Legend of Secrets FF :Part 5 (Pg4) - Page 3

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Posted: 7 years ago
#21
Nyc update...
Its so long you updated!!
Luvd Maya...
Arjun wants to woo Maya...
Lets see if he can do that!!
Continue soon
Thnx fr pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
#22
It has been a long time since you have updated. Piyali took Saanjh & Maya to the college. They saw Arjun but Maya is not impressed. Arjun taking the challenge to woo Maya was awesome. Waiting to see how he does that.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#23
awsome loved the concept superb work
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Posted: 6 years ago
#24

Oh so sad that maya's sis ruhi got murdered.wonder who killed her.maya ruhi fb scene was lovely.piyali maya bonding is so sweet.Jennifer sanjeeda acted together in kya hoga nimmo ka.Piyali maya saanjh gang is interesting.Arjun's intro with dance is pal was superb.Saanjh maya piyali gang is cool.Arya meeting with a fight is interesting.loved arjun's determination to make maya fall 4 him.waiting 4 arya luv story.vicky saanjh scene was sweet.ayaan piyali scene was cool.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Part 5

Piyali helps Maya and Sufi to shift in the nearby house of campus. However it is opposite to Arjun's apartment

Piyali : so girls here is your house, all the best both of you

Saanjh ; thank you, Piyali, you are awesome

Piyali ; now stop battering me and bring me your hand cooked food

Saanjh : so sweet, not me but my food will reach to you promise

Maya : if you both are done with your silly talks can I say something

Piyali : sure, its your mouth say what you want dear

Maya : Piyali, I hope you remember you were supposed to give us something

Piyali : oh yea, sorry (takes something from her pocket) this is the walkie talkie you both keep with you in case of emergency, set up the alarm so the nearby house and campus security gets alert too,

Saanjh ; thanks Piyali (takes the walkie) don't worry we will be safe here

Piyali ; okay I am getting late for gym, so will see you later, take care

Maya : bye princess

Both girls move their belongings in the rooms cleaning the whole house


Piyali in the evening goes to gym when she meets Ayaan again

Piyali : woah, basketball player's place is in court

Ayaan : really? which book said that

Piyali : I don't need any book, I make my own rule champion (puts her music and runs on treadmill)

Ayaan ; this girl is way too hard, but its okay, spicy things take a while


Arjun is passing from the campus when he sees Maya and Saanjh's house.

Door bell rings

"Saanjh can you please open the door Maya shouts from basement

Saanjh : coming (goes to the open the door)

"Hi beautiful "Arjun with his usual flirt

Saanjh : what are you doing here?

Arjun ; somebody told me that two gorgeous girls are staying here, so I was sure it would be you both girls

Saanjh : thanks for compliment, come in

Arjun : by the way my apartment is right in front, that building

"We don't care where the hell you live Maya comes upstairs and keeps walking towards him

Arjun ; calm down, why are you always in grumpy mood

Maya : thats none of your business, get out from here

Saanjh ; Maya what is wrong with you

Maya : just a second, and you why are you standing here

Arjun : I am trying to be helpful, this house is haunted

Saanjh : what?

Maya : listen what ever your name is, don't try to scare us, now will you or should I just call the security

Arjun : you are not getting my point, I have heard rumors about this house

Maya : thats enough (pushes him out and closes the door)

Saanjh : Maya, who knows he might want to tell us something we don't know

Maya ; Piyali is staying in the same city from childhood, she would not risk our lives, and I am telling you again stay away from this jerk or else he will at no point will ditch you

Saanjh feels bad hearing Maya's words and sees Arjun walking to his apartment

Her phone rings

Saanjh : hi dad

Prem : how is my princess, you didn't even call me how was your day, did you reach there safely, how is Piyali

Saanjh : yes dad, I am fine and she is very good, she insisted me so much to stay at her house but I told her to find the house near campus

Prem : but why, you would have been safe at her house

Saanjh ; I know dad, but I want to explore this place by myself, you don't worry she has got security for us too

Prem : okay dear you take care of yourself and keep calling me, good night

Saanjh : bye dad, good night (hangs up) and turn around to see Maya)

Maya ; sorry I didn't mean to hear your conversation

Saanjh : thats okay, you are my friend

Maya : you know you are very naive in trusting people, don't be so innocent, someday somebody would take advantage of you and leave you at alter

Saanjh : I tried very hard to stand up since mom died and dad raised me will all difficulty

Maya : I am sorry, I understand pain of losing somebody of your own

Saanjh : I only have my dad, can't lose him at any cost, he is just worried about me

Maya : any dad would be and you are so naive to trust anybody, anyway from today your family is extended, you have me

Saanjh ; really?

Maya : I will consider God took my one sister and gave another me (hugs her emotionally)

Piyali : And me too (joins happily)

Maya : what are you doing here?

"Excuse me, I am your cousin, don't be so mean to me pouts like child

Maya : okay fine now lets have dinner, tomorrow we have to go college


Later at night Saanjh hears some weird noise outside the house. She goes out of room to check but is complete silence. She walks downstairs in the main room opening the door slowly. A dog's bark scares her. After few minutes she goes inside but gets nervous to see the flower vase broken.

Saanjh : who could have done this, should I tell Maya, no she is already having bad phase about everything, it might be my nightmare (goes to sleep back)


Arjun is returning to his apartment when the light flashing in the hallway. He looks around but does not find anybody. Somebody is watching him behind the pillar but is invisible to be seen.


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Posted: 6 years ago
#26
piyali ayaan scene was cool.wonder how ayaan will woo piyali.Maya considering saanjh as her sister was nice.poor arjun was kicked out by Maya.was arjun joking that its a haunted house or is it true?who made those sounds due to which saanjh for scared?who was watching arjun?
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Posted: 6 years ago
#27
Superb awesome update dear
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 6 years ago
#28
Ayaan-Piyali bonding is cute. Loved Maya telling Saanjh that from now on she is his extended family and considering Saanjh as her sister. Sad that Maya kicked Arjun out. Saanjh heard the weird sound. I guess Arjun is right in saying this is a haunted house.
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Posted: 6 years ago
#29
Amazing very nice update dear
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Posted: 6 years ago
#30
Chapter is just Fantastic and so Awesome
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