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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Priya_arora

wow ! It was awesome chapter
really funny
zain loves her so much
he can do anything 4 her
beautifully written
i jst loved it
plz cont soon

yes he does
thank you so much
love
Sim
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Tom-and-Jerry

sorry sorry sorry for commenting late dear thoda busy thi..exams ka tension..thanx for writing it 😊...very light hearted... it was so cute, amazing and hilarious😳...aww poor zain...kya kya nhi karvati hai rhea😆...amazingly written👏..loved both d update❤️. i felt bad for him ..but koi nhi chalta hai.🤔... rhea ne bhi kafi kuch saha hai...cause jus now i read chap 4 and 5 again😆... excellent work 👍🏼 thanx for pm..😃 continue soon likhu ya nhi..😭.aap naraz lag rhi ho maaro gi toh nhi.😛..plz continue..waiting..sorry again..😊

Ishita
thanks for ur lovely wrds ...nahi yaar naraaz nahi no one was commenting so a bit irritated ...
but no issues still have lovely readers like you right no need of sorry ...love you all
Sim
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: zayalove

Chapter 57 both parts are amazing sim
Romantic passionate n emotional at the same time
Off to read next part

Alina and her running updates 😆
love you
Sim
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: zayalove

Chptr 59
Hilarious update sim ..
Haye re mera zainu ...rhea kitna torture karti hai usse ..
Plzz update soon ...

Cant wait now ..
Lots of love
From late lateef
Alina

late lateef Alina
thank you ...yes rhea loves zain toh thoda torture toh banta hai na ...
love
Sim
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Posted: 9 years ago

Good morning readers ...a lazy fun sunday read ...thanks for all your lovely words overwhelmed with love

Dedication : Priya Arora ...this ones for you dear, for being a regular reader and a giving your valuable time and comments ...keep reading

love

Sim

Chapter 61

Police wale Uncle ...

Zain walked inside a bit nervous ..

the last time he had come there he was all alone with his mom ...and the beatings and humiliation had forever haunted him ..it had broken his relationship and messed up his life ...he remembered how Aaliya had begged him that she was innocent but he had never heard her ... a tinge of uneasiness was settling in him ...

Memories ...they trigger a good and sad part in your heart ...the remorse of that one night was still raw in his heart ...

The havaldar ...finally left his hand in front of the sub-inspector ...who was busy reading the charge-sheet file

Saheb ...he doghe romance karat hote (these both were romancing)...park band tha ..andhar the ..Rhea eyed the havaldar an aggravated look that could easily kill him

aur haa bike bhi no parking mai park thi.. he added to their crime list

The sub-inspector looked up ..examining Zain ...

Zain stood tall in his shorts and kiddish T-shirt and to add to his look the mickey cap was the crowning glory

He giggled still eyeing him from top to bottom ... aise cartoon ke tarah kapde pehn ke girlfriend ke saath kyu ghoom rahe ho ...baccho ki harkatein toh nahi lagti ...his taunt septic in nature ...

Hello ...aapko kya problem agar yeh aise kapde pehne toh ...Rhea rattled like a fighter hen ...

Zain elbowed Rhea to cool down ...

Madam ...avaaj neeche ...yeh chowki hai ...

Kyu be khullam khulla pyaar ... sharam nahi aati ...sharif ghar ke lagte ho ...

Haa pyaar kiya toh ...aur suniye tameez se baat kijiye inse ...her enraged voice was peeking at him ...the eyes ready to eat him for dinner had Zain not held her hand

Aap kaun hai inki

Biwi hu ...her bold statement sent shivers in Zains spine ...rolling his eyes

Accha toh itne raat koh park mai kya kar rahe the ...

Hawa khane gaye ...

Band park mai ...

Haa ...humein pata hi nahi chala ki park kab band ho gaya ...she lied ...with no hitches or inhibitions

Zain looked amazed at her ...she was so fluent in her story telling that he too believed her now ...Aaliya would have agreed that they were wrong and probably paid the fine till now ...but this was Rhea ...her ability to build a story and even convince the authority with her lie was commendable

Aap ke tarah bahut love birds aate hai ..aise hi kahani lekar ...Madam ...the mock and anger had risen in his tone

Toh mai kya karu ...chalo jaane dijiye humein ...she ordered him

Pehle proof do ki yeh aapka husband hai ...She was angry now ...

Hum kya marriage certificate lekar ghoome ...aapke liye ...

He shook his head ...indicating the havaldar to do the needful...

Her eyes sparkled with a plan ...Abhi batati hu...

Aapka phone dijiye ...

Kyu ...

Maine kaha na ...she snatched his phone ...he too was afraid of her now

Aapki biwi ka naam ...

Sneha ...par kyu ...

Ek minute...she tried searching for Sneha ...but there was no name ...

Pyaar se kuch bulate hoge na unhe ..

The inspector became shy ...haa ...godu ...bulata hu ...his blush ...perfectly covering his dark skin

Bahut cute hai...ab inka phone dekhaiye ...aur dhoondiye Rhea ...

He searched ...nahi hai na ...kyunki biwi ke naam codes mai hote hai ...

Ab prove ho gaya ...chalo jaane dijiye...she took Zains hand and started walking away

Aree ajeeb hai aap..aise khulle aam ishq farma rahe ho ...

Aur koi utpatang explaination dekar bhaag rahi ho ...

Havaldar ...daal isko andar...the moment he came near Zain ...

Rhea came in front of him to protect ...an amour at 5 feet 3 inches tall that too with high heels

Haaat lagake dekho ...tumhari aise halat karungi ki yaad rakhoge...

The havaldar took a step back ...afraid she might pounce on him...

Zain was giggling to see her protective instinct ...how much their relationship had changed ...his calling her fiance in Bhopal had made him marry her and today she claimed to be his wife to protect him...

Aap koh bhi andar daal dunga ...the sub-inspector finally braved the words

Zain intervened ...Da ..rehne do ...Inspector ...agar aapko fine lena hai toh le lijiye ...

Arree fine kyu humne kuch kiya hi nahi ...

Da..Zain was amazed at her ...jane do na ..he pulled her back ...

Nahi ...hum fine nahi denge ...pehle sabit kijiye ...proof layi ...hai koi proof aapke paas

The inspector smiled ..toh agar mai proof du toh mai vahi karunga ...joh mai chahta hu...manzoor hai na

Haa kijiye ..she boasted confidently ...she loved bets ...and challenges ...

He walked towards Zain and held his face...right next to his lips ...yeh lipstick ke nishaan ...aapke hai na ...pappi ke...he swayed his head away with an unwarranted force ...

Rhea looked embarrassed now ...his words had vexed her

Ab ...yeh aapka husband raat bhar lock up mai rahega ...he suggested the havaldar to hold him

Nahi please I am sorry she again came in front of him ...

Madam ...hataye ...varna aapko bhi daal dunga ...andar

Theek hai dalye ...satth mai daalna ..she still was standing in front of him

He swayed his head ...ajeeb aurat ho ...and looked at Zain with sympathy ...

Sorry ...please unhe chod dijiye ...meri galti hai ...mujhe band kijiye ...koi problem nahi ...

Zain looked up ..amazed ...she could go to any extent ...love that protected the loved one

He finally spoke...

Inspector ...theek hai chaliaye ..par please meri wife koh ghar bhejne ke liya taxi mangva sakte hai ..

Rhea looked angrily at him ...

Zain ...

Da ...

Mai nahi jaungi ...

Yaha mai sambhal loonga ...tum ghar jaoo...

Zain maine kiya yeh sab ...

Tum aur mai ek hi toh hai ...he wrapped his palms on hers

The inspector called a cab ...and the havldar made Zain sit on a bench ...taking Rhea away towards the door...He smiled at her and winked ...assuring he is fine...

She had started crying now ...

She went to the door and turned back...he still was sitting on the bench ...

legs crossed ..and wearing the mickey hat ...gazing down concerned for her safety ...hoping that Rehman wont be too upset with him ..Rhea saw the lonely person whose innocence wrapped her heart ...

she rushed back ...to his arms ...crying ...

Da ...ghar jaao please...

nahi ...jaha tum waha mai ...

The inspector was silently smiling ...

The havaldar came to take Zain in the lockup...

as Zain stood so did Rhea ...

Da..please Zain pleaded ...

She moved her head in a no ...tears still trickling from her eyes ...

The sub-inspector finally relented ..jaoo...aur haa ainda aise pagal biwi se shaddi mat karna ...ghar par romance karo park mai nahi ...

Rhea went and hugged the inspector tight ...he was so embarrassed ...while Zain stood admiring the women ...he loved from his soul

Ajeeb si hai Zinadagi ...

Tere saath ...tere paas ...hu

Phir bhi tujhi ka intezaar kar rah ahu...

Saanse lekar bhi har pal ...bevajah mar raha hu ...

tujhse hardum pyaar kar raha hu ...

SIM

Pre-cap: The fun of reaching home ...late-night😳


Edited by Zainedil - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wonderful update
Enjoyed reading it
Reah as fighter was cute as well as emotional
Do continue soon
Edited by Meghapaim - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Beautiful cute emotional yet made me smile and wah wah this part was awesome awesome continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Beautiful and emotional too...
Really lov it...
Waiting fr next chapter
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Posted: 9 years ago
It was beautiful cute and emotional I loved their conversation with the inspector waiting for the precap continue soon dear !
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Posted: 9 years ago
It was cute emotional n touching.loved Rhea n her antics.
Continue soon.
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