Bekaaboo...Uncontrolled love... Pratham Devlekha Ashwat SS

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Bekaaboo...Uncontrolled love... Part 1

I dedicate this story to my friend _ingenuity_phoenix who suggested me to write a story taking inspiration from the malayalam movie 'Kappela'.Thank you for suggesting 3 male actors who are apt for playing the male lead roles in this SS.

I thank my dearest friend ingenuity_phoenix for the beautiful cover pages.





2 twin babies were born.Their parents Arjun and Preeta became very happy and pampered them.

Arjun and Preeta looked at their babies cutely.

Arjun:They both are so cute.

Arjun:Thank you so much for giving me 2 sweet daughters.

Preeta:Thank you so much to you too.

They smiled.



Naming ceremony of the babies....

Arjun and Preeta were holding each baby in their hands.

Arjun:She will be known as Kavya.

Preeta:She will be known as Pihu.

Everyone smiled.



After 6 years...

Arjun and Preeta were very happy with their daughters.

Arjun went near Preeta with a naughty smile.

Arjun:Give me a kiss Preeta.

Preeta stared at Arjun:What?

Suddenly Kavya went near them.

Kavya:Mr.Handsome...why are you asking mumma for a kiss?

Arjun smiled at her frank question while Preeta gave shocking expression.

Arjun:Nothing Kavya...you go and play.

Kavya:Ok.

Kavya went to play.

Preeta:Arjun...why did you ask me for a kiss?Kavya heard it and she asked you about it.Today's generation has no shame.

Arjun chuckled.

Arjun:Now give me a kiss Preeta.

Preeta:Stupid!

Preeta pretended to be angry and pushed him.Arjun laughed.



Kavya ran towards Arjun.

Kavya:Mr.Handsome!Are you sad that mumma did'nt kiss you?

Arjun felt shy.

He thought:Preeta is right.The new generation has no shame.

Kavya:You don't worry.I will give you a kiss.

Arjun smiled.

Arjun:Then kiss me doll.

Arjun bent down and Kavya kissed his forehead.

Arjun kissed her cheek back.

Preeta and Pihu smiled at them.

Pihu:Papa!

Arjun turned back and he understood what Pihu is longing for.

Arjun:Can I not kiss my Pihu baby?

He kissed her cheek.All the 4 had a family hug.



Preeta was chopping vegetables.Her finger got pricked.

Preeta:Ahhh!

Kavya went near her and looked at her finger.

Kavya:Mumma,do you feel pain?

Preeta:No Kavya.I am alright.

Kavya:Show me.

Kavya held her finger and blew air at the wound.



Arjun came back from his office.He saw Preeta looking very upset.

Arjun:What happened Preeta?Why are you looking sad?

Preeta started crying making him more shocked.

Arjun:What happened Preeta?Why are you crying?

Preeta told him something.Arjun was shocked.

Preeta:I did'nt want this Arjun.I did'nt expect this to happen.

Arjun embraced her from behind to comfort her.

Arjun:Preeta....don't be upset.Be positive.What if it's happening for better.Because it's a blessing from God.

Preeta:I don't know Arjun.But I feel disturbed.

Arjun:No...no need Preeta.

Arjun wiped her tears.




After 20 years....


A party....

Kavya and Pihu came downstairs.

Pihu:We are so glad to welcome you all to be a part of our celebration.

Kavya:Let us welcome the most beautiful,the most adorable and the most loving couple-Arjun Suryavanshi and Preeta Suryavanshi.

Arjun and Preeta came.

Kavya and Pihu hugged them and said:Happy wedding anniversary dad and mom.

Arjun and Preeta smiled:Thank you.We both are lucky to get such lovely daughters.

Kavya and Pihu smiled.

A guy arrived there with a cake.It was Adarsh who is their neighbour.

Adarsh:Here is the cake.It's from my own bakery.

Arjun:Wow!Then it will be yummy.

Preeta:Yes.After all Adarsh is the main baker in the bakery.

Adarsh smiled.

Arjun and Preeta cut the cake and fed each other.Then they fed the cake to Pihu and Kavya.

Kavya played music.

Arjun and Preeta started dancing.

Sun le o mahiya

Dil se sajda tera

Sun le o mahiya

Dil se sajda tera

Tere bina jee na lage

Tere bina jee na lage

Tere bina jee na lage

Sun le o mahiya

Dil se sajda tera

Sun le o mahiya

Dil se sajda tera

Tere bina jee na lage

Tere bina jee na lage

Tere bina jee na lage

Aaja re aaja re aaja re aaja re

Aaja re aaja re aaja re aaja re

Pihu imagined dancing with Adarsh.

Sun le o mahiya

Dil se sajda tera

Sun le o mahiya

Dil se sajda tera

Tere bina jee na lage

Tere bina jee na lage

Tere bina jee na lage

Aaja re aaja re aaja re aaja re

Aaja re aaja re aaja re aaja re

Sun le o mahiya

Dil se sajda tera

Sun le o mahiya

Dil se sajda tera

Adarsh imagined dancing with Kavya.

Tere bina jee na lage

Tere bina jee na lage

Tere bina jee na lage

(Kundali bhagya)

Pihu went near Adarsh and said:The cake was yummy.I know that you baked it specially for mumma papa.You are very sweet.

Adarsh smiled:Thank you very much.You all are special for me.So it's my pleasure to bake cake for you all.

Pihu was lost in his cute smile.

While walking at the party,Kavya's foot slipped and Adarsh caught her with his hand.

Adarsh was lost in her beautiful eyes.

Kavya:Thank you Adarsh.I would have fallen down.

Adarsh:It's ok Kavya.By the way you are looking very pretty in this dress.

Kavya:Thank you.

Kavya walked away.




A young drummer was playing the drum.

All were clapping hands and cheering up for him:Pratham!Pratham!

Kavya walked through the crowd and reached in the front somehow to watch his performance.Suddenly in the wind her duppatta fell over her face.Only her eyes were visible.Pratham's eyes fell over her shining eyes.

He thought:Her eyes are so magical that I am getting attracted towards them.I wish I could see her face.

Halchal Kahin
Dhadkan Nai
Ye Hai Galat Ya Sahi

Kavya removed her duppatta from her face.Pratham blinked his eyes seeing her beauty.


Bekaaboo
Bekaaboo

She was smiling seeing his performance while he was lost in her.

Bekaaboo Karti Hai Muje
Tu Jo Aise Ki
Bekaaboo(Bekaaboo webseries).



At night....

Kavya's phone rang.She picked up the call.

Kavya:Hello!

It was a male voice:Hi..I am...

Kavya:You are..?

He:I can't say my name now.What's your name?

Kavya:You can't tell your name and you don't know me.Then why did you call me?

He:I simply dialed a random number and got you.

Kavya was surprised as he said that openly.

Kavya:I admire your honesty.But why did you call me?

He:Simply.I was feeling lonely as no none loves me.No one cares for me.So I felt like talking to someone.That's why.

Kavya:Why do you think that nobody loves you?There maybe someone who loves you.

He:No one loves me.That's the truth.My eldest sister always scold me.

Kavya:She maybe scolding you because she cares for you and wants you to be the best.

He:I don't think so.

Kavya:You are seeing only her angry side.Try to look at her soft side also.Then you may know her real feelings for you.

He:I will see.

Kavya:Ok.Then I am ending this call.Bye!

He:Bye!

After cutting the call,Kavya thought:Strange guy!

Edited by jasminerahul - 1 years ago

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Congrats on the SS


Part 1

Wonderful update.... greatly written

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Nice start dear

Just loved it🤗

Thanks for the PM

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PreeJun giving birth to twins and the couple scene was sweet.So they r girls, named as Kavya and Pihu. Arjun asking Preeta for a kiss and Kavyaasking about it was funny. Kavya kissing Arjun and family hug was cute. Kavya blowingair on Preeta’s wound was so innocent and sweet scene. What happened? Why is Preetacrying? PreeJun dance was romantic. Eisha Singh plays Pihu? Adarsh Kavya scene wasnice. Pratham Kavya scene was magical. Who’s this strange guy calling Kavya? Isit Ashwat? Perfect pics. Waiting for next.

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Everything was going well, so why was suddenly Preeta so upset?

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A triangle between Pihu, Adarsh and Kavya. One of them might get hurt.

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Another love triangle is shaping up. Kavya is the center of both.

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Who called Kavya? Is it another guy yet?

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Thank u very much Salley, coderlady, taahir,khwaishfan,glitter_goldie



Bekaaboo...Uncontrolled love...Part 2

A boy was sitting in his room.His sister Yamini went near him.

Yamini:Are you angry with me?

The boy was silent.

Yamini:I scolded you for your betterment.I want you to focus on your work more.So that we will be financially secure.Only the people who are financially well off can survive in this world.Otherwise people will mock us.That's why.Actually your di loves you very much bacha.

The boy looked at her emotionally.

He remembered Kavya telling him that his sister may be loving him very much and he should see that side of hers.

He:I am sorry Di for misunderstanding you.

He hugged he and wept.Yamini caressed him smiling.

Yamini:It's ok bacha.




The boy rang up Kavya again.

Kavya:Hello...who is this?

He:I am the same boy who called you randomly for relief.

Kavya was surprised.

Kavya:You saved my number?

He:Yes.I wanted to talk to you.You made me understand that my sister loves me a lot.Today I realised that.Thank you so much.Now i feel very happy.

Kavya smiled.

Kavya:No need of thanking me.You are happy.That's enough.

He smiled.

He:It's very nice to meet a good person like you.Once in a while only we meet such good people in our life.Will you be my friend?

Kavya smiled.

Kavya:Without knowing each other's names can we be friends?

He:Oh ya...I am Ashwat.

She:I am Kavya Suryavanshi.

They both kept talking.



Every day they talked to each other for a long time and became very close to each other in 2 months.



Adarsh rang up Kavya.

Adarsh:Kavya...can you come to a place?

Kavya:What?I did not understand.

Adarsh:I want to talk to you.

Kavya:I will come to the place you tell me.

Adarsh smiled happily.

Kavya thought:What does Adarsh want to tell me?




Kavya went to the place Adarsh invited her.

Adarsh went near her cheerfully.

Kavya:Actually why did you call me here?What do you want to tell me?

Adarsh:I called you here to give you my reply

Kavya was confused:Reply?What reply?

Adarsh said blushing:I love you Kavya.

Kavya was shocked.

Adarsh:I told my parents that I love you and want to marry you.So they have gone to your house to talk to your parents about our marriage.

Shock was a small word to describe Kavya's feelings.

Kavya:What are you saying Adarsh?Marriage?So fast...

Adarsh:Our generation prefers courtship before marriage.I also want it.So let's get engaged first.Then a long courtship..then our wedding.What do you say?

Kavya was not able to understand what to say in this situation.

She thought:What's happening?Why did Adarsh say that it's his reply?Why I can't understand anything?

Kavya was becoming restless.

She thought:I should tell Adarsh that I don't love him.

Suddenly Adarsh looked at his phone and said:I have to leave now as some customers are waiting at my bakery.Bye Kavya!

He walked away.

Kavya became upset.

Kavya:Oh...I couldn't tell anything to Adarsh.





Kavya went home.Arjun and Preeta went near her cheerfully.

Arjun:My doll...you didn't tell your Mr.Handome that you got a much more handsome man in your life.

Kavya was confused:Dad..?

Preeta:Adarsh's parents had come here with the proposal.They told us that you and Adarsh love each other a lot.Don't worry.We fixed your engagement with Adarsh.Are you happy?

Kavya was shocked.

Pihu hid her pain and told Kavya:I didn't know that you love Adarsh.Anyways congratulations Kavya.You are lucky to get a lovely guy like Adarsh.

Kavya became sad.



Kavya rang up Ashwat.

Kavya:Hello Ashwat...here there is a big problem.

Ashwat:What problem?

Kavya:My engagement is fixed with our neighbour Adarsh.

Ashwat became dull.

Then he smiled.

Ashwat:O!Congratulations.

Kavya:You are congratulating me?You are not upset at all?

Ashwat:Why should I be upset?

Kavya:I thought you will be sad to lose me.

Ashwat became sad.

Kavya said tearfully:I love you.You don't love me?

Ashwat:Kavya ..my family background is different from yours.You are very rich.But I am a middle class boy.You may suffer if you marry me and live with me.

Kavya:I don't care about your financial status.I am only bothered about what I feel for you.I like you and I know that you also like me.i want to marry you Ashwat.

Ashwat became emotional.

Kavya:Before my engagement with Adarsh,shall we meet?

Ashwat:I am dying to see you Kavya.

She smiled.

Kavya:We will meet.After that I will tell my parents about you and you please come here and talk to my parents about our marriage.

Ashwat:Sure.Now I am excited to meet you Kavya.

Kavya smiled:Me too.I will come to your place by bus.

Ashwat:I will come there to pick you up.

Kavya:How will we recognize each other?

Ashwat:We will be carrying our phone with us.It's easy to locate each other.Right?

Kavya smiled:Yes.




Preeta,Arjun and Pihu went to a distant place for a wedding function.Kavya refused to join them by pretending to be sick.Kavya travelled to Ashwat's place by bus.

She got out of the bus.She stood near a shop and rang up Ashwat.

Kavya:Ashwat...I am Kavya.I have reached the bus stand.Now I am standing near a tea shop.You please come here.Only then we will be able to identify each other.

He:I will come there.You be there itself.

Kavya:OK.

Kavya thought:Why does he sound different now?It was not Ashwat's voice.



Within a few seconds a boy reached there.

He called her:Kavya!

Kavya was surprised to see him.Because he was the same guy(Pratham) who was playing the drum and getting applause from the audience.

He was also surprised to see her.

He:You are Kavya?

Kavya:You?You are Ashwat?Oh...I never expected it.The person with whom I was chatting all this time was already known to me.I can't believe it.


Edited by jasminerahul - 1 years ago
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Loved it dear

Interesting part

Thank you for the PM

Continue soon🤗

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