MayRa (Jenny/Shivin) DT #6 "Pyaar Ki Syahi Se Likhi Nafrat Ki Dastaan" - Page 12

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: tournesol


Hume Maya ki sanak lag gayi 🤣

ji haa bilkul🤣
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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Antara123

Damn. I typed off something. I doubt it makes much sense since Tia did write something. 😆 Gosh this is confusing. I guess it's the first time so it's cool.


It's okay, 😆 In this case you part would precede Tia's.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: tournesol


It's okay, 😆 In this case you part would precede Tia's.

So when a new thread is open, let's have some proper time limit given to each person to continue. And if the time limit lapses, say 12 hours or so, then the next person starts.
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Posted: 4 years ago

In the new thread, can this story be posted continuously? With each person's part in a different colour - preferably the colour of our IF ranking coz I can see it's all different.

@Shiba, congratulations you recently got promoted right?

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Posted: 4 years ago


Okay. Here it goes:


Epilogue:


According to Hindu rituals, marriage doesn't happen for one year after someone dies. So MayRa dated for a year after they already consummated their relationship. Now they are about to be married.


Ru: What do you think what we'll tell our kids about our love story?

M: We will say their father always forgot the rules.

Ru: What rules? I remember everything.

M: What do you remember?

Ru: huskily leans in Loyalty, Commitment leans in more Passion

M: she backs out I don't think you do Mr. Roy. Lemme explain. You said we are doing traditional marriage rituals backwards. First SR , Maya came near Rudra's breath hitched, Then..

Ru: Then?

M: Then we can't see each other's face.

Ru: shocked: What! Why??

M: Kyunki rule hai: dulha dulhan ek doosre ka chehra nahi dekh sakte

Ru: Damn with all the rules! Kisses her passionately and more

M: At least let's go our room

Ru: Your wish my command..😉

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Tiaraa

he is satan...and he is just not obsessive about his son..he is control freak wants everything in control. He wants to become god to everyone. Sabki kahani likhna chahta hai..thats what i understood from so far episodes

He is devil that's true . But he is obsessed with his sons life too. One of the Characterstic come with it him being a control freak self centered jerk. It's all about him and what he wants . He definitely want to own the life of people around him. He has the fear of losing them,lost the control from them which make him weak. Weak people and their support give him Power . Without his followers he will be left weak. Once Rudra was his admire too then he screwed it that's why he is so desperately wants that support back , wants that control back . Mostly that's why Maya using his sons first to get back at him . 🤔He loves the power the day it will be taken away from him he will be destroyed .

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: tournesol


Okay. Here it goes:


Epilogue:


According to Hindu rituals, marriage doesn't happen for one year after someone dies. So MayRa dated for a year after they already consummated their relationship. Now they are about to be married.


Ru: What do you think what we'll tell our kids about our love story?

M: We will say their father always forgot the rules.

Ru: What rules? I remember everything.

M: What do you remember?

Ru: huskily leans in Loyalty, Commitment leans in more Passion

M: she backs out I don't think you do Mr. Roy. Lemme explain. You said we are doing traditional marriage rituals backwards. First SR , Maya came near Rudra's breath hitched, Then..

Ru: Then?

M: Then we can't see each other's face.

Ru: shocked: What! Why??

M: Kyunki rule hai: dulha dulhan ek doosre ka chehra nahi dekh sakte

Ru: Damn with all the rules! Kisses her passionately and more

M: At least let's go our room

Ru: Your wish my command..😉

awwww☺️

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Posted: 4 years ago


Thank you 😳

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Posted: 4 years ago

Acha ye batao..kya chal raha hai..kaunsa thread..kya batein ho rahi hai

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Antara123

In the new thread, can this story be posted continuously? With each person's part in a different colour - preferably the colour of our IF ranking coz I can see it's all different.

@Shiba, congratulations you recently got promoted right?

Ditto I was typing the same. Love to read round robin story telling continues on the new thread..

Love you guys Shibani, tia, tiara ..🤗 you guys are amazing story tellers.👏

N love you to all other writers on the forum.. you guys are amazing.. 🤗

Edited by dusk2dawn - 4 years ago
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