of argument, fight, misunderstanding, or something like that? Or was it a conspiracy that separated them?
I hope soon they'll be answered as you continue further.
And my! You've done a good amount of research on all this, isn't it? One of the reasons why you stand out to be an incredible writer I've come across in IF.
It was an amazing update! And please update soon! Can't hold my suspense reading the next part.</font>



I know I have kept the suspense alive for a long time. But I promise next chapter will answer many. The Songara identity, Ajabde's story, and all the events that happened. All of these will be out in the open...but only Pratap's pov.
For I had warned all in the beginning, even Pratap doesn't know everything and what he does know is not necessarily true or false.
As for the history lesson, I had always wanted to induct Rani Padmini somewhere. She is the one I admire the most in Rajput women. However her timeline is drastically different from Pratap's and so it wasn't possible. So suddenly idea came how about Pratap telling Amar about her and then all clicked.
And Thanks a lot for ur review. As for researching, I love history. And having a history geek for a father helps too I.guess.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Asyalover

wow...learned history...nice update



Thanks. I hope u will like the next chapter even more.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks a lot. U r my 100th reviewer 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awsome dear ...finally its time to know about family for amar...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sam622

awsome dear ...finally its time to know about family for amar...



Oh yes. Time to open some plots.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update niki finally amar's coming to know his family connection
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Posted: 9 years ago
thanks for the pm!
and i love that your story is not completely fictional and that there's some historic element to it!! 😳
thanks for the great chapt 😃
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