FF Beintehaa Ishq [Zaya story with a twist]Thread 1 completed - Page 41

Originally posted by: zayacrazy

B-R-A-V-O!

SIM YOU'VE SHAKEN ME! ALL THREE CHAPTEES BLEW MY HEAD OFF! THE WAY YOU DESCRIBED EACH FLASHBACK INCLUDING ZAIN BEING PUNISHED...IT COUD BE FELT AND IT COULD BE EXPRESSED IN SMILES AD TEARS! THE ABILITY TO GET TE READER INTO THE MOOD AND MOULD THE STORY IN SUCH A WAY IS JUST UNDESCRIABLE AND IS WORTH A LOT MORE THAN PRAISES DONE BY WRDS! THE PLOT IS AMAZING AND THE WAY YOU LET THE READER OUT TO EXPLORE EACH FEELING YOU WANT THEM TO IS MINDBLOWING! AND THE WAY YOU STOP WHERE YOU WANT THE READER TO THINK AND ABSORB EACH EMOTION...MAKES YOUR WORK PRICELESS AND MORE THAN VALUABLE, I HOOE UR PLANNING ON TURNING THIS TO A NOVEL AND GETTING IT PUBLISHED! COZ I WOULDNT MIND HOGGING ON THE FIRST EDITION!

ALSO WRITING 3 CHAPTERS AT ONCE..,.YOU'VE TAKEN THE RIGHTS OF ASKING YOU TO UPDATE SOON FROM ME!

SO ALL I CAN SAY IS I'LL BE WAITING FOR A UPDATE!

Originally posted by: Aarohi2009

I m too late
Was out of coverage

Thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u
Sooo veryyy much for back to back three amazing updates

Every one has said it all.I can't praise u anymore.
I bow down to u
Charan kahan hain aapke

Till now 'Koi fariyaad 'was my fav.ff in this forum and now i have given this place to ur fan fiction.

All the chapter were fab.


Luv u 🤗

Originally posted by: StarsOnEarth

Wohoo!! Triple dhamaka mil gaya!!
Chapter 20
U cant write romantic stuff, r u kidding me??
It was really very cute romance-filled chapter
Especially those last chessy lines:-)
Chapter 21
Rehmaan said thankyou???
It was like,"Nirash jab tu ho agar,andhera bhi ho vikat,umeed ki kiran lekar,Surya phirse aayega"(Niraj Arora).
I really thought he would denounce the already tired soul, but it was just a miracle
Chapter 22:
All I cam say is
So near yet so far...overwhelmed with emotions :-)
Continue soon!!!

Originally posted by: katmaan

Comments for chapter 20

Girl

Mumbai

Gateway for India

Corn

U miss India na

The giant wheel I also want someone to sit with me in it I also want to hold his hands

The marine Drive this place is the best place u can spend time with love ones

The scooter ride woh so so so nice

Going to read next one bye

Muaah

Originally posted by: KitkitMkb

Sim I don't have words in the 20th chapter my Zain was smiling he was happy I could feel it and the last chapters I felt him going back in his world of darkness can someone love so much , you have described his love in such a way that I wonder if everyone loved like him the world would be something else , Take a bow because this story is something big and thank you for this triple dhamaka !
Lots of love take care !