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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 2


Maya reaches Shimla only to get the biggest blow of her life. She breakdown seeing her sister's dead body. The constable ladies control her and brings inside the inquiry room.

Constable : Sir, that girl is here

Ranvir : which girl?

Constable : victims's sister, Maya Mehrothra

Ranvir : okay send her inside

Maya comes in the office with tears

Ranvir : are you okay? (gives her tissue) I am very sorry for whatever happened

Maya : thats fine, what do you want to ask from me

Ranvir : Ms Maya, I am sorry in advance because the question I am going to ask is bit personal

Maya : go ahead, I am ready to cooperate (wipes her tears)

Ranvir : did your sister had any enmity, any kind of problem with you or some outsider

Maya : my sister was very ambitious and sophisticated, she was bit short tempered but never had problem with anybody due to her nature

Ranvir : I had talk with her friends earlier, they said she has been upset from couple days and not talking with anybody

Maya remains silence for a moment but denies saying she is not aware of anything.

Ranvir : thank you very much Ms Maya for your cooperation, take care of yourself (shakes her hand)

Maya : thank you, let me know if you need anymore help (leaves the cabin sadly)


Later Maya goes back to her house and closes the curtains in the room sitting in dark. She lays straightly on the bed closing her eyes with tear

Flashback

"Happy, Happy birthday to my dear sister" voice echoes in the house by Maya

Ruhi : thank you sweetheart, and where is my gift, I am waiting

"Here it is" Maya hands her squash racket

Ruhi : wow, this is awesome

Maya : this is for my champion sister, now just see nobody will be able to defat my sister right mom

Nandini : happy birthday my princess, may god bless you

Maya : I can't believe this is your last year in college and then my sister will big novel writer

Ruhi : and you will this writer's dear sister (hugs her happily)

Maya : I am going to Mumbai for research project, and when I come back we will celebrate your success on wining state champion in squash game

Flashback ends


Ooty

The scene shifts to a young girl jogging in the park listening to her music. She does the aerobics when somebody calls her. The girl is none other than Saanjh who receives call from her dad from US

Saanjh ; yes dad


Prem : how is my princess? did you forgot your dad

Saanjh ; can I even dare to do that, my dearest dad, don't be so emotional, tell me how are you

Prem : I am fine, I was just missing you dear, tell me how is your life going


Saanjh ; dad I got admission in the Mumbai college, my first step towards the dream, you see dad I will become the best photographer and will make big documentary


Prem : you know I don't have anybody else now except you, I don't know what will I do when you get married


Saanjh ; dad, I will not go away from you so easily so stop worrying alright


Prem : Wish you all the best my child, and don't be afraid of anything, call me when you reach


Saanjh : okay dad, I have to go, I am getting late you take care of yourself, love you dad (hangs up cheerfully)



Maya's mom Nandini consoles her and tells to shift at Mumbai


Nandini : I have made all arrangements, go start your new life dear, don't look at past, I will come there after few weeks


"Mom, first dad left us and now sis, why is this all happening to us" cries putting lap on her mom's lap


Nandini ; its life, dear we have to learn to move on, you see your going to Mumbai will be beneficial, everything will be fine


Maya : sis was my strength, how will I face everything without alone


Nandini : thats why god is telling you, till today you were dependent on your sister that now you will have to learn managing by yourself

Edited by ashpat3 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nyc update!!
Waiting for Arjun's entry...
continue soon
Thnx for pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
#13
A mystery thriller!!! Wow
I just love thriller storys..and if romance is there then even better..
Nice charachter sketch and 2 parts.
I am hooked already...
Poor maya, she lost her sister.. Hope so she gains strength and can find out about that muderer soon.. Is that white mask wala only aftr maya and his sister..
Ranvir charachter as police officer also looks intersting.. Is he only going to handle this case in mumbai also??..
And where is our hero Arjun?? Looking forward for his entry soon..
Thanks for the pm..
Do update soon
Edited by sellysona - 7 years ago
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Part 3

Maya packs her clothes to go for Bombay. She and Nandini goes to airport for her departure

Nandini : Maya, you are going to start your new life baby, take care of yourself

Maya : I will miss you mom, you too take care alright

Nandini : leave your past and everything behind Maya, you should go, its time for your flight

Maya : okay, mom (touches her feet) bye

Nandini : bye my princess, all the best for your career

Maya checks in and goes in the economy class


Ooty

Saanjh is getting ready when her neighbor aunty Mala comes

Saanjh : please come in aunty

Mala : look, take this food with you and mix this everyday in your milk

Saanjh ; aunty so much food, how will I take this with me

Mala : shut up and take it quietly (makes her wear amulet) this will protect you from all problems

Saanjh : aunty if mom was alive, she would have been like this

Mala : don't you even dare say that you are motherless, I always considered you more than my own daughter

Saanjh : I will always be grateful to you, I know mom might be very happy

Mala : now come on you are getting late, I am waiting outside

Saanjh (talks to her mom's picture) : mom, did you see how god is grateful to me, he sent somebody to fill your place

In a while Saanjh too sits in the bus and heads towards Mumbai


Mumbai

City of dreams where million of people fate changes everyday. A guy is standing at the hilltop opening his arms and taking fresh air blowing none other than Vicky. His life has been not smooth like others and has lost his dad at very young age

Vicky : BSS college here I come (shouts out loud)


The scene shifts at beach where a very handsome hunk comes out of water after driving speed boat named Ayaan

Girls drool over him. He lives life to the fullest and never fail to make other happy. His only passion is adventure and taking shortcut to make big with hook or crook.



Maya reaches Bombay airport and takes her bags. Her mom arranged driver for her who would drop her at hostel.

Driver : hello ma'am, how was your flight

Maya : it was good, take me to Piyali's house first

Driver : sure ma'am

Piyali is Maya and Ruhi's cousin as both of their father are real brothers.


BSS College

Ayaan's car clashes with Vicky's bike in the parking lot

Ayaan : can't you see? you hit my car first and took the parking

Vicky : I didn't knew this spot have your name on it, you did a damage to my bike too, who will pay for it

Ayaan : take it, and repair your bike (gives him money)

Vicky : do you think I am a beggar, keep this money to yourself


Maya reaches to grand bungalow of the city. The house is no less than palace. Maya comes out of the car when the watchman press the code from the house to open the gate. Servants greet her happily

Maya : oh my god, this house is still the same, kaka, where is Piyali

Servant ; she is working out in the fitness room

Maya : thank you (gives her bag and heads down to fitness room)

She looks at Piyali who is running on treadmill listening to her music. Maya irritably takes the ear plugs when Piyali does not respond her.

"Oh my god, Maya, when did you come"Piyali immediately stops her exercise and hugs Maya

"When you were busy with your exercise" fakes annoyance

Piyali : oho, don't be angry, I said sorry

Maya : I don't understand what makes you so curious to do this, look at your figure due to constant dieting

Piyali : my dear sister, this is our day, I want guys to run behind me not the opposite alright

Maya ; you will not change, come lets go

"I am sorry about Ruhi's death, dad told me" Ruhi consoles her

Maya ; its alright, don't worry I am fine

Piyali : now you are here, I won't let you miss Ruhi, did police found out the killer

Maya : not yet, they are still investigating, culprit didn't left any clues

Piyali : they will find out soon I am sure, come lets have lunch

Maya ; party?

Piyali : yes, there is newcomer's party, it will be fun please

Maya ; you go I don't have mood

Piyali :okay, fine then I will not go and we will spend our time together here

Suddenly Piyali's phone rings

Piyali : yes dad, okay I will take care of it (hangs up)

Maya : what happened

Piyali : it was dad, I forgot to tell you that dad's one of the closest friend's daughter is joining college

Maya : oh good

Piyali : he told me to take care of her, she was supposed to stay in hostel, but for few days dad told her to stay in our house till she settle down

Maya : who is she?

Piyali : I don't know her yet, her name is Saanjh Mathur, she is coming from Ooty

Maya : even I wanted to live in hostel but mom insisted me to stay at home

Piyali : why do you need to stay on campus when you have our house

Maya : I just want to live that life

Piyali : college is close from house, stay here for few days and we will figure it out, I sent driver to pick up Saanjh


Later in the evening there is freshers' party at the campus for newcomers. Host announces for the star perfumer of the evening. The crowd cheers very loudly and voice echoes in the stadium more when a dashing and charmer makes grand entry none other than Arjun Sharma. He is the guy a girl can easily fall just by his cool attitude. However at bottom of his heart there are deep scars left on his heart.


ek pal ka jeena phir to hai jaana

tofa kya leke jaaye dil yeh bataana

ek pal ka jeena phir to hai jaana

tofa kya leke jaaye dil yeh bataana

khaali haath aaye the ham, khaali haath jaayenge

bas pyaar ke do meethe bol jhilmilaayenge

to hans kyun ki duniya ko hai hasaana

ae mere dil tu gaaye jaa, ae aaye aao aaye aa

ae mere dil tu gaaye jaa, ae aaye aao aaye aa


aankho me dilbar ka sapna bhi hai, ha koi sapna bhi hai

duniya me mera koi apna bhi hai, ha koi apna bhi hai

ek chehra khaas hai jo dil ke paas hai

honton pe pyaas hai milne ki aas hai

dilbaro ka magar kahan koi thikaana

ae mere dil tu gaaye jaa, ae aaye aao aaye aa

ae mere dil tu gaaye jaa, ae aaye aao aaye aa



He sets the stage on fire with his performance.

The whole college enjoys his dance and female base fandom.

Raj : wow, Arjun Sharma not bad, after today this college's girls will only look at you

Arjun : don't be jealous this is Arjun Sharma's charm which no girl can escape (says with attitude and scene freezes with Maya's face with him)



Shimla

Constable gives postmortem report to Ranveer of Ruhi and also finds some pills from her hostel room

Ranveer : did you talk with the hostel staff

Constable : yes sir, mostly all said she was positive person but her roomate said she was very depressed from past few months

Ranveer : call that girl here, I want to meet her, whats her name

Constable : Suhani

Later constable brings her to police station but is very scared to answer him

Ranveer : look, don't be afraid, just answer my question very carefully

Suhani : yes sir

Ranveer : so Suhani, from how long you know Ruhi, I mean tell me what you know about her

Suhani : She is my roommate from last three years, she was very jovial person always trying to make people happy

Ranveer : but we found some pills from her bag, did she had habit of taking sleeping tablets

Suhani : Sir, as far as I know she never need them but from few months she was always tensed on something, I tried to ask her so many times but she never told me

Ranveer : did you ever felt that she had any boyfriend

Suhani : I am not sure but I saw her scared few days before her murder, like somebody was blackmailing her, I told you what I know

Ranveer: thank you for the information Suhani, I will call you if I need your help, you can go

Suhani : I am ready to help in any manner I can Sir, thank you (leaves)

Constable ; Sir, what do you think?

Ranveer : this case is not that easy it looks, I am missing a big link, anyway you keep an eye on her friends for a while and check her hostel room, and I want the phone records

Constable : I will bring that to you by evening

Ranveer : good



Precap : Ranveer heads out to Mumbai after getting some clues. Saanjh and Maya becomes friends in short time

Edited by ashpat3 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Read both the chapters. Maya & Ruhi bonding was very good. Loved Maya giving the most precious gift to Ruhi. Arjun & Aayan's character is interesting. Loved Maya-Piyali friendship. Precap would be interesting.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome

story looks interesting

maya lost her sister and her death is a mystery

she came to mumbai for studies and here maya and sanjh are going to b friends

continue soon

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice story
Thank you for the pm
Do update next chapter soon
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I absolutely love this FF, thanks a ton for having shared this kind of fiction with us!!
I really like how you have incorporated a new set of characters in the story and I also really admire how fast-paced the story is.
Piyali, Maya and Saanjh under one roof, can't wait to read that! Since Piyali is Ayan's gf, I think they will all hang out as a group. Also, I think they all enroll in the same college.
Arjun, arjun.. Everyone dies for Arjun. I really hope to see some ArYa
Update soon!
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First of all I am really sorry.. I am really busy these days...
And busy right now..lol..
Now coming to the story..wow this concept looks totally hatke yaar...and fresh too...
Ohh Maya had a sister and she died at the first chapter...
Wondering who could kill her...
And arjun's character seems interesting...

Looking forward to ArYa meeting..
Thanks for the pm.. continue soon 😳
Edited by ArYa-JenWin20 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 4

Constable finds phone records to Ranveer and tells about unknown number

Ranveer : did you find the information about that caller

Constable : No sir, the killer is very smart, but the location is traced from Mumbai

Ranveer : Mumbai? well then lets get ready for our thrilling journey


Saanjh reaches Mumbai when Piyali sends her driver to receive her.

Piyali : hey welcome to my palace, I hope there was no problem

Saanjh ; not at all, thanks (sees Maya standing behind)

Piyali ; oh Saanjh, thats my one and only cousin Maya

Saanjh ; hi, nice to meet you (shakes her hand)

Maya : same here, so you came from Ooty, I heard its a very nice place

Saanjh : You have heard it right, because it is place of peace

Piyali : okay girls, thats enough for today, lets have dinner you both might be hungry, come and then I will show you your room, kaka put her luggage in the upstair room

Servant : okay, dear

Maya : Piyali, where is uncle? its been so many years I haven't seen him

Piyali : you know him na, he always stays out for work

Saanjh ; food is very delicious seriously

Piyali : my dad told me you too cook very good, some day make for us too

Saanjh ; sure why not, you both will never forget my food

Later the girls go to their perspective room and set up their rooms. Maya is not able to sleep at night due Ruhi's death and wakes up in the middle. She takes her tablet and goes back to bed again.


Next day Saanjh wakes up early and does her morning prayer when Maya joins her too.

Saanjh : good morning

"Good morning Saanjh" Maya takes the aarti

Saanjh : where is Piyali, she didn't woke up yet, I hope she is not late

Maya : you don't know her, she is not used to wake up so early, you go ahead I will wake her up

Saanjh : please hurry up, we will be late for first day



Later Piyali takes Maya and Saanjh to the college campus.

Saanjh : wow, this is such a beautiful campus, I must say its amazing

Piyali : I know right, and people are not so beautiful here (teases)

Maya looks around the college strangely and does not hear Piyali's words

Piyali : Hello, I am asking you something, where have you lost

Maya : nothing at all

Piyali : are you sure?

Maya : definitely


The whole college is stunned with Arjun's dashing entry on his bike including Saanjh. Maya does not bother with his charm.

Saanjh ; what happened

"Nothing, I don't know whats wrong with this girls, as if they didn't see handsome guy than him" Maya says fixing her hair

Saanjh : you are right, lets go we are getting late for our class

Professor ; So class, be ready with your presentation by friday, thank you

Abhi : hey beautiful, so you both are new in this college ? (shakes hand)

Maya instead of forwarding hand lowers his hand.

Arjun : okay don't shake hands, I will talk with your friend (goes to Saanjh)

Maya ; Excuse me, there are several girls in this college who come to flirt with you but stay away from us

Saanjh : Maya, let it be why are you arguing, come we are getting late (takes her outside)

Arjun : Oh so the nuclear bomb's name is Maya

Rohan : listen, don't try to do anything stupid

Arjun : you know I love challenges, I will definitely woo this girl just wait and watch



Saanjh : Maya, you shouted at poor guy unnecessarily

Maya : I know this type of boys very well, you should too learn how to deal with them, don't become fool

Piyali : hey girls, how was your first day

Saanjh : its just awesome, but Piyali I have very big issue

Piyali : what?

Saanjh : Maya and me were thinking to stay on the campus please (pleads like child)

Piyali : Saanjh

"Even I want that, it would be very great experience for both of us " Maya too puts her opinion

Piyali : okay fine, you both stay but on one condition, you both will come at home in weekends promise

Saanjh and Maya : Promise (puts their hand together)

Piyali : then lets go talk in the office for housing and you both can start to prepare everything


Ayaan is playing basketball in court when ball accidentally hits Piyali

Ayaan : I am so sorry, can you pass the ball please

Piyali looks at the ball and grabs the ball walking towards the court.

Ayaan : ball

"A basketball player should have only focus on one target, small distraction can be harmful " Piyali throws ball in the basket and walks with attitude

Ayaan is mesmerized with her style and keeps up with his practice


Saanjh : who was he?

Piyali : things I don't like, I won't bother to know about them

Maya : you both carry on I will be right back from washroom

Piyali : okay come soon

Maya goes in the washroom when she hears weird noise calling her name. She quickly runs out of the washroom but is still nervous.

Maya goes into a musical room and sees a piano and suddenly starts playing the piano which triggers her memory of an incident during her childhood when music became her enemy.

Piyali : hey I did not knew you play such a great piano

Maya : nothing, I was trying to play it

Piyali : so you know how to play piano, when did you learn it

Maya : No way, I have to call my mom, I will see you in a while

Piyali gets in confusion seeing Pragya's behavior


Saanjh goes to library when she clashes to Vicky who is carrying books in his hands.

"I am so sorry I didn't see you" Saanjh quickly bends to pick up the books and bumps onto Vicky's head

Vicky ; thats fine, you don't have to bother (looks up to her face)

In a moment he gets lost in Saanjh's innocent eyes and simplicity.

Saanjh : Escuse me, your books (waves her hand)

Vicky : you are new to college?

Saanjh ; yes, its my first day, I am Saanjh

Vicky ; I am Vicky, nice to meet you



At night Arjun goes to his house only to find his father waiting for him.

Arjun : you didn't sleep yet?

" How would I see you when I sleep early, why are you so late today" Rakesh keeps his book on table

Arjun : you don't have to wait for me till this late, dad

Rakesh : your mom keeps waiting everyday when you come home

Arjun ; dad I am very tired, I have college tomorrow, good night you go to sleep (goes inside his room)


Ranveer comes to Mumbai and reports to the headquarters

Commissioner : Welcome to Bombay, Mr Singh


Ranveer : Thank you so much Sir, and don't worry you will get the results soon for Ruhi's murder


Commissioner ; Just for your information, her sister is in Mumbai for interrogation, don't be lenient on her


Ranveer : don't worry Sir, whoever the killer is won't escape for long



Precap : Saanjh and Maya shifts into apartment on campus unaware of inviting danger for both of them

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