MayRa/ShivJen DT #33 "Beyhad Pyaar ki Udaan" - Page 24

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: pranurosid

🙋 Went to watch the episode again😉

Hope you skipped the 2nd part😭

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: dewdrops.16

Hope you skipped the 2nd part😭

Obviously. Can't make my peaceful sleep as nightmare with those creepy stares and acts of MJ🤢..I wtached it only for MayRa❤️☺️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Tiaraa

kisine padha ye???..Nhi?? Ok..ay🥺


I like this mischievous side of Maya!! How she used MJ’s tactic against him! 😂

Well even tho we probably won’t get to see this, still, thank you for writing this! ❤️


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Posted: 4 years ago

They are so soft and natural.. ShivJen's chemistry is seriously on another level

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Tiaraa

....if the old Maya jaisingh was in the place where mj is hearing their room convo..


Her phone rang again and she glanced at it once before looking back at rudra..he loves her too much..and this feeling cannot be explained in words. Her attention is brought back to the phone which rang again..its from Rajeev!! What does he wants now? They just had a talk few min back! Is mom okay? Are they attacked..an unsettle feeling arrises inside her and she excuses herself from rudra to pick up her phone. As she is talking in low whisper..she realizes Rajeev is eing threatened on other side..there is someone near Him...she had this very bad feeling ..her eyes brow squeezed and her heart dilutez..she silently prays krishna to help her..to save her family...and just then she feels two hands circling her waist.. Her phone drops out of reflection and it slips near the table. She knew its rudra and masks her fear with a nervous smile. She cannot let him be involve with the mess she promised.

Rudra apologizes for scaring her and goes to pick up her phone but she beats him and picks it up before he could. She waves off the fear with more smile..her fear is noticeable..he wanted to ask her but that same time he hears Diya calling rudra as antara got attack again... He runs to help his mom while Maya quickly places the phone over her ears to listen to what Rajeev is trying to tell her so that she can help him.

But as she does ..she feels a beeep disturbance ...she quickly puts the phone away..then she again places the phone and the sharp tune tears her ear again..she looks here and there and then spots landline and thinks to use it as she walks few step away..she can clearly hear Rajeev voice..as she steps back to the spit earlier..she hear the irritating sound again..then she realizes..and scans the place..the sofa..the flower vase..behind painting..beneathe table...that when she sees the small red gadget blinking to scream it presence..a new wave of anger engulfed maya in it..

She hears rudra footsteps anf the door openss again..she clutched the gadget in between her palm and placed it back to its original position.

She gets up and rudra explains her that antara is given med and she is okay..as if she care !! Huh😆

Maya sways her hips more seductively as she walks to her bed and lays on it to her side.. Her curves are display for his eyes.. Rudra gulps hard to fight the desire.

He tries to look away when he hears maya calling him..he turns around and finds maya looking for something in drawers and calking him with fingerz..

He covers up the distance quickly..maya gently whispers in his ear..."can you apply this balm here..." Pointing at the end of her spine..she smiles...and then she fakes pain too..

Rudra nods and tries to lift her cloth little but she is wearing maxi and hr has to undo it first..she lifts herself gently allowing him to access her body and remove her maxi..he closes his eyes as he feels his throat getting dry with desire for his wife... He with shivering fingers grabs the bed sheet and wraps it around her...and pulls the blanket so that he has space to move his hands to massage her without her being fully naked to him...

As soon as his warm hands begins doing magic she moans...the moans only increased min by min as rudra focussed only on helping maya without letting the dirty thoughts cross his mind..it was difficult with the moans and the boner🤣

But he managed...on the other side..mj gets panic on hearing her moans..and her encouragement to him..she was guiding him to work on places which pleasures her moan...he could hear rudra's heavy breathe with maya's words and moans...mj feelz something volcanic erupting in him and in a swift moment he takes the earphone and threw it on floor away from his reach as his eyez are spitting fire..was he jealous possesssive for manvi (his old toy) or protective for rudra..nothing was clear..he wanted to do something asap before they consummate their marriage ..he even took fast pace to their room to sepearate them..but that would not br appropriate..and nit even mj style..so he thinks and thinks more


While in other side maya enjoys the moment ..and blissfully lies with rudra next to her ..warming her body with his..and his fingers refused to leave the spot that causes her discomfort...she eyes at the table where thr microphone is kept and smirks..

"Typical mj"


She knows him..she knows it...and she knows she won this time


"Check Mr Roy" she lookrd at the photo frame and smirked

nice one ..perfect mixer of devilish, cunning and smart, seductive maya...😎😈😉
Edited by Gaurirane366 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Tiaraa

kisine padha ye???..Nhi?? Ok..ay🥺

Hey Tia dear..🤗

don’t get disheartened ...

Tum likho aur hum naa padhe ausa ho sakta hai kya??
I read half n then disturbed by a colleague so got busy in work n just finished it..

It was as always superb and beautifully written..

A perfect blend of smart, cunning, seductive and devilish Maya..😈

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: BeyondHorizon

Also the description says Maya is tensed about the situation at home. Rudra is angry at her for chopping her hairs and she is trying to pacify him. Preps begin for reception and Maya gives an ultimatum. Something is seriously wrong with Sony LIV app.

and the result will be rang-rasiya ? Yeh apna MJ toh cupid nikla !!


btw indian version of cupid is kaamdev right ? aab byas Rudra aka shiv jee is kaamdev ko bhasm kar de !!

Edited by stormborn - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: stormborn

and the result will be rang-rasiya ? Yeh apna MJ toh cupid nikla !!


btw indian version of cupid is kaamdev right ? aab byas Rudra aka shiv jee is kaamdev ko bhasm kar de !!

@ bold Yup Indian version of cupid is kaamdev..

@ red I wish agar yeh ho jaaye toh definitely aapke muh mein whichever sweets you love..

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: tournesol

So there is lack of consistency also in the characters now. I miss Rudra's sarcasm too. 😭

Yahhh....and sarcasm is not like ke sad yah angry hone se rehta hai aur happy hone se nehi......On the contrary habitually sarcastic logo ke romance me bhi usually sarcasm bhare phure hote hai but in a sweet way !

The things I loved when started this show is RIPing one by one (Ananya's brains, Rudra's sarcasm, Maya's badassery, Rishi {who could have been an amazing ally to Maya in this battlefield})

Edited by stormborn - 4 years ago
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