In the first chapter I had shown their friendship in the school.
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Originally posted by: MochaQueen
So both Rishis know each other....I didnt know both of them are teachers
Rishi unwillingly took Tanuja to her mother's place for pak phera as he was afraid of his secrets coming out. Though Tanuja tried to hide, Prerna found out and extracted truth from Tanuja. Tanuja telling Prerna that marriage bond cannot be broken easily was nice. Prerna telling Tanuja that she can come back whenever she wants was emotional. Rishikesh feeding Lakshmi in his imagination was romantic. Sad that Lakshmi keeps avoiding him. It's good that Rishikesh asked Lakshmi about her behavior and attitude towards him. Good that Lakshmi accepted it and agreed to tell him the reason. Waiting to know what will Lakshmi say.
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Rishikesh:Please don't feel bad.I may be misunderstanding you.But usually newly married couples do not behave like us.Right?So I am asking you.Is it true that you are purposefully avoiding me?
Lakshmi got irritated and blasted at him:Yes.Your doubt is right.I was purposefully avoiding you at night.So that you won't even think of touching me.
Rishikesh was shocked.
Rishikesh:But...why?Why are you avoiding me?You don't like me?You told me that you were not forced to marry me.You married me willingly.Right?Then why are you keeping me at a distance?
Lakshmi:You want to know why?Then listen.I am not interested in physical relationship.
Rishikesh was shocked:But why?
Lakshmi:I am not interested in romance,family life and having children.
Rishikesh was again shocked.
Rishilesh:Then how did you have a lover?
Lakshmi:That was a blunder.My boy friend ditched me because I was not interested in it.Now you can also ditch me like my boyfriend ditched me.
Rishikesh's eyes became wet.
Rishikesh:We got married recently and in the initial phase of marriage itself you are asking me to divorce you.
Lakshmi felt upset.
Rishi walked out of the room.
Lakshmi cried.
Rishi told Raj about the European trip.
Rishi:Dad...please..I need money for this.
Raj:You really became slack in teaching.That's why this condition came.Now to not lose the job I have to waste such a big amount.It's all your mistake.
Rishi became guilty.
Rishi:Sorry papa.But please help me.I promise you that now onwards I will not do any mistake.
Raj:Ok.I will give you money.But I have a demand.You have to take Tanuja with you.
Rishi was shocked:What?Why?
Raj:After marriage,you did not let her go out or take her for honeymoon.So this should be considered as a honeymoon trip also.
Rishi:How is it possible papa?This is a professional tour.
Raj:If you don't obey me,I will not give you money.
Rishi became dull.
Rishi:Ok.I will take Tanuja with me.
Raj smiled.
Lakshmi went near Rishikesh who was frustrated.
Lakshmi:Maa is calling you to to have food.
Rishikesh:I don't want any food.You filled my stomach with life long frustration.
Lakshmi got hurt.
Lakshmi:Why?Because I refused to get intimate with you?
Rishikesh:This is normal in a married life.If our married life is not normal how can we have kids?
Lakshmi became emotional:Is married life only about physical relationship?There is nothing else in marriage?Are your parents together even after 30 years of marriage only for physical needs?Do they not expect anything else from each other?
Lakshmi walked away.
Rishikesh felt ashamed of himself.
Rishikesh:I became a bit too horny.How could I?What will be Lakshmi thinking about me?She maybe thinking that I married her only to spend night with her.That's the impression I gave her about myself,Chee!She is right.A wife will expect comfort,friendship,companionship and emotional support from her husband.I did'nt even try to be a good friend.Before that itself I was trying to romance her.No wonder that she is keeping me at a distance.
Rishi told Tanuja:Get ready.You are also coming with me to Europe.
Tanuja was surprised.
Tanuja:Really?
Rishi smiled:You are feeling happy as if it's our honeymoon trip.I am taking you only because papa told me that if I don't take you to Europe with me,he won't give me money.
Tanuja became dull.
Tanuja visited her home.
Bajaj:Hi beta...
Tanuja:Hi papa...
Tanuja and Bajaj hugged each other.
Bajaj:How are you beta?
Tanuja:Everything is going well papa.Actually Rishi and I are going to Europe.
Bajaj:Wow!You both are going for honeymoon.Good.Enjoy the honeymoon.
Tanuja became dull.
Tanuja:Where is Maa?
Bajaj:She is in the puja room.
Tanuja:Ok.I will go there.
Tanuja went to the puja room.Prerna was surprised to see her.
Prerna:Tanuja!What a surprise!
Tanuja:Actually Maa,Rishi and I are going to Europe.So I thought that before going,I will visit you and papa and inform you both about the trip.
Prerna was excited.
Prerna:Honeymoon in Europe?Cool!Rishi has finally accepted you as your wife.I am so happy.
Tanuja became dull.
Tanuja:It's not a honeymoon trip.It's Rishi's job oriented trip.I am just accompanying him.
Prerna was stunned.
Prerna was irritated.
Prerna:So he has not changed yet.
Tanuja lied:No Maa.Rishi has changed a lot.Even though it's not a honeymoon trip,Rishi is taking me with him to Europe.
Tanuja said in her mind:I can't tell Maa that Rishi is taking me with him only because his father forced him.
Tanuja:Trust me Maa.Everything will be alright.
Prerna smiled slightly.
Prerna and Tanuja prayed infront of the God's Idol.
Tanuja imagined holding Rishi's hands and praying.
Rishikesh went near Lakshmi.She turned off her face in anger.
Rishikesh:I know that you are angry with me and I deserve all your anger.But I have something to melt your anger.
He gave her a red rose.Her face blossomed.
Awaaz Doon Main Pukarun Tujhe
Tu Paas Aaye Mana Loon Tujhe
Rishikesh:Your mother had told me that you love roses.
Lakshmi smiled taking it from her.
Lakshmi:Thank you.I love flowers.Roses are my favourite.
Rishikesh smiled.
Behki Hawa Hai Tu Hai Khwaab Tu
Palkon Pe Rakhun Sambhalun Tujhe
Lakshmi wore the rose in her hair.
Rishikesh:You look very pretty with the red rose in your hair.
She smiled.
Awaaz Doon Main Pukarun Tujhe
Tu Paas Aaye Mana Loon Tujhe(Satyaprem Ki Katha)
Rishi and Tanuja reached Europe.
Tanuja was excited to go out.
Tanuja:Let us start.
Rishi:Yes.But I am not interested to go out with you.So you go out alone.I will also go my way.Bye!
Rishi walked out.Tanuja became dull.
Rishi had a tough time as he was not able to understand the language of the people there.But Tanuja who went out alone explored the city and enjoyed a lot.
The hotel room...
Tanuja:How was the day?
Rishi lied:It was fun.What about yours?
Tanuja:I really enjoyed a lot.I went to may places taking the cab.I will show the photographs and videos to you.
Tanuja showed him the videos and the photographs.Rishi felt jealous.
Rishi:You really enjoyed a lot.Can I tell you the truth?I did not enjoy at all.I was not able to understand their accent.
Tanuja thought:Atleast now Rishi has started opening up to me.He told me the truth without being image conscious.That means slowly slowly he is becoming comfortable with me.
Tanuja felt happy.
Rishi:I have a request.Can you come with me tomorrow?I need your help.I can't manage on my own.
Tanuja:Sure.Today also I wanted to go out with you.It's you who opposed it.
Rishi became dull.
Rishi:Sorry.
Tanuja smiled:No need of saying 'sorry'.You called me to accompany you.That's more than enough for me.
He smiled.
Chhalak Gaye Naina
Toone Mann Bhar Diya
Mere Khali Se Dil Ko Yoon
Toone Ghar Kar Diya
Chhalak Gaye Naina
Toone Mann Bhar Diya(Bawaal)
Lakshmi smiled seeing the swing.Rishikesh went near her seeing her looking at the swing.
Rishikesh:You want to swing?
Lakshmi just smiled.
Rishikesh:You swing.I will also join you.
Lakshmi:You maybe thinking how childish I am.
Rishikesh:Sometimes it's good to be childish.It will make us cuter.
She smiled.
He made her sit on the swing.Then he started pushing the swing for her.
Both Rishikesh and Lakshmi enjoyed a lot.
Behki Hawa Hai Tu Hai Khwaab Tu
Palkon Pe Rakhun Sambhalun Tujhe
Bin Tere Dil Ka Yeh Guzaara
Ab Ek Din Bhi Na Ho Sajna(Satyaprem Ki Katha).
The next morning..
Tanuja woke up from the sleep.She looked at the sleeping Rishi.
Tanuja:Rishi looks so cute while sleeping.
Tanuja started caressing his face with love.
Mere Khali Se Dil Ko Yoon
Toone Ghar Kar Diya
Adhoori Si Raahein Milayi
Adhoori Hawayein Chalayi
Adhoori Si Baatein Banayi
Ishq Ke Silsile Ban Gaye Re
He opened his eyes.Tanuja got embarrassed.
Tanuja:I was trying to wake you up.We have to get ready and go out.Right?
Rishi:Ya...you are right.Good that you woke me up,Let me freshen up.
Rishi went to bath.Tanuja was relieved.
Tanuja:Thank God that Rishi did'nt understand why I touched his face.
Rishi and Tanuja went out.To Rishi's surprise,Tanuja explained him about each and every place they went.
Rishi:You have more knowledge than me about these places.How?
Tanuja:Before coming to Europe,I googled and read about these places.
Rishi smiled.
Tere Dil Se Dil Tak Mere Mere
Tere Dil Se Dil Tak Mere
Tere Dil Se Dil Tak Mere Mere
Tere Dil Se Dil Tak Mere
Rishi and Tanuja took videos and photographs of these places.
Ho Ankhiyan Na Roye Te
Jaage Na Soye Te
Taan Umra Jeete Rahe
Ho Ishq De Haale Se
Ishq De Pyale Se
Rishi posted everything in the whatapp group of the school students.The students,their parents and the Principal smiled watching it.
They went to the area where the war took place.Tanuja explained to Rishi about how the World War took place and how many lives got destroyed.Rishi became emotional imagining the world war.Tanuja's eyes got filled up with tears.
Rishi:What happened Tanuja?
Tanuja:I can't even imagine how much those people suffered during the world war.
Rishi wiped her tears.
Taan Umra Peete Rahe
Haan Main Taan Haari Re
Haari Re Haari Re
Duniya Vaari Re
Vaari Re Vaari Re
Rishi:Don't cry Tanuja.That's past.Now we are at a peaceful space.
Tere Dil Se Dil Tak Mere Mere
Tere Dil Se Dil Tak Mere
Tere Dil Se Dil Tak Mere Mere
Tere Dil Se Dil Tak Mere
She nodded.
Rishi:Let me take the video.
Rishi took the video of the place and explained about the world war to the students.Then he sent the video to the students and the Principal.They got immersed in the video.
Rishi and Tanuja were enjoying.
Tanuja:Rishi...Can we take a photograph together?
Rishi:Ok.
Tanuja smiled.
Kaamil Hua Jo Dil Toone Chhua
Jo Kuchh Bhi Tha Mera Tera Hua
Tujhse Hui Shuru Yeh Dastaan
Tujhpe Khatam Hui Meri Dua
Tanuja requested a person over there to take their photograph.He took their photograph.
Adhoori Si Raatein Milayi
Adhoori Subah Sajayi
Adhoori Si Baatein Banayi
Ishq Ke Silsile Bann Gaye Re
(Credit for the edit goes to the real editor).
He:You both make a perfect couple.
Tanuja became happy while Rishi became dull.
Tere Dil Se Dil Tak Mere Mere
Tere Dil Se Dil Tak Mere
Tere Dil Se Dil Tak Mere Mere
Tere Dil Se Dil Tak Mere(Bawaal).
Rishikesh and Lakshmi went out.He took her to a street shop.
Rishikesh:Here we get the best pani puri.
Lakshmi smiled.
Rishikesh ordered Pani puri.
Rishikesh:Try this.You will love it.
He fed her Pani puri.
Lakshmi:It's yummy.
After that she started eating it crazily.Rishikesh smiled.
Haara Haara Dil Haara
Ik Baar Aake Mil Ja
Ranwan Ch Banwan Ch
Tainu Chhupawan
Rishi and Lakshmi went for a walk.They chatted while walking and enjoyed.
Koyi Mainu Na Roke
Mere Dhol Judaiyan Di
Tujhe Khabar Hi Na Hove
Aadha Hai Dil Mera
Poora Tujhse Hove
Ho Tainu Kasam Khudaiyan Di
Ab Sabar Hi Na Hove
Aadha Hai Dil Mera
Poora Tujhse Hove
Poora Tujhse Hove
They both had a fun bike ride.
Agg Lavan Majboori Nu
Aan Jaan Di Pasoori Nu
Zehar Bane Ek Haan Teri
Pee Jaavan Main Poori Nu
While walking Lakshmi's foot got hurt.Rishikesh made her sit.He wiped the blood drop and applied ointment there.
Agg Lavan Majboori Nu
Aan Jaan Di Pasoori Nu
Zehar Bane Ek Haan Teri
Pee Jaavan Main Poori Nu
Rishikesh and Lakshmi had fun with the balloons in the rain.
Chal Diya Dil Yeh Tere Raaste
Chahe Ho Lamhein Do Hi Pyar Ke
Saari Ki Saari Meri Yeh Wafa
Likh Di Hai Maine Tere Naam Pe
Rishikesh-Lakshmi became very close to each other.
They both were holding each other's hands and walking.
Lakshmi:I want to tell you something about my past.
Rishikesh:I already know about your past relationship.I don't want to hear anything more as I am possessive about you.
Lakshmi:But my past...
Rishikesh:Past is past.Why should we spoil our mood talking about the past?I don't care about your past.For me,only the present matters.
Lakshmi smiled emotionally.
She thought:You are so nice Rishi.
Aise Kaise Toone Dastak Hai Di
Mujhko Toh Ab Tujhse Fursat Nahi
Kaisa Tera Nasha Hai Chadha
Zameen Pe Kabhi Chand Pe Main Kabhi
Kabhi Dekha Hi Na Jo Nazaara
Lakshmi told him blushing:Tonight I will not sleep early.Because I want to spend time with you.
Rishikesh was surprised.
Tera Sath Dekha Maine Woh Sajna
Haara Haara Dil Haara
Tere Jaisa Nahio Milna
Ranwan Ch Banwan Ch
Tainu Chhupawan
Rishikesh:Are you are Lakshmi?
Lakshmi nodded with a smile.She was shy.He smiled.
Koyi Mainu Na Roke
Aa Chale Leke Tujhe
Hai Jahan Silsile
Tu Hai Wahin Hai Teri Kami
Rishikesh:That means you accepted me as your husband?
Lakshmi blushed:Yes.
Bana De Saja De Panaah De Humein
Bana De Saja De Panaah De Humein
Agg Lavan Majboori Nu
Aan Jaan Di Pasoori Nu
Rishikesh:I am very happy Lakshmi.I love you.
Zehar Bane Ek Haan Teri
Pee Jaavan Main Poori Nu
Ranwan Ch Banwan Ch
Tainu Chhupawan
He pecked her palm in excitement. She became emotional seeing him happy.
Koyi Mainu Na Roke
Mere Dhol Judaiyan Di
Tujhe Khabar Hi Na Hove
Aadha Hai Dil Mera
Poora Tujhse Hove
Ho Tainu Kasam Khudaiyan Di
Ab Sabar Hi Na Hove
Aadha Hai Dil Mera
Poora Tujhse Hove
Poora Tujhse Hove
Poora Tujhse Hove
(Satyaprem Ki Katha).
Rishikesh thought:I was right.Lakshmi was lying that she is not interested in physical relationship.She was keeping a distance with me as there was no emotional connection between us.Now that we are close to each other,she is ready.She is lovely.
Rishikesh and Lakshmi started romancing passionately.
Suddenly she got remembered something and cried in an abnormal way.
Rishikesh was shocked.
Rishikesh:What happened Lakshmi?
Lakshmi:I am not ready.Please don't force me.
Rishikesh was shocked.
Very interesting update dear 🙂
Just loved it 🤗
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The reason for Lakshmi avoiding Rishi was unexpected becauseI thought she also has some disease like Tanuja, shocked that she asked him to divorceher. Earlier Rishi lied to Rishikesh about this trip being honeymoon trip, now hislie came out to be true, funny. Good that Rishikesh realized his mistake. Tanuja’simagination was nice. RishMi rose scene was romantic. Rishi avoiding Tanuja wassad. Glad that Tanuja enjoyed. Finally Rishi is accepting Tanu. Swing scene waslovely. Tanu caressing Rishi’s face was cute. Loved TanShi every moment. Rishi wipingTanuja’s tears was so sweet. Whoever made the edit, its lovely. Not Rishikesh andTanuja but Rishikesh and Lakshmi, you wrote it wrong. RishMi moments were fabulous,finally Lakshmi accepted hi. I knew it, there’s some big problem with Lakshmi, didshe get physically abused? Waiting for next perfect pics.
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