Some important gaps in the story were never explained properly by the writers as they chose to simply leap over it!
1. Why Maya is like Maya?
What happened exactly on her 9th birthday that made her lose innocence as a child, as seeds of hate, fear & insecurity got planted in her heart & mind! Was it merely a common case of child abuse by tough parents or much serious than that?
The Answer lies in her childhood days, around that fateful birthday that turned her life, upside down!
But writers skipped it strangely & left it to the imagination of audience!
2. What happened in those three years?
When ArYa was left alone, after holi- what exactly happened in that leap period? Why was Arjun unhappy later? What did Maya do,to him, so as him to get very scared of her?
This was never explained! How could a newly married couple who were in beyhadh love, got into such a messy situation, when S2 began?
Again, writers chose to keep mum, as they moved on, narrating only events after that! It was another mystery or gap in the story!
3. Why Maya refused to undergo proper medical treatment?
When the six-month leap happened, Arjun was not shown properly monitoring her progress! Did he find something not going properly or amiss? Amazing, as he, in stead- spent more time with Saanjh consoling her father's demise rather than looking after his bandar-carrying-wife who was supposed to have gone there for her cure but otherwise busy in plotting for their doom!
This is a strange behaviour from Arjun & even Maya as she had seemingly given up hope of restoring back normalcy in her life-particularly when she was carrying bandar as a trump card to beat Saanjh!
The writers simply glossed over the narrative with some faltu story ridden with a lot of inconsistencies surrounding both timeline of various events happened & Maya's true intentions!
It looked that Mansi & Maya's fake drama were inserted into the story without stitching properly into the natural flow of the story line!
4. Finally, when Five year leap happened, suddenly a child came into existence of Sanjun's life!
It turned out later, as Ayaan's child! As a matter of fact, Ayaan was looking very detached from Aarohi in the initial days but later he became a very 'loving & caring' father to take away her from a potentially looming danger! The whole Aarohi drama was to create a base for Saanjh developing a complex or desperation for needing a child!
This could have been presented very convincingly if some FB stories were shown like how & why of her desperateness for child, built-up over time!
But Cvs never had time for that, as they simply rushed the story with one casual incident of she longing for child!
Result? Saanjh looks very unconvincing when she is ready to do anything for getting a child in her life!
At least, Arjun was looking a bit convincing when he lost his bandar! There was some reasonable build-up showing his affection for a child!
Now, it is completely missing in Saanj's case! So, her bending backwards to accommodate Maya's whims & fancy - is looking like a comedy circus - than a genuine young mother's dream!
The Cvs have missed out an opportunity to explain convincingly the back story of her need for child in the five year leap period!
Summing up, there are quite a few leaps covering only gaps in the story!
And, it looks more like a disjoint story pieced together rather than a seamless story- making us heave a sigh!
Kaash! If the writers could write it better . . .
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