FF Beintehaa Ishq [Zaya story with a twist]Thread 1 completed - Page 92

Crazy4HarshIka

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Posted: 9 years ago

#911

Simmm Kitna Rulate Ho Aap.It was so emotional cried in between.u poured Zain's heart in the letter.brilliant.

"Malika-E-Emotions"your new name.👏

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StarsOnEarth

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Posted: 9 years ago

#912

First...Congratulations for completing 50 amazing chapters

Second...Extremely Sorry for being so late.:-(

Third...regarding the golden chapter:

Chapter 50:

It was sort of humorous,,, totally loved it!!

Sadaf's character was really very funny.

Aaliya couldn't control herself...Baat kar hi li...

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StarsOnEarth

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Chapter 51

You made my dreams come true!!

I wanted to ZaYa in this girlfriend -boyfriend relation ( After Halala track)

Such a cute chapter yet you didn't fail to add Zain's pain!

Loved this chapter

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StarsOnEarth

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Chapter 52

Me?? Thank you so much :-0

Aaliya ko yaad aa raha hai??

It's confusing!!

No,no. Not your story, but Zain's emotions.

He loves His Aaliya, he is desperate to get his Aaliya back,He got Aaliya back, but he didn't get His Aaliya back!!

Your beloved is in front of you, yet you can't love her in the way you want.

And to get back HIS Aaliya , he was harsh with Aaliya( Rhea)

Exicted for the next chapter, going to read it :-p

😆

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StarsOnEarth

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Chapter 53

20 KILOMETERS??

Itna exercise karaya Zain se?? Woh bhi raat ko??

I loved this Chapter, Kitkit was there, not in ZaYa style, but in Zain Rhea style..

Awesome!!

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StarsOnEarth

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Chapter 54:

It was the cutest chapter.

That list was so sweet!

Yeah, the line,''whatever he did was wrong ...he risked her health again and in his desperation to get Aaliya back he was hurting Rhea ... ''

Mr.Abdullah realized his mistake,on top of that accepted it!!

I must say, Aaliya's love has changed Zain alot.

Loved it

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StarsOnEarth

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Chapter 55:

Those three conditions...no words to tell how awesome they were.

I dont know why, but after reading those last lines, the tears formed in my eyes finally dripped down.

It is really crucial to make your readers cry.

Desperate for the birthday bash..

Padhke aati hun..😛

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StarsOnEarth

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Chapter 56:

Ab wapis rula rae ho aap.

Just cried in the previous chapter,made up my mind to read the next chapter, and here you made me cry again!!

The letter was undoubtedly a heart wrenching work, but that moment, when Zain sees her in the mirror...that was too emotional..I couldnt control my tears...and that one too,not addressing her as his MOM, too emotional.

I dont know how do you manage to give a side message through your work... Although its a love story, there are many more things I read in your work...Fabulous!!

continue soon

P.S. you need to make a thread 2 soon!!

All the best

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Tom-and-Jerry

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Posted: 9 years ago

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speechless!! 👏👏👏u weave magic with words sim😳 ..brilliant update...Full of pain, emotion, love, crave...zain's helplessness and his love , his letter to suri ..surya's mixed emotions of love and pain, anger everything was so beautifully written...mein itni senti nhi hu ..but it made me cry.😭.awesome work...thanx for pm...plzz continue soon...waiting,...

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zayalove

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Posted: 9 years ago

#920

Ok i m sorry i am late
But it was really a shitty week urghh
But reading ur story made my day or rathet say night better

Ok coming to chptr 54

Its really amazing ..good to read rhea realizes her mistake
N zainu loves her so much that he was ready to walk more than 20 km coz he made her cry..

The sponge bath n song reminded me of beintehaa ...of zaya
Now let me run n read part 55 ...

P.s if my running comments brings smile on ur face ...than i will do it for my whole life ...
I m really proud to have u in my life as a friend ..
Love ya sim ..

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