FF Beintehaa Ishq [Zaya story with a twist]Thread 1 completed - Page 44

Originally posted by: Priya_arora

i would jst say ...it was A-M-A-Z-I-N-G ...I hv no words to describe hw perfectly u write...hats off to u👏 ...wow in next update romance cmng up...cant wait 4 it...do cont soon

Once again a special update ...for all those who have been upset about Harshus twitter kand .. Love and Trust ...walks hand in hand ...so give that cute little fella some time, he is just a bit stressed out with all the negativitity gong around..we all know how much he loves us, so just wait for positive to bounce back ...

Chalo Pravachan band and story shuru

Marking my Jubliee chapter...

Every comment will be forever embedded in my heart

Love you all...enjoy 😳

Chapter 25

Haseen Pal...

Rhea kept on looking at Zain, he looked as though he had won a mini lottery ...so so happy. The broad grin was plastered all across his face.

Kya hua kitkit yeh flash bulb ki tarah kyu chamak rahe ho...

Baat hi kuch khaas hai ...he smiled...

Accha , she looked puzzled.

10 mins in the shoe shop and god knows what he had spoken with Aayat, but both looked as though they had discovered a buried treasure ...

Bolo na ...

Nahi, he was teasing her...

She twisted her mouth, Akdu kahi ke...

He was giggling ...ha hu akdu ...koi problem hai ...

Ek baat batao...tumhare sachi koi girlfriend nahi hai na...

Kyu shaq hai tumhe...

Haa ...he looked up starring back in those khol lined eyelashes that were flickering with some sort of weird emotions ...

Kahi pyaar vyaar toh nahi ho raha hai mujhse...

She didn't answer and looked out, maybe she needs to finally blurt out ...

But how...his presence made her nervous, her palms sweaty and heart beats faster..infact insane ...

Accha suno kal ek party hai sham koh ...chalogi ...ek choti si get together hai...

Haa, she continued looking out ...he smiled ...

Rhea didn't go to office on Monday...the whole day she was planning what to wear...

Finally she decided to wear a saree a lavish purple one ...she was ready way before Zain had arrived from office...

He freshened up got into a casual shirt a light green one ...and walked out in 5 minutes flat...waiting for her, which would take forever...

To his surprise she walked out 2 minutes before 6:00...

he looked at her and he couldn't feel his hands or legs , they were frozen in time ...

Ravishing ...the saree clinged to her fragile body delicately , the pleats streaked the silky material in folds enriching her gait ...he was so shy, he couldn't muster up the courage to hold back ...his emotions ...his love ...

He just looked down, scared that she may read his thoughts ...

She was excited to hear his complements ...but it seemed as though he had stitched his mouth...

He drove in absolute silence ...

Kya hua...mai acchi nahi dikh rahi hu kya...she was looking at her saree now, maybe it was a bad idea to get so decked up so much for a small party, she was also trying to hide her nervousness

Nah toh ...Da ...Acchi lag rahi ho...

Nahi lag rahi hu na, isliye itna soch samaj ke javab de rahe ho...he laughed

Tum ladkiya har baat koh itna overanalyze kyu karti ho...

Kyunki hum sach dekh sakti hai ...

Theek hai joh samajhna hai samjho...

Accha suno , mujhe do min ka kaam hai ...abhi aaya , he stopped at the petrol pump and went inside the store...she was looking out...

the light of the pump was trickling inside the car in the darkness...her careless eyes wandered towards his seat, a small box was gift wrapped ...

She hurriedly picked it up before he would come back and opened it , there was a small pendant a delicate flower on a small silver chain ...she was so happy...she held it firmly still admiring his first gift , a perfect one for the saree...

The moment he walked in, she couldn't control her excitement and just hugged him tight...

He held his hand back, afraid to touch her ...

Kya hua ...

Mujhe tumhara gift bahut pasand aaya ...

He looked at her equally surprised ...Kaunsa gift Da...

Ye she held the chain in front of him dangling from her fingers...its beautiful...thank you so much ...

He started laughing hard ...leaving her surprised

Kya hua

...kaha mila

...yaha tumhare seat par ...

Da woh mere friend ne mangvaya tha apni wife ke liye ...uska surprise tha, mere jeb se gir gaya hoga shayad ...

She looked hurt..I am so sorry kitkit ...Mai abhi gift wrap kardeti hu ...she was embarrassed ...

She was fidgeting with the gift paper when he held her hand ...

Relax...koi baat nahi ...he opened the dashboard ...yeh lo..

she looked down it was a cello tape to stick the gift wrapper, she took it and slowly started to re-wrap it cursing herself as to why she was so over anxious to open it at the first place .

Chewing gum khaogi he was asking

Nahi... she said and handed him the gift back

...aree yeh toh lagana bhool gayi ...he gave a card ...

She took it and was about to fix it when she read the words

To da ...from kitkit...

She looked at him with anger, toh yeh mere liye hi tha ...

Haa, he was laughing now

...she gave him the gift back in his palm ...rakho apne paas nahi chaiye mujhe ...

He looked up hurt... bura laga, aree mai toh mazaak kar raha tha...

She looked out ...

Aree Da..kitna bhadak ti ho tum ...

Da sorry na...

Her silence was dominating the one sided conversation now...

Accha ab kaise manau ..tum bolo toh car ke bahar jaakar kaan pakad ke khada ho jaata hu...

She continued looking out ...

Theek hai...jaa raha hun mai ...Bahar, he was loud so that she would stop him

She remained unfazed...

He got down and slowly closed the door and stood in front of the car, to do what he had promised ...she was still starring out ..

Da ...he called ...she looked in front ...very well knowing what he was upto,

even before a second passed she was out of the car and came close to him with her hands crossed in front ...

Da ...sorry na ...

Naahi nahi karo na ...joh karne aaye the ...aur haa uthak baithak bhi karna ...he looked around with wide eyes...

Da sab dekh rahe hai ...

Haa toh dekhne do , tumhe toh tamasha karne mai bada mazaa aata hai...

Chalo shuru karo ...aur haa kam se kam 25 toh kar hi lo...

He pleaded...Da kya hai yaar, kaha na mazaak kar raha tha...ab kya jaan logi kya ... few people were peeping from the store and the vehicles standing around were all inquisitive to know what was going on ...were the couple fighting...

Please ... Da ..maan jao na ...

Nahi...Aaj nahi...chalo jaldi ...is tamashe ke baad humein party bhi toh jaani hai ...

He looked frustrated ...theek hai ...feeling embarrassed he started taking his hands towards his ears...his love was adamant in making him feel and look ridiculous in a crowded place...

Before his hands reached his ears..she held both his hands ...

He looked up with a slight sense of relief...

Finally leaving one hand, she twisted his ears

...Ouch ... Da dukh raha hai ...

Aise pakad te hai kaan, kitkit ...agli baar isse kaske pakdungi...

...he smiled ...

Nautanki ...

chalo ab ...

Sitting back in the car, he looked at her

...ab pehnao isse...he placed it on her neck, gently hooking it ...

Pasand aaya

...bahut

...chale ...she hugged him again ...this time he too hugged her back

She didn't realize, what her hug had done to Zain ...a broken tattered soul was finally breathing ...healing ...wanting to live again

...A twinkling song inside the petrol pump summed it all up...

Ab Mujhe Raat Din Tumhara Hi Khayal Hain
Ab Mujhe Raat Din Tumhara Hi Khayal Hain
Kya Kahu Pyaar Mein Deewano Jaisa Haal Hain
Deewano Jaisa Haal Hain Tumhara Hi Khayal Hain

Tum Ko Dekhe Beena Chain Milta Nahi
Dil Pe Ab To Koi Zor Chalta Nahi
Jaadu Hain Kaisa Dil Ki Lagi Mein
Dub Gaya Hu Is Bekhudi Mein

Har Pal Dhunde Nazar Tum Ko Hi Jaaneman
Had Se Badhne Laga Mera Deewanapan
Dil Mein Basa Lu Apna Bana Lu
Ya Phir Nazar Mein Tumko Chupa Lu

The song went on for the rest of the drive in Zains mind...

Rhea looked at Zain with eyes that were filled with so much of love that it overpowered everything else ...including time...

Chahat ka agghaz hua hai kahi ...

Kisiki dil se kisike dhadkan sil rahi hai wahi ...

Ab alfaaz dil se behne koh hai...

Jhuki nigaah tere sajade mai ...kuch kehne koh hai ...

Kaise batau tujhe , ki tu ibadat hai meri ...

Khuda se pehli mangi hui janaat hai meri...

SIM

Pre-cap : what happens in the party ?????hmmm...😉

Originally posted by: katmaan

Ohhh the pendant gift ...happiness I loved the chapter ...sim u rocked it and I hate I for stopping here party waala update kardena soon ...eager to know what will happen in party

Originally posted by: katmaan

Simji ..aapke charan kaha hai I want to blessings

Lol joking

I loved it I mean u write amazingly

I love u man

Y didn't u write first

But now that u have started never leave ...

I will be the reader of ur works still awake...

Pls continue soon

Muaah muaah muaah

Originally posted by: ZayaILoveU

Wow Sim!!!

Both the chapters were really really Amazing!!!!

You portray the feelings sooo well...

Superb...

This ff has becum undoubtedly one of my favourite stories till now...

Fantastic!!!

I m really short of words to describe this!!!

Amazing...

Well the precap excites me a lot!!!

So pls pls pls pls pls pls continue soon...

Originally posted by: StarsOnEarth

Wow!!! Weekday double dhamaka:-P

A very huge thanks to you.

Regarding the two awesome chapters

Time is really healing zain's wounds!!!

As in Ayat condoned , Rhea is madly in love , Rehmaan no longer a villain, Suraiyya's urge to love him ( I wonder what will happen if she comes to know the truth,she will be shattered)...Umm...it was just fantastic!!!!

Thanks again for updating 2 chapter!!

But those lines in both the chapters were really too emotional!!
Especially in 24th chapter.For a second I could actually feel something( I don't know what was that SOMETHING)but that something made me cry. Not joking orr telling something fake but a lone tear escaped my eye.

Eagerly waiting for the next part!!

THANK YOU once again