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Posted: 9 years ago
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🤣🤣🤣awesome updates ...jus luv them😳...plzz continue soon😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow it's amazing. :)
Thanks a lot for pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53

Hello guys..

Chudail is here to give update..

Here it is

...

Chapter 3

Zain: (inner self)

Iss mamu ki bhanji ne socha tha kya? Ki mujhe ullu banayegi and mein baan jaoonga

Just wait and watch mkb mein kya kartoon hoon.. tumhe asli cudail yaad na dilaa di toh mere naam bhi habeeba chudail..eee yeh main kya bol raha hoon.. yeh ladki mujhe pagal kar degi.. haan toh main khahan tha.. ki mere naam bhi zain Abdullah nahi..

Buhahahhahahha

Till then aliya entered inside the car

Aliya: areee ohhh bereham insaan chalo lekar mujhe ghar mein.. yeh hania chudailon ki rani ko ghar dekhna hai.. warna tumhara khoon pee jaoongi.. ek minute.. che che che .. yeh kya bola maine?? Iss gande insaan ka khoon.. priya and alina kya bolengi.. plan change... haan mein tere aliya ko choodon gi nahi

He tried to show fear on his face

Zain: (to himself)

Yeh dekho kitna drama kar rahi hai.. ab maja aayega

Zain: malika -e - chudail maine socha kyun na apko ek surprise doon

Listening to surprise aliya's eyes glittered

Aliya cleared her throat

Aliya: buhahhahahhahahha tu mujhe surprise dega...

Zain nodes

Aliya: toh thik hai... mujhe aur extra mein bhi gifts chaiye ...

Zain: extra mein kyun??

Aliya: buhahahahha kambaqat insaan meri chudailon ke liye

Zain: ( to himself)

Haan haan

Itne gifts doonga ki your next 7 generation will remember

Zain: but malika- e - chudail apko apni eyes close karni hogi

Aliya was very excited for the surprise

Aliya: haan haan

Zain drove to the country side where there was a small hut

Zain: appp idhar rukiye

Aliya: okey

Zain went inside and told tantric who was there all the things

Tantric was fake and that only zain wanted..

Zain was very happy inside as his plan was working

Zain went near his car and asked aliya to come out

Zain: hania chudailon ki rani apni eyes maat kholna jab tak main na bolon phir ham ghar challenge

Aliya: hehehehheheehhehe okey

Aliya: (to herself)

Waise kya plan hai.. maja aagaya aaj... iss mamu ke bte ke saath esa hi hona chaiye..esi special treatment i am loving it

Zain and aliya entered inside the hut

Zain made aliya sit

Zain: aap apni aakhen khool sakti hai

Aliya opened her eyes slowly and looked here n there

She saw skulls hanging on the wall.. black magic things here and there

Aliya was fully shocked and was scared now

Aliya : (to herself) kahin isse pata toh nahin chal gaya

Nahi nahi pata chala hoga.. i am a super actor.. ese thodi na maine uss zeeshan ka heart fail kardiya..

Aliya: yeh ham khahan aagaye khambaqat insaan

Zain: kahin nahi mailka bas yeh meri dost ka ghar hai

Aliya: buhahahahha yeh tumhara dost hai

Zain: haan

As aliya was moving her head up and down she saw where she was sitting

It was made up of skulls and bones

She was scared to the fits and quickly got up from there

Zain: kya hua rani shahiba .. koi pareeshani apko

Aliya: yehhh .. yehhh kya hai

She pointed towards the seat

Zain: arre yeh.. yeh toh apki pehla pyaar hoga na.. yeh haadi..

He picked up one and showed up and then picked up a skull with only 1 teeth

And continued yaa phir ye

Aliya: yeh tum kya kar rahe hoon

Zain: abhi pata chal jaayega

Tantrik ji aaye

Aliya was fully shocked to hear the word tantric

Aliya: tann..tannn

Zain: " tan " nahi " tantrik"

Tantrik came and tied aliya with ropes

Aliya: yeh kya hai

Zain: arre malika - e - chudail yeh bas apke liye surprise

Tantrik and zain winked each other

While aliya was fully tensed as she was trapped in her own plan

Tantrik started: he bum bum bum rida bhag ja

He bum bum rida raat ki raani shu shu shu

He hit broom on her left shoulder

He bum bum bum bhag jaaa bawadi ki ranni

He bum bum bum bhag ja apne saaiyaan ke paas

Again he hit with broom on her right shoulder

He bum bum bum bum bhaag jaa rani chudail

Tere baache bula rahe hai.. bhaag jaa.. bhaag jaa..

Chood de iss ladki ko.. teri jagah uss qabristan mein hai hania ..

He again hit her on her head

And she winched with pain

Aliya ( to herself)

Lagta hai iss zain ko zaroor pata lag gaya hai... haye mera body.. kitna pain horaha hai.. ab mera saar.. yaa allah mein khaahan faas gayi

Tantrik: bhagti hai yaa ek aur doon

Aliya was already in paina dn hearing of her she got up from her seat as ropes were not tightly tied

Aliya: nahiii

Main thik hoon.. wooo mere naatak tha baas

Everybody there laughed

Aliya was fully ashamed of herself for making this plan

...

" ahhh" cried aliya

Zain woke up hearing it

Aliya was lying down on the floor as she fell down fron her bed during her sleep

Zain: ye earthquake kaisa tha

He looked at her direction n saw her lying on the floor

Zain: acha toh yeh tha earthquake ka raaz.. he maughed at himself and quickly closed his eyes before she could see

Aliya: toh yeh sab saapna tha

As she was getting up she saw a bone lying on the floor

She got scared and quickly ran from there

Actually that was dog's bone that zain brought for his friend's dog

Aliya while running: main yeh kabhi nahi karoongggiii

...

The end

So guys how was it..?

I know this part of khichdi was not tasty as compared to others

Tomatoes welcome

priya

Edited by iluvuzaya - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54
Lovely update that baba hahahahahahahagag bum but bum bhaaag jaa hahahahahahahhahaha 🤣can't stop laughing awsum yaar... Saari khichdi bht yummy thi tasty tasty * liking my fingers * ummm delicious 😆 maza aa gya loved all the updates Alina, Hania and priya awsum blossom updates kaise aise khichdi roz khane ko milte 😆... Khair bbye take care agli baar new khichdi wait lemme tell u Han... romantic khichdi pakana😆as u guyzz are expert in romance na... Btw this whole story was amazing it was fully entertaining...
Bbye take care
Ananya
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Gosh!!!...it was halirous. ..
I just started laughing at first line...and keep laughing whole time..
hania chudailon ki rani...lol..
zain ny aliya ko pitwa diya...
but thank god it was a dream...
bcuz real life m hmari chudail giri koi bear ni kr sakta..
thanks 4 writing this.
chudail hug...

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Posted: 9 years ago
#56
Hahahahhahahaha

Finally v r done with our chudailgiri
Chalo guyz time for group chudail hug

Osum update priyu ...i m laughing out loudly
Lol bum bum rida bhag ja apne saiya (taru) k paas

Shukar hai yeh sab dream tha warna sab hum teeno ko bawdi main daal dete

Osum work by us
Keep up the chudail giri
Lots of love

Alina
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57
Amazing ts!
OMG! I cnt stop laughing!
It was soo hilarious!
Keep writing chudails!!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#58
Buahahahahaha 🤣

Margayi 🤣 ... Yeh kya kardiya 😆 😆 😆

Gosh ! It was so hilarious 🤣 ... Shurawat se end tak 🤣

Kamal kardiya chudailo 😆 ...

Rida ka mantr was 😆

Rida sidhe apne Tarru ke paas land karegi 😆

Great TS 😃
Loved it 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#59
It was hilarious🤣
it was a dream😆
poor Aliya🤣
keep writing more








Riya😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#60
oh my GOD!!
I am literally laughing...
Full-on chudail type TS.
I cant stop thinking Harshad and Preetika's expressions,if these events were to take place inour Beintehaa..
AWESOME
keep writing
and Anya...kya jhakass idea tha!!
Laughing yet😆
Thanks for pm
Edited by StarsOnEarth - 9 years ago
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