FF Beintehaa Ishq [Zaya story with a twist]Thread 1 completed - Page 86

luv it😳 ..very emotional update😭..brilliantly written.👏...they both are helpless ..please continue soon..eagerly waiting..thanx for d pm 😃

Originally posted by: Zainedil

Thank you ...

Yes Rhea tortures Zain ...

n yes he is proud of me and irritated too cause i dont cook that often 😉

Thanks for your wishes

stay tuned

Loads of Love

Sim

ohh ..koi nhi it shows ur concern towards his fitness 😆...u r great writer as well as great wife 😉..

Sim Ek Pal Romance Ek Pal Emotions!Great Man loved it.Hats off to Zain's Willpower n Patience a modern London return boy Has this much quality to resist.just wow for your writing...

Four comments ...😭

My dear readers...I totally understand few of you are having your exams looks like ..Good luck

A bit tipsy update 😆 when I lose my senses to write I end up writing this kind...

Dedication: This ones to a consistent and persistent Ardent fan Saleha(hope I am writing ur name correctly) Urf Kikit MKB ..A complete sweetheart...without fail she always reads and always comments ...and she is another good writer on the forum. I still vividly remember the holi scene of Zaya that she had described in her story ...do continue it soon ..(one quick question are u on twitter with the same ID?)

This ones specially for you for all your love and support

Enjoy ...the bumps and the long road 😉

Chapter 53

Kaun...

Zain picked her in his arms and made her sit on the bench ...

He was shaking her gently ...

As time passed by and darkness was engulfing him ...he was getting more scared ...maybe it was a bad decision to scare her with this particular incident ...for making her recollect her past maybe he should have recreated some other incident

She opened her eyes slowly ...all of sudden with a jerk pulling herself away ...from his lap...

Tidying her dress ...her hair...wiping off the sweat that had beaded on her forehead ...

Zain spoke slowly ...

Kaun ho tum ...kuch yaad aaya ...she looked back with anger and stood up abruptly ...

He was feeling as though the flared up wood in a fire-place ...the one which is amassed with fire and knows it is destined to turn into ash ...yet it clings with a hope to the log ...getting charred turning red ...the heat dismantling him one fraction at a time ...turning brittle and waiting to be blown away with a soft wind ...

Zains heart was flickered with memories ...

Zain ...an angry voice pinned his ears like sharpened nails ...

He looked up still sitting on the bench ...waiting ...

Bolo...

Tum kya karne ki koshish kar rahe ho...

Tumhe theek karne ki ...he still hoped

Mai thekk hu ...par shayad tumhe abhi lagata hai ...ki ...she was crying profusely

Mujhe lagta hai ...ki tumhae ilaz ki zarrorat hai ...

With red teary eyes she peeked back...

Haina Da ...he knew he had failed miserably again

He got up to hug her ...bas door raho ...

Da...I am sorry ...

Koi maine nahi rakhta ye shabd ...jab dekho sab ke sab mujhe pareshaan karte rehte ho ...

Joh chehera dhundlata hai ...usko baar baar mere samne kyu laate ho...nahi yaad karna hai mujhe ...

ek accident toh tha ...kyu dad aur tum itne pareshaan ho rahe ho ...

kya yaad karungi ...apne guzare bachpan koh ...ya apni ammi koh ...jinka guzrana bhi mujhe yaad nahi ...

kyu baar baar poochte rehte ho kuch yaad aaya

He slowly stepped ahead ...to console her ...

Maine kaha door raho ...she turned her back to him ...

He went and stood in front of her ..Da ..mujhe pata hai tumhe takleef hote hai ..mujhe bhi ...hoti hai ...par tum samaj nahi rahi ho ...yeh hum dono ke liye zaroori hai ...

Nahi hai zaroori ...ya toh tum mujhe jaise mai hu aise hi shaddi karoge ya mai wapas chali jaungi ...

Shayad yehi theek hoga ...varna tum umra bhar aise hi dekhte rahoge ...jaise abhi dekh rahe ho ...

Her angry tone overtook the conversation now ...

Yeh har lamhe ki justajoo mujhe pasand nahi ...She folded her hands and was pleading him ...

Khude ke liye ...bas karo ...mai nahi bardasht kar pati un dhundli yadon koh ...

Maine tumhe kya kaha ..yeh bhi yaad nahi ...

tum samaj nahi rahe ho, mai apna aaj bhi bhulti jaa rahi hu .

Accha theek hai ...he was tensed hearing her last line ...aainda kabhi aise nahi hone doonga ...

Her tears just didn't stop ...

Tum kaha the ..pata hai un gundone mujhe kitna tang kiya ...

Aaya toh tha ...tumhe bachane ...

He reduced the physical distance again ...

Zain Abdullaha ...har baat huggie dene se solve nahi hoti ...

Toh kaho toh papi de du ...he smooched towards her ...trying to ease her tremors

She held him back ...sudharna yeh word shayad tumhare dictionary mai nahi hai ...

Chalo Da ...bahut der ho gayi hai ...Gabbar mujhe waise hi chil kavon koh khila denge ...

Tameez se baat karo...woh mere dad hai ...unhe pata chala na ki tum mujhe aise pareshaan karte ho toh khair nahi ...

She had no clue this was enacted with Rehmans help itself ...the goons were his ward boys ..

Aree baba ...ghussa thook do ...sorry bola na ...

Itna accha thofa diya tha aaj ...aur yeh return gift mila ...she sulked ...

Rhea ...tumhe nahi lagta tum kuch jyada hi ghussa karti ho mujh par ...

Haa toh ...haq hai mera ...girlfriend hu tumhari ...she was still fuming

He laughed ...accha bolo shant kaise karu ...

Mai gaadi lekar jaa rahi hu ...tum apne aap aa jaana ...

Da ...itne raat koh kaise aaunga akele ...aur is halat mai tumhe akele drive nahi karne dunga ...

Kaise aaoge yeh ...tum jaano ...aur mai koi maum ki nahi bani hu ki pigal jaungi ...

Stop it Zain ...she started walking towards the car...

Accha suno ...tumhe toh pata hi nahi hai car kaha parked hai ...theyro mai aata hu ...

They walked back ...she extended her hand demanding the keys ...he reluctantly placed them ...

She sat in the car and started it ...the headlights fell on his face ...with both his hands in the pocket he looked adorable to be hugged ...

He came near the window and knocked ...

Da...please yaar ...itni raat ho gay hai ...

Zain jara purse aur phone do ...

He made a face and gave her ...she tossed them on the seat next to her ...

Good Luck ...

Da ...yaar taxi ke paise toh de do ...

Taxi ...kaun aa raha hai taxi se ...

Aree gaadi meri hai ...ajeeb dadagiri hai

Thi ...aaj ke raat ke liye meri hai ...

Socho tumne mujhe kyu akela choda ...aur mujhe kaise laga hoga ...

aur haa yeh joh baar baar tum mujhe meri khoyi yadash lautane ke tarkeebe nikalte rehte ho na ...yeh uska tohfa hai ...khaas tumhare liye ..her anger had bubbled up like soda water ...frothing words with no thoughts towards him

She switched on her cell GPS ...Ghar yaha se bas 20 km hai ...aur agar 5 min mai chalna shuru karoge toh ...looking at her watch she back calculated ...toh raat ke 2 baje tak zarror pahuch paoge ...

He looked at her angry ...

Chalo Chalo ...time waste mat karo ...

Aur haa kal subhah mere room se le lena ...yeh ...he looked at his purse and cell...

He chuckled ...tumhe kya mazaa aata hai ..mujhe tang karne mai ...

Waise hi jaise tumhe aata hai ...meri yadasht aur who dhundla chehra wapis yaad dilana mai ...

Theek hai ...sata lo ...agar is andhere raat koh mere saath koi zor jabardasti karega toh kaun bacheya mujhe ...phone bhi nahi hai ki police koh call kar pau ...he said with a sad face ...

Koi fayda nahi ab aisa masoom chehra banake ...Suno Ghar jaldi pahuchna ...

Haa beech sadak par chod ke jaa rahi ho ...aur ghar jaldi pahuchna ...accha hai ...Miss Quereshi

Haa ...parso Mami ka birthday hai na ...kal bahut tayari karn hai ...

Toh mai kya karu ...he was irritated and angry ...

Tumhe meri help karni hai ...ghar par party hai parso ...sab kuch ready karna hai ...

Kya javab dogi apni mami koh jab who poochegi kaha hu mai ...kaha beech sadak par is sumsaan raat koh akela chod diya ...batau..

Bahana bana dungi she winked,

he thought she was getting calm...maybe he should still pursue her ...

He frowned ...Da ...please aane do na ...mai nahi chal sakta ...bahut door hai ghar ...sweetheart aane do na ...chahe toh peeche baith lunga ..please ...

She thought about it for two minutes ...he gave her the most melting smile ...she smiled back ...

Nahi ...aur haa taxi se aane ka sochna bhi mat ...kal milte hai ...khuda hafiz ...she closed the window and the car left leaving a cloud of dust trailing on his face ...

Zain hit a stone ...and realized he did need his legs to walk back ...

It was as Rhea had predicted ...the 20 kms walk was too much ...he was sweating ...panting the pain on his right side of the stomach suggested he had to start exercising again ...

He had stopped every 5 mins looking intently ahead to see if Rhea was waiting somewhere in the dark...but she had driven back home ...and he walked back to Barkat Villa

Many Taxis did stop by to ask if he needs a ride ...but he was so angry that he had declined ...careless thoughts of taking a taxi and paying the driver later never crossed his mind ...if this is what she wanted this is what he intended to do ...just follow ...irrespectively whatever insane the demands were.

The last few kms were almost unbearable for him ...almost limping he reached home...to see his car parked outside perfectly ...thank god atleast she had reached safely

He could barely drag his feet upstairs and the moment he reached in his room just crashed on the couch ...not wanting to move even an inch ...

Morning he was covered with a blanket ...and he knew she must have come to put it on him ...she had not slept ...her way of loving him was weird ...scary and crazy ...she was nowhere soft hearted as Aaliya would be

....Bereham ...he slowly renamed her and slept again ...

Nahi lauti woh ab tak ...

Intezaar karunga ...mai adhoora jane kab tak ...

SIM

Pre-cap: Angry Rhea and a hurt Zain ...what happens when Rhea realizes did she cross her limits 😉

Its amazing as usual Sim.don't know y but at the end a small tear just came😭 from my eye its difficult to imagine Zain's condition.hahaha good name Behreham Rhea n Besharam Zain.

Ohk am I mad or normal I don't know but yes I was smiling throughout the whole Convo zain and rhea. ..gosh I mean they are such cute couple and yes not to mention end main mujhe bura laga zain ke liya bechaara 20kms chala gosh I can't walk 3 and u made him walk 20 hmph

Originally posted by: katmaan

Ohk am I mad or normal I don't know but yes I was smiling throughout the whole Convo zain and rhea. ..gosh I mean they are such cute couple and yes not to mention end main mujhe bura laga zain ke liya bechaara 20kms chala gosh I can't walk 3 and u made him walk 20 hmph

Waiting for next part update soon soon

This is a true life incident
Walked 23 km 5 times for love but not a forced one , just to get wht the need was
So yes ppl do this , n it strange but it's a selfless act, an anonymous one
So zain did wht the author has seen being done
Crazy na ...
Will reply later off to bed
Sim

Oh GOD ! For me ? Oh this is so sweet , i love you you for this Sim ! This is the second Time you ddicated a chapter to me and it's always a Pleasure , no i don't have twitter Ammi Abu ko pasand nahi and i try to be a farmabardar beti ;p , coming to the chapter itni behermi Achi nahi Rhea Ji , i could feel his loneliness in the night What made me more fall in love with Zain in this update is that he could have tak en a taxi but he Still Walked , banda abhi bhi fit hai , my Poor Zain , but i am xcited to see Rhea manoying him , it seems pretty interesting ! Sim i Know the hard work and the Time you put in it but serionsly hats off to you having a child and a Busy schedule , i always comment coz i Know as a "writer" i don't think i can call myself that every comment matters and it always bring a big smile on my face ! Merci Sim for giving us this story and you deserve all the praise , smile always :D love you and the junior !

Saleha , your makhi ;)

Hey Sim!