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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Zainedil


U r one hell of a blackmailer too
Ok will update in 15 mins stay tuned
Sim



Oh love you for this wo to main hoon one of my secret talent !
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Posted: 9 years ago

Special update for a very dear fan and an avid spammer KitkitMKB this ones specially for you 😉

Enjoy


Chapter 17

Adhoore Geet

They had started at 4:00 am ...way early for any negativity to touch Zain and Rhea ...

It's a sheer magic when the dark night sky greets a husky dawn ...gently minding her embrace ...extending her warmth ...the whole scenario changes within seconds ...just like life ...

The first rays of sunlight were hitting on Rheas face ...

she was wearing a marron salwar with a light zari work ...her dupatta had a netted appearance ...something that zain wanted so much to be entangled in ..her face was more serene then he had anytime seen ...a light shade of pink adorned her lips and a black dazzling earrings almost touched her neck ...her smell ...she was wearing a different perfume today ...Zain had known Rheas jasmine fragrance ...but today was different ...she looked ravishing ...and it was difficult for him to drive ...least he gets caught for driving intoxicated due to the beauty next to him ...

He played on some music ...

Aye Bekhabar, Aye Bekhabar ..Mera Dil Tere Pyaar Mein Aahe Bhare

Aye Bekhabar, Aye Bekhabar...Tujhe Yaad Kare Par Yaad Kare

Aye Bekhabar, Aye Bekhabar...Mera Dil Tere Pyaar Mein Aahe Bhare...Tujhe Yaad Kare Par Yaad Kare

Kabhi Tu Bhi Pyaar Se Dekh Zara Mere Dil Ko Ek Nazar

Aye Bekhabar, Aye Bekhabar...

The song played a smile on Zains lip was bewitching Rhea ...she was happy ...to lose the bet ...to follow her heart and go with Zain today ...a whole day ...with him ...

Kya baat hai ...bahut khush lag rahe ho kitkit ...

Kyu tumhe koi problem hai ...Da ...he smiled ...shy...his boyish grin

Oh kahi apni girlfriend ke saath date jaa rahe ho yeh toh nahi soch rahe ho naa...she sounded suspicious ...

Nahi ...Biwi ke saath, the words were completed within his heart ...silent sentences filling him with love..

Yeh gaana band karo...switching off the radio...

Kyu...he again played it...

Kyunki mai isse se accaha gaati hu ...

Accha, saying that he switched off the radio...

To gao ...

kyu ...

kyunki mai keh raha hu ...

Tum koi akka ho aur mai koi kaneez joh tumhari farmaish poora karu ...

Exactly ...aaj ke din tum meri Malika e- Kaneez...he almost choked on the word ...aur tum wahi karogi joh mai kahunga ...

Ab gao ...sharth yaad haina ...24 ghante...har baat ....she smirked ...

Closed her eyes and started singing...

Haath Mera Thaam Lo, Saath Jab Tak Ho...

Baat Kuch Hoti Rahe, Baat Jab Tak Ho...

Saamne Baithe Raho Tum, Raat Jab Tak Ho...

Are Re Are Yeh Kya Hua, Maine Na Yeh Jaana...

Aree wah bahut romantic hai ...her words had unknowingly selected a song so close to her thoughts ...

The drive on Mumbai-Pune expressway is very scenic, loads of greenery greeted them as they left the dazzling city of Mumbai and the peace and tranquility of Pune was reaching out. A total time of two and half hours ...but for Zain it felt they were only few seconds ...trees zoomed past and so did some scattered mountains and lakes...Blazing in romance ...two heart beats soaking in love ...

He stopped at a tea stall, a tapri for cutting chai ...Mumbai style ...

Bhau(brother) don(two) cutting special ...lavkar(fast), he generously smiled towards the owner

she was amazed ...Tum yaha par chai peoge

...haa ...any problems

Kissi dayan ne bade pyaar se samjhaya tha ..ki zindagi ki choti choti khusiyaa ...aise chote chote jagah mai ...hi milti hai

...he was remembering the ganne ke juice wali enforced picnic ...the one that he had cribbed so hard and ultimately had fallen for her simplicity ...the treacherous cycle ride ...she was heavy and the peddle...his exhaustion ...wish he could be so light hearted again ...wish he had never fallen in love ...wish ...

She looked at the his emerald eyes ...a brown heaven dipped in chocolate ...they always looked lost to her ...as though some pain was haunting

...Rhea closed her eyes for a few seconds ..and when she opened she saw someone two people stranded on a bonnet shooing away something ...shouting ...shoo shooo ...holding each other's arms...a snake ...and it rattled off...and they were happy ...

Rhea was sweating profusely ...

Zain held her arm ...seeing her feeling uneasy ...

Rhea...da theek ho ...she swapped out from her dream ...a day dream ...an image so hypnotic that had soaked her within its vortex...

Theek hu ...she assured him ...

Kya hua ...kuch yaad aaya kya, he asked concern ...

kuch bolo na...accha chalo theek hai kuch gaa hi lo...

Her melodious voice...a little shaky... Trying to tweeze out the flashes from the past ...

Lag Ja Gale Ki Phir Ye Hasin Raat Ho Na Ho

Shaayad Phir Is Janam Men Mulaaqaat Ho Na Ho

Lag Jaa Gale Se ...Ham Ko Mili Hain Aaj, Ye Ghadiyaan Nasib Se

Ji Bhar Ke Dekh Lijiye Ham Ko Qarib Se

Phir Aap Ke Nasib Men Ye Baat Ho Na Ho

Phir Is Janam Men Mulaaqaat Ho Na Ho

Lag Ja Gale Ki Phir Ye Hasin Raat Ho Na Ho

Her words left Zain ...in an alienated world ...a fear ...jittered down his soul...

Kuch Yadein bhooli bisri. si... mere dil koh sehlati hai...

Hoton pe ek halki si muskaan... teri har yaad chod jaati hai...


Sim


Pre-cap: Will this trip get Zain and Rhea close ...watch out for ur next dose

No demands for likes or comments ...Forecful love is not good for health

Edited by Zainedil - 9 years ago
KitkitMkb thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
You dedicated this to me !! Oh thank you ! I love you for this chapter , my zain smiled after ages , sim really I loved it , I imagine the scene , I think I am quite good at spamming ;) take care and continue soon !
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sim darling chapter 16
Was way too much emotional

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Poor zain first suri than ayat ...
Hope in 2 months aliya will b back ..
Off to read chapter 17
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Posted: 9 years ago
Muah muah muah muah muah ...
Love u for this chapter ...

U r brilliant writer sim darling...

Update soon
Or else i will start spamming u on twitter ..
Thanks for pm ..

Lots of love ..

Alina
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Posted: 9 years ago
This is not fair
Itna chotu sa update pata hi nahi chala kab khatm ho gaya
Vaise i loved the chapter.Happy to see zain smiling after long time
Next update aaj hi chahiye
Plsss
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Posted: 9 years ago
loved both d chap..
Pls cont soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Simg
U don't need to demand because we love u a lot
And I am so happy that I got an update today yea ...btw I loved it and now the singing session was so good I want some more cute moments in the trip
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow...AMAZING...
Love the song, the words describing Aliya or zain...you are an AWESOME writer...
This was a bit small...but really sweet...
Waiting for the next...
Update ASAP...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow...
I read all the 4 chapters in one go...
Amazing chapters re...
You just nailed it!!!!
I m really ur fan Sim...
Amazing...
Pls continue soon...
And thanks for the pm...
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