MayRa (Jenny/Shivin) DT #6 "Pyaar Ki Syahi Se Likhi Nafrat Ki Dastaan" - Page 10

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Posted: 4 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: _._shibani_._

As per UN's

1.Tiara

2.tournesol

3.Antara123

4._._shibani_._

Last part is posted by me, you can check that😊

Coollio.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: tournesol


Tia isn't around, so I posted after you did.

So next is me? How much time do I have,m
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Posted: 4 years ago
#93

Guys ek chota suggestion hai. Isko multi part FF banake post karna start karo na please

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Posted: 4 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: _._shibani_._

Can we do this every weekend? Like prepare a thread and legit make this a thing? Not on the DT becuase it disturbs the DT and when this becomes an AT, we won't be allowed, so, amin soch rahi thi, from Friday 9.30 to Monday 9.30 we do this round robin😃

Yes makes sense! Can you open a new thread now?
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Posted: 4 years ago
#95

@Tanu @Shibu: Cool idea 👍🏼

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Posted: 4 years ago
#96

It was clam wierdly very unsoothing silence echoed through walls and only the sound of knife that made contact with mj skin could br heard.

"Maya..maya i am here please don't loose it."


She could feel the pain, the pain that he felt too. He saw the man dying in the hands of his own mother. All the moments of his childhood played before him. Their happy family with rishi and his parents.

His hands shiver as hr focussed to untie the binds she was stucked with . it was then his eyes became horrified.

Mj was not human. He was satan and this act have proved it. He has slit her veins from other hand and one hand had a syringe attached to it.

She has lost too much blood. Dots appeared before her vision. She was loosing it. He was losing her.

"Maya please..maya hold on.please i will save you. You cant give up on life. Please dont." He fiercely kissed her lips as he tried to comfort her and encourage her both at the same time.

He wanred someone rightnow badly. Someone who tells him maya will make through this mess. He wanted confirmation. Tears kept rolling through his eyes as he picked her up and ran like maniac to his car.

"Rudra it hurts..." She says in unconscious state.


She could feel his panick " you know My chances to live is next to impossible. You know that rudra."

He denies in no and keeps a finger on his lips while he drives faster and faster.

"I will save you. Save you maya." He wanted to cheat destiny this time. His love will beat death. She will live. They will have a happy family together.

He lookrd at her and she was strangely silent. He pats her face with one hand and she moves a bit. He relaxed a bit and drive even faster.

Then it happened , a woman with his child is about to cross road and he hits the brake.

His brows sets in to knot as he tries harder. And then in the last minute he drove his car above divider and save the woman and his child.

"Why is break not working?" He thinks but doesnt voice it as it will make her worried.

Little did he know MJ already knew all his coins of chess have changed side and he already knew his end was near. So he was well prepared for it. But he was not going to let anyone win if he didnt won the game. He had failed break of Rudra's car as soon as he parked. As he died he died with the satisfaction of being the man who won no matter how!

There was no way to stop the car. He tried to pull emergency brake but it didnt work. There was no way they were going to make it.

The pain was evident in her eyes. She was dying but holding herself on the verge of death because of him. He told her to not die and she won't till he asks her to. Her life was his. And only his.

He knew the pain is insufferable. It was a time of decision. He didnt had any phone to inform. There was no sand near to take the car there and make it stop. They were either going to crash or kill many innocent lives before they crash. He immediately turned his wheels and took the car to the high point of city where the silence of the mountain witnesses the struggle of the man for his love.


"Maya...you know you were the best thing happened to me. I have not told you this ever but I was in love the moment I saw you. But i fall deep when I met the real you. No matter how our love ends. We will be together maya. Always! "


She knew why he was saying this she could feel the tension and his struggle. She nods her head in yes and lifts herself up to hiug rudra even tightly..

The wheels move with speed that was a nightmare untill he snaked his arms around her and closed his eyes..

"I love you maya"

"I love you rudra" she manage to reply.

The smile was surreal on their faces as he lifts her up gently and placed her on him. Her front facing his. He left the steering wheel while he hugged her tightly.


Maya ki beyhadh nafrat haar ke bhi jeet gai..

Rudra ki mohabbat ek nai kahani likh gai

beyhadh nafrat ka aghaz, anjaam ki kahani likh chuka

Wo ek ho gaye..sau tukdo me lipti maya ki kahani rudra ki kahani likh gai

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Posted: 4 years ago
#97

oh sorry it was difficult to type from mobile.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: Antara123

So next is me? How much time do I have,m


Yes you are next.. but Shibz asked me to rework it.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#99

Story khatam!😭

M off to make a proper thread😆

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: _._shibani_._

Story khatam!😭

M off to make a proper thread😆

mj is not lalu panju to beat that easily na..so i thought this way..how did you find it🤔
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