Teri meri love story Final chapter part A, B, page 24, 26 , 19th April - Page 8

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wen will u update madhu..
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Originally posted by: madhufx9...

I'm going to update!!😛now😉


U r updating...😭*khushi k aansu*
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Chapter 35


Very sorry buddies!! Really I'm strucked from all sides...dedicated to all who waited patiently for update...Next update will be very Soon...


He ignited Engine and raced car to Airport...numerous questions were popping in his brain ... infinite quantum of anger was bursting out of him...


He got scared whenever she tried to runaway from him... he was frightened to loose her, scared to live without her...



She made every impossibility possible for him leaving him 6 years ago.. , he learnt living alone ,but he never stopped searching her, all these 6 years he thought that will be his last Run behind her...he expected her to understand him, to stay with him...



But Aliya Splashed water on all his belief's...he is after her again, Running to stop her... but this time he was not scared to loose her, it's not new to him...he already tasted loneliness...it's high time... his anger invaded his love for her... Thought of her Running away from him burned him like boiling Lava... he took diversion and drove back to home...



He wants to stop chasing her ... he wants her to run into his arms, cage him in her embrace... he waited 6 long years... he can wait for another few days...


Now he is not alone too...he has his two cutie pie's Sarah and Saif...



His phone beeped...it was his Minnie... a msg for him...


" Zain I'm in Flight...Take care of kids"


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She realised her Mistake, she left her parents in misery to escape from situation... she gave them Pain, Only Pain in return to their unconditional love...



The entire situation was untangled, the messy scenario ordered back to normal for Aliya...


Her held urge to see her parents didn't let her stay away from them anymore ... she should get Forgiveness from her parents firstly... bcz they were not at fault...but she punished them, granting them grief for their still alive daughter...



She missed her father and mother all these years...cried being alone when she was pregnant... wondered how her parents handled her when she was kid...bcz she was mischevious than Sarah and Saif...may be she had her father pampering too unlike her kids when she was kid...that made her more mischevious...



Her parents lived in her memories all these 6 years...they reproached for leaving her optionless...


Her father fell ill with her departure...Gulam was happy for getting a Son In law like Zain... Zain took complete responsibility of her family... but he was Sad too... His daughter gave pain not just to them but to Zain too...to the beautiful soul he ever met till date...all these 6 years they were worried about her where abouts as well angry on her for a stabbing Zain's heart...



When she Saw her parents for the first after long time, she was still...depression was clearly visible, her beautiful mom from whom she use to query beauty tips was not like earlier...there were folds due to aging, dark circles around her eyes representing marks of worry for her missing daughter...Her father ceased looking Royal as Business tycoon... he was pale, lost weight...



Her parents were Numb seeing her, motionless...Gulam collapsed on Chair not shifting gaze from his returned daughter...tears streamed down continuously from her mother's unlively eyes...



Their eyes balls were still, scared to blink, scared to miss pleasure of watching their daughter...they were still thinking she was their hallucination , Aliya raged to cuddle her mother...she hugged her tightly, Shabhana was startled. It's real not their hallucination like all these years...



She felt same like how she felt 29 years ago for the first time she caught her baby...she missed her daughter terribly...she felt relieved looking at her...



Her Only wish was too see her daughter Alive, safe before they die...and now she saw he daughter safe,healthy... Now she will never let her daughter Go away from them , she will do anything to make her stay back...


Shabhana hugged back her daughter..Aliya sobbed silently feeling warmth of her mother...she missed her warmth, her care, her love, her courage to fight with anyone for her...


Mother protects her kid. From the day one of baby's development to end of her life... from all the evil forces inside and around her...Her mother was her best friend, who always helped her in any issue... The only matter which she didn't share about was her Love for Zain...may be she might have guided her... But Aliya prisoned her feelings, denying obvious facts which were clear...



Her one single wrong step cost her parents alot...she felt ashamed for running way from them like a Coward!!



" I'm sorry Mom, Sorry for everything..."



Gulam's any left anger subsided seeing tears in his loving daughter...he joined his wife and daughter to share hug...Recollecting old days they spent together...


For a while she forgot she is a mother, she reverted back like a child between her parents narrating happenings in these 6 years...absorbing love of her parents which she missed...she missed being loved, being cared by someone...

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After spending quality time with her parents she left to her Home along with her parents...Her home is no more different from Zain's... she now knew where she belongs too...


She was scared to face Zain's parents... she was not scared of their anger, her fear was to face them...they kept assuring her from the day of her marriage, her place in home...but she straightly denied even after realising her love for Zain and rest of his family...



As she stepped in to Home...she glanced at surroundings...everything was changed, renewed, Furniture, paints, art etc... she didn't find anyone, she peeked her surroundings..



She expected Barkat at home...she too was not there.. she knew where her Mother In law will be..in her favourite place...KITCHEN...



She walked into kitchen...Suraiya was busy in cooking... hearing footsteps she turned to see who it was... registering person standing infront of her tears brimmed down her cheeks...


Aliya glued at entrance not taking further step...Her Hot MIL was same like earlier...Still looking Hot With few strands of gray hair...



A genuine smile bloomed her lips, seeing her...Aliya could still feel affection in her MIL's eyes for her... Tears didn't halt in Suraiya's eyes... the one standing in front was not Just Aliya...Her Son's Happiness...


Only she knew state of Zain after her departure... Suraiya and Osman tried everything to keep him happy...he was happy...na... pretended happiness for them...



But as a mother she very well knew her son's happiness is with Aliya...nothing gave him merriment...none took her place in his life... all she did was wishing to send back his happiness...Her wait ended today...


Her Sons happiness was infront of her, Can a mother get angry on her Son's happiness...?? NO...she cannot...


Suraiya outstretched her arms to embrace happiness of their home...


Aliya ran into her arms seeking forgiveness...Osman was informed about her arrival by Gulam...Soon he reached home...Aliya said sorry to everyone... Everyone forgave her, blessed her...


Suraiya fed her pasta... it was for the first time after many days Aliya had food cooked by someone...all these days she ate food cooked by herself...she knew how difficult to live like an Orphan...especially when we have loved ones ...


" Mom It's very tasty...I missed ur pasta, I use to tell kids about u and ur recepies..." Everyone looked at her in daze... Aliya who was floating in their love and affection realised she forgot to tell about Sarah and Saif... that moment she was really scared to reveal about kids...


Everyone's gaze was fixed on her expecting an answer for unuttered question... Aliya fumbled for words to start conversation... she was frightened, she hid about kids from them, she was shy too... to tell she is a mother...


Gathering her courage she revealed about Twins... everyone were shocked , shock was replaced with fierce...all were throwing fiercing looks for staying away, for keeping their grandchildren away from them...



Suraiya who was Uber shocked Fainted hearing it...Osman escorted her to Room, all were worried...after few min's she gained senses...Aliya served her Orange juice...



Suraiya never thought she could see Zain's kids...though she is grandmother of Barkat kid Asad ...Osman and Suraiya lost hope about Zain's kids...but they were already grandparents of their sons Kids...thought gave Suraiya temporary mental shock...



Coming out of trance Suraiya questioned Aliya about kids...


" where are my grand kids...?"


" Sarah and Saif are with Zain..." Aliya said quitely...


That was another shock to all... Zain who wanted surprise everyone said nothing to their parents...Now Suraiya understood reason behind her son's happiness 2 days back when she talked on phone...


Aliya asked all to not tell Zain that she is staying in his home...everyone agreed... Their little anger subsided soon...and entire home filled with excitement to see their grandchildren...


Gulam, Osman, suraiya and shabhana were congratulating eachother as soon as their shock ebbed...



They kept asking about kids, Aliya showed them their pictures, Videos...they queried their likes, dislikes to buy kids stuff...



Soon after Barkat, Rehan along with their son Asad arrived...Barkat was very happy to see her friend again...


Aliya was in tears she missed every one...only she knew how much she craved to share her pains, happiness with her own people...


" Aliya u r So mean...u left me alone with these Rehan and Zain...they always teases me...u were not there to support me..." Barkat complained to light up emotional situation...



Aliya smiled hearing her...she cleared her tears and assured her support from now... She looked at Asad, Barkat and Rehan's 4 years old kid... he was cute ,he jumped from rehan's hold to Aliya...


Aliya was amused of his fondness to her, bcz he saw her for the first time...Rehan clarified her confusion telling her he knew her Bcz of Zain...


Zain use to tell him about Aliya showing her pictures...


Aliya cried again hearing it...Barkat hugged her and explained how much Zain missed her...


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It was evening 5.30, she opened doors to their room... it was same like before...nothing changed...entire house was renewated except their room...
she stepped inside recollecting old memories...


Their pictures were hanged on the walls... she sat on the corner of bed and pulled draw beside her...there was a lighter which she purchased to present her driver, which they used in Island to make fire... she smiled placed it a side...and took album and started viewing optics...



All were pictures of her's, while cooking, chopping vegetables, watching TV, sleeping Aliya, Angry Aliya... which he captured without her knowledge...when they stayed in their single bedroom flat...in some she was looking wierd, ugly...she got angry on Zain for capturing such stupid poses of her...


But she doesn't knew these pics of her were reasons behind his still sanity...


She took a small velvet box which was inside, she opened it...It has her studs, Roses like Ruby studs which Suraiya and Barkat presented her on her birthday...there was a small slip under studs, she unfolded it curiously...


" I loved u that day, for a moment I was breathless, these studs judges only on u... first time I felt u r more than a friend to me...but I was stupid ,i denied hints my heart was giving me..."



Aliya's heart swelled in happiness, reading his love for her... she whipped up and walked to wardrobe, everything was same, half of his wardrobe was still occupied with her old cloths...not altering such stuff helped him some extent to forget emptiness in his life...


She sat on bed recollecting every moment she spent with her Gem...Barkat entered room with hot coffee and handed it to Aliya...


Aliya sipped it and paced to French windows in their room... she peeped out sipping coffee.. Poolside was full of Rose plants...and to her surprise all were white Rose plants...she tried to peep into garden...it was normal with different plants...


Poolside was never like this before...Her eyes glinted in merry looking at her favourite Plants... Barkat who noticed it said her...


" Zain planted them, he like watching them, so he planted them there..."


Aliya glanced at Barkat in amusement... giving her a disbelieving look...


" I donno whether u remember or not Aliya.." Barkat placed her cup and walked to reach her... " What? " Aliya asked genuinely not knowing reason...


" Itseems u Once said to Zain ur love for white roses..." Barkat said holding her shoulders...

" SO...?" Aliya questioned back still not getting her point...

" U Said u ll bring one white Rose plant everytime when u go nursery...so he asked Gardner to get White Rose everytime we purchase plants...continuing your habits and Zain planted them here so that he can watch them..."


Aliya was numb hearing her friend...she couldn't believe he still remember what she said...and he followed like how she does if she was at home...she collapsed on Chair, her Gem amazed her every time with his love ...


Tears flooded down realising pain she gave him... She should be happy knowing his love, but she was angry on herself for ditching him, leaving him in pain these many years...


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Lately she realised she didn't receive single msg or reply back from her Gem from morning...it bemused her...


She pulled out phone from her bag and texted a msg to him...

Gem: I reached home...

She waited for reply...for more than ten minutes...she didn't understand reason for not receiving reply...

After few minutes she received a msgs...


Gem: From when u started informing me...??

His reply made her realise he was angry...

That's all...how was it...hope it was not bakwaas...I know it's not zayalicious... leave feed back...I will be waiting...


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Res.
Right now dancing..

Unress...
finally u updated...*sigh*

To the chapter...
it's amazing,awsome,nice and lovely madhu.
zain was in so much pain...
and surayya fainted after knowing about her grand childrend...loL...why always surayya is your victim...poor pasta queen...
that part where aliya met her family was so emotional...
rehan and barkat...hehehe.

Continue soon dear..
don'T make me wait like this chapter...
your chudail sis...
hania.

Edited by butterfly20 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: butterfly20


U r updating...😭*khushi k aansu*

Chel dramebaaz...!!
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Koyi reply do...was it that bad..??
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Unressed...
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haailaaa new title...
thank u g thank u
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