FF Beintehaa Ishq [Zaya story with a twist]Thread 1 completed - Page 97

Originally posted by: StarsOnEarth

Chapter 55:

Those three conditions...no words to tell how awesome they were.

I dont know why, but after reading those last lines, the tears formed in my eyes finally dripped down.

It is really crucial to make your readers cry.

Desperate for the birthday bash..

Padhke aati hun..😛

Originally posted by: StarsOnEarth

Chapter 56:

Ab wapis rula rae ho aap.

Just cried in the previous chapter,made up my mind to read the next chapter, and here you made me cry again!!

The letter was undoubtedly a heart wrenching work, but that moment, when Zain sees her in the mirror...that was too emotional..I couldnt control my tears...and that one too,not addressing her as his MOM, too emotional.

I dont know how do you manage to give a side message through your work... Although its a love story, there are many more things I read in your work...Fabulous!!

continue soon

P.S. you need to make a thread 2 soon!!

All the best

Originally posted by: Tom-and-Jerry

speechless!! 👏👏👏u weave magic with words sim😳 ..brilliant update...Full of pain, emotion, love, crave...zain's helplessness and his love , his letter to suri ..surya's mixed emotions of love and pain, anger everything was so beautifully written...mein itni senti nhi hu ..but it made me cry.😭.awesome work...thanx for pm...plzz continue soon...waiting,...

Originally posted by: zayalove

Ok i m sorry i am late
But it was really a shitty week urghh
But reading ur story made my day or rathet say night better

Ok coming to chptr 54

Its really amazing ..good to read rhea realizes her mistake
N zainu loves her so much that he was ready to walk more than 20 km coz he made her cry..

The sponge bath n song reminded me of beintehaa ...of zaya
Now let me run n read part 55 ...

P.s if my running comments brings smile on ur face ...than i will do it for my whole life ...
I m really proud to have u in my life as a friend ..
Love ya sim ..

Originally posted by: zayalove

Sim chapter 56 made me cry ...
Omg its so painful to read zains pov ..
Loved the chpter
Plzz continue soon ...

Cant wait
Thanks for da pm
Lots of love .
Alina

Originally posted by: katmaan

Sim sim sim ...

I love u really I do

U know both the parts were so cute I loved it to the core

And hello the kiss aah u write better passion too Gosh it was so cute and lovely kiss u know they have come far ...the lap thing was so emotional ...and wow surriya kissed rhea the cake everything was just perfect u today I cried but of happiness my zainu is lucky to have suirriya aaliya rhea and us Also

Now comes to the dedication ohh so sweet of you I love u ... U know I have screen shot the words u write for me :*

And yes u and Ann ..I really don't think we are far I really think we sitting in a cafe talking ...

Love u always

Update soon

Originally posted by: zaya.harshika

God! Sim...last two chaps r mind blowing yaar!

Chap 56..It made me cry..too emotional!

And the letter..I could visualise the scene..it was like I was watching it.. as if it was all happening in front of my eye! Tears were dropping continuously...pls ab aur emotional update mat dena!

Your writing style is speechless! Amazing..perfect!

Zain and Suraiyya..both r helpless!

Originally posted by: Crazy4HarshIka

Sometimes I gulp,choke,smile n I don't know what other things r piled up while reading this story.I feel so connected.everyday I wait that May b now Sim would have updated the next part...Your Weekend Special always make me so desperate to know further...Thank you Sim for creating such a lovely story.now Back To Story:

The Soothing Kiss,it always relieving to have your dear ones at the time f loneliness...greatly described their urges emotions n demands.while on the other hand Suraiyaa is being so harsh with her own beloved son.A mother cannot b like that n even it does not suit Suraiya who is the lady with class sense f knowledge,n tranquility in nature.but u described a new Suraiya who is different but still strong.

Great Going...

Continue Waiting

Jaya.😉😊

Originally posted by: KitkitMkb

WOW ! My Words won't do justice to describe the beauty of this you always bring a new thing in your chapters a new motion , which make of us that lonely Zain ! Don't tell me you can't write romance , because i can found romance even on the lap scene ! Love sooths his pain and that is the most beautiful thing in world ! You are a rocking writer , who make us cry but Still love you !

Originally posted by: Deepika_Zaya

awesome updates..beautifully penned down..aww..that kiss loved it..bt feeling bad for zain..he couldnt attend his mom's 50th b,day..pls update soon..