(Season 2)Beyhadh: Phir se::FF -Ch 6 pg 60- UPDATED - Page 4

aishwarya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#31

nice start👏

well written!!

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Sharmin

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Posted: 7 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: -PyaariBhootni-
nice start👏
well written!!

Thanks TMS😃

You will like it even more in the second chapter..😉😳😊

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Sharmin

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Posted: 7 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: --Elara--
Hi Isha and Shramin! First of all congrats for your 2nd ff! How do i know? Because i have reserved my spot on the first one too but haven't unressed yet😆 😛
Okay, coming to the ff! Now now, that's the typical serial style, i would never get why all the leads get back their brains on the day of their wedding with somebody else? 😆 😆 No offense to your ff, i love this a lot! So now Arjun is going to look for his love whom he loves 'beyhadh-ly'! 😃 Looking forward to reading this further! Continue soon!!😳 Great start! 👏

Love
Ramya

Lol..thanks yaara. ..and also to your nazar . .😉

What can I say yaar..typical serial to haina ei pehle chapter..but when the story will go ..infact in the second chapter there is some surprise waiting for all of you. .

And about serial type ff . .lol. .first one was totally urban . .assasins murder...vigilante.etc type ..

So was thinking of doing something different..lol..

Again thanks for your lovely feedback..

Will do ..😊

And long feedback always encourages us..😃

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sizzlingparo

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Posted: 7 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: ishakumar

Lol abhi toh aagey aagey dekhiye hota hai Kya!!!
I'm sure you will love the second chapter
Many surprises are awaiting the readers!!! 😳

Yes yes yes m waiting for ur next chaptet just love it ab yaha to saare dream pure honge hamare arya k 😳
Waiting for ur new surprise 😃

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sizzlingparo

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Posted: 7 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: ArYa-JenWin20

Thanks kiran...it means a lot...appreciations...for your work..thanks once again..
Yup our story hain..kuch bhi kar sakta hai...
And our arya dreams will be fulfilled too😳😃😉

Yes sharmin tum dono hamare dreams pure karo waiting for more surprise 😛
Kuch bhi kar sakte ho lol 😆 u gys did grear work 😃

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hiya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#36

nice one 👏
plz start soon

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Sharmin

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Posted: 7 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: coolhi1988
nice one 👏
plz start soon

Thank you..will continue 😊

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Kavyanjali

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Posted: 7 years ago

#38

Interesting, beginning with a wedding.. .that too of Arjun & Saanjh. But seems like everyone is happy except the groom...well Arjun was dreaming of Maya & finally the dam of his emotions broke & he refused to marry Saanjh. Well everyone had his or her realization but its little to late since Maya is gone... I wonder where is she and how? And what happened between Maya & Arjun to really break up? But than as they say better late than never... But can it be applied here... Where is Maya baby & how is she coping.. Have turned more closed or something? Update next chap sooon!!

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Isha Kumar

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Posted: 7 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: GERUA
awesome start

thank you so much! 😳

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Isha Kumar

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: Jade0001

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Awesome Chapter </font>

<font face="Georgia" size="3">Very Intriguing Part </font>

If you found this intriguing then I wonder what U will think when I read the rest of the story!!
Many more surprises are awaiting 😉

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